from a filmmakers POV...it was alright. it felt like their were a lot of shots missing. i was a lost in the storyline & there was a lot of blue video=bad cameraperson. i think it has potential for a feature length concept if you can expand the storyline.
dis-liked the fade to black in the end. understandable that filming a child being killed is wrong, but you could of had a zoom out of the warehouse or a camera shoot of the killer shooting these free-minded thinkers. again, the choice was yours and if made you happy, thats good and should not be changed.
First off I wanna say great job on the film. The fact is that this film documents an all too real social trend that we should all pay more attention to. that said, Please check out my music and let me know if you ever need help with soundtrack music. there is a pretty nice video at my page called dreamz, starring me. Also check out: myspacedotcom/akwordstrange
sorry didn`t really like it to be honest. its the same concept as the film Equillbrium (i swpelt that wrong but you know the film i mean) Even the music was simailar. sorry:p
It's like a Biblical prediction of the End Times. Frightening! Teh Seventh Day Adventists used to make a lot of this stuff and point the finger at everyone from teh Catholic Church to the United States as the advocates of the 'Mark' or sign of the Devil.
It certainly works. A very moving film with dangerous ideas, competent editing, good performances from the actors, good camerawork. I've no doubt a professional filmmaker could offer a few suggestions, but a common viewer like me can see nothing to quibble with. Well done.
Loved it, just loved it. yeah, its gunna suck when this becomes our future, part of me wants it to be in my lifetime, part of me doesnt, but anyways, good job.
this was absolutley amazing <3
krysandem 1 year ago
Good storyline, reminds me a bit of the Left Behind series. I would watch it again!
ChaChaCha36 4 years ago
from a filmmakers POV...it was alright. it felt like their were a lot of shots missing. i was a lost in the storyline & there was a lot of blue video=bad cameraperson. i think it has potential for a feature length concept if you can expand the storyline.
bcw1119 4 years ago
dis-liked the fade to black in the end. understandable that filming a child being killed is wrong, but you could of had a zoom out of the warehouse or a camera shoot of the killer shooting these free-minded thinkers. again, the choice was yours and if made you happy, thats good and should not be changed.
Dazz187s 4 years ago
very moving, story wise, very grand. Easy to follow and the message is there, great job.
Dazz187s 4 years ago
First off I wanna say great job on the film. The fact is that this film documents an all too real social trend that we should all pay more attention to. that said, Please check out my music and let me know if you ever need help with soundtrack music. there is a pretty nice video at my page called dreamz, starring me. Also check out: myspacedotcom/akwordstrange
to hear my latest tracks. peace.
akwordstrange 4 years ago
sorry didn`t really like it to be honest. its the same concept as the film Equillbrium (i swpelt that wrong but you know the film i mean) Even the music was simailar. sorry:p
dogsbie 5 years ago
*rolls eyes* this is pseudo religious claptrap. Jesus Christian Zion Ben Jonah 'Survivor' hooey.
That's my feedback.
I found your book on the top of a bin in Leeds.
Paperlilies 5 years ago
It's like a Biblical prediction of the End Times. Frightening! Teh Seventh Day Adventists used to make a lot of this stuff and point the finger at everyone from teh Catholic Church to the United States as the advocates of the 'Mark' or sign of the Devil.
Gigolo8 5 years ago
It certainly works. A very moving film with dangerous ideas, competent editing, good performances from the actors, good camerawork. I've no doubt a professional filmmaker could offer a few suggestions, but a common viewer like me can see nothing to quibble with. Well done.
Urgelt 5 years ago
Posted on 9/11 :P
justin1290 5 years ago
Loved it, just loved it. yeah, its gunna suck when this becomes our future, part of me wants it to be in my lifetime, part of me doesnt, but anyways, good job.
Duuberman 5 years ago
Not sure about the use of Verdi, but otherwise well done.
chastash 5 years ago
Very powerful, a glimpse of the not so distant maybe.
Oct31Bear 5 years ago
Oh my, it started rather slow but OH MY GOD the end was tearful, very very well made... Wow...
tripplehelix 5 years ago
I agree. Very moving. Props to all involved, thank you.
katz20two 5 years ago
Chilling. Very much loved the ending. Wish the quality was a little better, but I know, it's YouTube. What was this made for?
UrbanCamoKitty 5 years ago
It is a film school assignment.
philipnewmannz 5 years ago
great story, well done!
adidassox 5 years ago
wow that was really good really powerful. stay free
silentmiah 5 years ago