I think that they could have been used in other places to great effect. I absolutely love the song from 2:51 to 4:00. It's a great sort of interlude and sounds like something Immi might have made herself. Although this portion could use a bit of tweaking as well. The bursts of... whatever they are that start at 4:00 are a bit too pronounced. Startling and out of place, but I like the sound as it's used a bit later. I assume everything after 4:50 was just you playing around? :P Great work overall
I also appreciated that you didn't go straight into the first verse, I felt like there should be some sort of intro or buildup into that, and you did that here. The strings that start at 1:53 seem fabricated and fake, and it's probably due to the program you were using, although I feel like that if they had been made a bit more subdued and layered that that could have worked. The outbursts of "Daaaaa" or whatever that start at 2:14 seem inappropriate, but... see next comment...
I feel like this was a big collection of random sounds. If you ever heard of the video game Katamari Damacy: I feel like if this song was rolled up into a ball, and you stood inside it and listened to different parts within it, you would hear this sort of thing. I liked some parts like the "ba ba ba" in the background at the start, I thought the odd digitized squealing that begins shortly afterward to be a bit much. I think it could have worked though if it was tweaked a bit. See next comment.
I think that they could have been used in other places to great effect. I absolutely love the song from 2:51 to 4:00. It's a great sort of interlude and sounds like something Immi might have made herself. Although this portion could use a bit of tweaking as well. The bursts of... whatever they are that start at 4:00 are a bit too pronounced. Startling and out of place, but I like the sound as it's used a bit later. I assume everything after 4:50 was just you playing around? :P Great work overall
sunmarsh 2 years ago
I also appreciated that you didn't go straight into the first verse, I felt like there should be some sort of intro or buildup into that, and you did that here. The strings that start at 1:53 seem fabricated and fake, and it's probably due to the program you were using, although I feel like that if they had been made a bit more subdued and layered that that could have worked. The outbursts of "Daaaaa" or whatever that start at 2:14 seem inappropriate, but... see next comment...
sunmarsh 2 years ago
I feel like this was a big collection of random sounds. If you ever heard of the video game Katamari Damacy: I feel like if this song was rolled up into a ball, and you stood inside it and listened to different parts within it, you would hear this sort of thing. I liked some parts like the "ba ba ba" in the background at the start, I thought the odd digitized squealing that begins shortly afterward to be a bit much. I think it could have worked though if it was tweaked a bit. See next comment.
sunmarsh 2 years ago
Please know that while listening Youtube completely ruins the quality, I'll have a megaupload link soon for download.
XshattereddreeamsX 2 years ago