yeah, it does test patience a lot. You should try to cut it down to two minutes or try to make the shots go by a little quicker. Seemed like a lot of good ideas. I would steady the camera a little more on the pans and dollies. Very good rough, though.
Nice tricks. Some ideas better than others. I would remove the birds, and the wedding dance looks weird, but not melancolic, which is what the song needs. Anyway, very nice.
The wedding was kept because I liked how surreal it felt, but ya I see what you mean...I have more to add now these days so some of the longer shots won't linger as much and test patience - thanks for the comment.
genuinely very interesting, good work my man
rcos1 2 years ago
thanks really appreciate the feedback
vervor 3 years ago
yeah, it does test patience a lot. You should try to cut it down to two minutes or try to make the shots go by a little quicker. Seemed like a lot of good ideas. I would steady the camera a little more on the pans and dollies. Very good rough, though.
meheh 3 years ago
this is very good
juanlv192 4 years ago
Nice tricks. Some ideas better than others. I would remove the birds, and the wedding dance looks weird, but not melancolic, which is what the song needs. Anyway, very nice.
Risingson2 5 years ago
The wedding was kept because I liked how surreal it felt, but ya I see what you mean...I have more to add now these days so some of the longer shots won't linger as much and test patience - thanks for the comment.
vervor 5 years ago
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lindsaylohansucks 5 years ago