I was not expecting those suggestions -- I thought you'd might want to change the breakdown that comes before the breakdown you want to insert. I'm not opposed to any of your suggestions here. As for the falsetto stuff, jim's vocals will add a high part. do I just sound bad in that range or what? too grunge? laying it on too thick? WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME TRAVIS
man, yeah, I keep seeing/hearing where you and travis would be making all these new songs so much better/complete. if we don't road trip, I could bring the electric, there's the keyboard amp that can plug in multiple instruments, and hopefully we'll have access to some keyboard, or I could try to bring it. miss you man!!!
This is your best work yet.
Suggestions:
- At 1:08, go for a lower vocal note as a contrast to the high note which was already used at 1:00
- At 2:35, go into a legit breakdown, change the strumming pattern and make it really mellow for a bit
- Maybe some falsetto for the ooohs and aaaahs
OlSpazzy 2 years ago
I was not expecting those suggestions -- I thought you'd might want to change the breakdown that comes before the breakdown you want to insert. I'm not opposed to any of your suggestions here. As for the falsetto stuff, jim's vocals will add a high part. do I just sound bad in that range or what? too grunge? laying it on too thick? WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME TRAVIS
kafkadoodle 2 years ago
lol it sounds decent as is, it could just be spiced up a bit is all.
OlSpazzy 2 years ago
thank you, sir or madam :)
kafkadoodle 2 years ago
This is great man. Super-earnest vocals, unfettered lyrics, and non-offensive guitar skills combine to form an indie rock gem.
openingwonder 2 years ago
man, yeah, I keep seeing/hearing where you and travis would be making all these new songs so much better/complete. if we don't road trip, I could bring the electric, there's the keyboard amp that can plug in multiple instruments, and hopefully we'll have access to some keyboard, or I could try to bring it. miss you man!!!
kafkadoodle 2 years ago
Damn Dude - GREAT JOB!
I'm itching to play along side you as soon as you get back!!!!!!
MeHateNames 2 years ago