can someone explain to me how you make so many spelling errors in one sentence? i wonder what my english teacher would say if i showed these fanfics to her...
How does anybody manage to write such trash? I don't understand this. What really confuses me is all of the horrible and pathetic spelling mistakes. How does one manage so many in such a short amount of space?
Holy. Fuck. "I want to be his boyfriend." What's with the gender change? O.O At least it's so atrocious it's kind of funny.
liebeistschonxD 1 year ago
"Fat men is always in my head now"
I fucking lolled.
illusion0delusion 1 year ago
This seems like a troll to me. Someone who read Tara Gillespie or Twila and thought, "Me, too!"
aNGLICANcHOIR92 2 years ago
What's sad is she actually spells the way it's being read.
musicgrl492 2 years ago
I love the voice you use in the beginning. Oh, and the "exohexohexoh!" That was great. Who actually does that in author's notes?
OMG LUV U GUIZ XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOOZZZ!
PyroEnchantress 2 years ago
Mwah? Does this girl like Miss Piggy...her appearance resembles that of the famous pig Muppet.
ForgottenTennyo 2 years ago
@ForgottenTennyo I should also add that the main character said that she wanted to be his boyfriend, which means that it must be a transvestite.
ForgottenTennyo 2 years ago
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Oh goodness, I think my ears are bleeding. O.O
Furrylove100 2 years ago
lolwut? O_O
Lolichan15 2 years ago
Can someone say, boatload of author intrusion? My inner novelist wants to curl up in a ball and cry until the cows come home.
leatherham 2 years ago
can someone explain to me how you make so many spelling errors in one sentence? i wonder what my english teacher would say if i showed these fanfics to her...
TwilightSucks1029 2 years ago
By being a moron? >.>
ZaxfromTSdC 2 years ago
only explanation: she's retarded.
WriterfromNowhere 2 years ago
no wonder fanfic deleted it... LOL you rock zax! keep it up!
TwilightSucks1029 2 years ago 2
Wow, this story is epic fail. The video on the other hand is hilarious. XD
Sorakeyblademaster37 2 years ago
"not god God because I luv god and thats blamsphemi, so fuc off sinars" LAWL
She sounds like the Christian version of Ebony/Enoby.
JLynneh 2 years ago 9
Christian Sue may be more annoying that Goffik Sue. O_O
MarsRepepsi 2 years ago 5
Well then. That was...interesting? Yeah, let's go with that one.
wolfjackle 2 years ago
Zax...I love you for this....XD
DragonEmperorMycen 2 years ago 4
But remember children, only forgive the "sexah" ones -_-
GibsonDreamer 2 years ago 4
did she just wrote, "I want to be his boyfriend." ...? ...
DuckyStar 2 years ago 5
This kinda reminds me of Lady of Sorrow by gerardwaycullen
JellyDehli 2 years ago
Who are you and why are you on my desk?
JellyDehli 2 years ago
The best thing about this story is the fact that it's clear the author attempted to copy Meyer's writing style.
Meyer's prose = HORRIBLE
Twitard attempting to write Meyer's prose = DEADLY!!
Gr33nkiwi 2 years ago
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It's a sin to be a whore.
Shadowdancer21b 2 years ago
Wow, this one might be better than Twila. I love how she uses the ever descriptive phrase, "and such," for her prose, lol...
AsajjVentress 2 years ago
Wow! A Sue that isn't goth! Oh my god, I think this is a first.
Necury 2 years ago 3
Not goth. "Christian". XD
ZaxfromTSdC 2 years ago
How does anybody manage to write such trash? I don't understand this. What really confuses me is all of the horrible and pathetic spelling mistakes. How does one manage so many in such a short amount of space?
It's pathetic, but mildly amusing.
inkenyo 2 years ago
She wasn't paying attention to the material in that English class. She was looking at the "sexah" guy instead.
AttheCircus 2 years ago
lol. The unfortunate thing is that a lot of teenagers do that now... no wonder most of the kids in my classes no longer know how to speak properly.
inkenyo 2 years ago
I lol'd at the "xoxoxo" part (and of course, the rest of it as well, but that part was...er...cute?)
xXxDiruDezxXx 2 years ago
I just, I felt part of me die just listening to that....
TiltingatWindmillz 2 years ago
Wow.
I really hope that these badfics are actually written by someone intelligent with a twisted sense of humor and not actually by a twihard.
Then I come to the sad realization that it may actually be what it seems.
*sigh*
KeishiRein 2 years ago 4
While most badfics are written by trolls, this one appears to be a true-blue twitard.
ZaxfromTSdC 2 years ago
Amen to that.
PyroEnchantress 2 years ago
i just got a nose bleed...out of sheer stupidity. O__o
abridgedfan107 2 years ago 3
This is great,
no, not the story, the story is trash, XD
I don't get how people can write like that and not see that people can't understand what they;re trying to say, ahah
retardzz123 2 years ago
You're awesome!
Phoenixangelgal 2 years ago
The monumental stupidity is mindblowing. I felt a holocaust of braincells. Ow.
illusion0delusion 2 years ago 3
I love the fact that almost all Twitards HATE Bella.
Gr33nkiwi 2 years ago 4
They're jealous...
Really they are, though they don't have much to be jealous of, Bella's character is as worthless as the paper she's written on.
Silly Twihards :P
illusion0delusion 2 years ago 3
"tunles ur Mary Magdalin, but shes daed anyway."
"He is so hot and I dcide want to be his boyfriend."
What...the...fuck.
vicustwiddlesworth 2 years ago 9
Exactly. D:
ZaxfromTSdC 2 years ago
fat man = Jensen Ackles?? XD
xmyxaccountx 2 years ago 3