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  • Looks like it has potential, I'd say focus more on making it a serious series rather than comedic.

  • im sorry but... WHAT THE FUCK!

  • I'm tired of people constantly flaming these trailers. This looks to be really good.

  • whats up with the voice? It sounds like a guy using voice masking...>_>

  • you know this seems more like an episode then a trailer you should have mede it episode 1 instead of a trailer

  • the trailer needs to be shorter

  • well the worst example of serious machinima...

    they run around like there doing a normal matchmaking game

  • The voice is sort of hard to understand

  • gay

  • needs more big battle scenes

  • Looks gay.

  • this trailer is boring

  • Too... much... text... o_o

    Make trailer scripts shorter. If you can't fit it all in, just make two.

  • boring

  • fuckin gay

    horrible.

    especially the beginning.. wtf was with the zooming at nothing

  • Hey Scott, it's Evan.

    Work on the voiceovers, because that voice was a bit too deep and it was unclear what it was saying. Also, you guys need to work on making your movements more cinematic, seeing as how you strafed and ran around a lot (which IMO, made it look like your characters were spazzes; even in the TANKS you moved around a lot). When it comes to battles, try working on battle forms and such, it'll make it more... "army-like."

    Plus, not quite sure how you'll incorporate comedy.

  • WOW... I read that to find out how much of a fraud it is and wow..... NO BODY DO THIS ITS A SCAM FOR YOUR ACCOUNT!!!!

  • FIRST!

  • it looks really good but...

    wheres the comedy?

    but still none the less

    GREAT.

    im lookin forward to it!

  • the comedy is in the series not the trailer

  • i get it, sort of like bfbc, the trailer sounds serious and hardcore, but it's actually a spoof. COOL

  • did not like it much.

  • f#ckin awesome looking hopefully a new good series machinimas been alittle cough bad lately

  • looks ok....but i will keep an eye on it...and i couldnt rly understand every thing the guy was saying. but hope to see the series ;D

  • Lol whats this about?

  • u said that it was a comedy?

  • very nice

  • looks and sounds intresting

    i shall keep an eye on this series.

  • If its as good as the trailer then you will do fine.

    Most "Dramatic" machinimas fail this one looks good though,good luck

  • that quote at the beginning looks like a quote from the first Hellboy, judging how i watched it last night

  • not bad but i couldnt understand/ hear the names of the 2 factions

  • great 5 star

  • looks sweet nice job ima keep my eyes on this series

  • that was just stupid.

  • this is really good... there are a few things wrong but nothing you cant fix with time... Continue making the series it should turn out great!

  • soz my bad no u didnt! :)

  • looks interesting, but still it was a bit wordy, and that background music was so annoying. Oh and btw you spelt anonymous wrong at the start.

  • Seeeeems deeeep

  • im keep my eye on this

  • looked awsome cant wait 5-5

  • more of a drama then comedy is wat it seems like... but still very good. cant wait to see it

  • yo good luck guys... this is ather going to rock or suck shit... hope its the first one

  • Lol that's not really much of a trailer if its 7 minutes long.

  • looking forward to the series great job 5\5

  • Awesome trailer, though it's giving me a drama vibe, more than a comedy vibe.

  • Very well done, just a tip: Like DigitalPh33r said "don't the battle scenes look too much like actual gameplay."

  • looks good

    but its more of a intro and not a trailer

  • this will be a good series, and I hope someone looks into it cause this would be a good plot to a game :)

  • love the trailer but it was a bit long

  • This was very nicely done! 5/5

  • it looks good but its a long trailer

  • i lke it maby u could make it shorter but nonetheless i would reallllllllllllly like to see it be revealled

  • too long for a trailer and is kinda boring and bad

  • bit long for just a trailer

  • it was pretty good for your first but all the zooming in in the beginning hurt my eyes

  • gr8 trailer, but it drags on for a bit. try and keep it short (it was more like a prolouge episode)btw, how is that gonna tell peiople its a comedy? there was no funnyness in that trailer what-so-ever, so just stick to the serious drama part. Lookin 4ward to the series.

    Btw, just ignore the idiots who say its crap. their just sayin that cos its long.

  • like u guys could do better

  • hey just chill it may have dragged i understood it very clearly

    it was his first attempt at machinima

  • niiice

  • Dude, that was F***ing awesome.

  • Shows to MUCH of the and and is to long.

  • Oh yea the music you will like will automatically make this vid better even if it doesn't suit the video.

  • this shit drags way to much

  • I like this, some people are just too lazy to look for good stuff but you did a great job for a trailer. But the problem with trailers is that they are supposed to just get in their and say what you are planning on doing...7mins is too long for a trailer bro, but i liked it nonetheless.

  • I CANT FUCKING UNDERSTAND THIS SHIT

  • The storytelling was poor, and this so far seems nothing like a comedy.

  • it's a fuckin trailer...it's not supposed to be funny

  • You could make the voice more clear, because I can't really hear what you're saying. Oh well, I pretty much like this machinimated trailer. Keep up.

  • wow you cant even understand what this guy is saying.

  • Holy shit, this is a fucking trailer?! 7 minutes long is almost a decent episode length. And, it def. seems nothing like a comedy nor a drama. And the music got plain, the guy's voice over got fucking annoying, and it DRAGGED ON! Sorry, but I'm just giving you my honest feedback.

  • really nice story line and the person telling the story is good at it. could inprove filming though like take their shields and grenades off them for when they die to make it look more realistic. but otherwise nice

  • yeah digital ph33r owns lol

  • trailers are supposed to be short? and this seems a bit... i duno..boring?

  • This might as well to be a Poilet not a trailer

  • COOOOLLLL!!1 I like the dramatic voice!!!1

  • Trailers arent fucking this long man fix it up its all mumbling and guys shooting.. noone will watch it if they watched this trailer 'S

  • doesn't look half bad.

  • for a first attempt it isn't tht bad.there are quite a few ways you could improve it but yea it's quite good.

  • looks good. Hope to see the next few installments.

  • This series has potential, and I can't wait to see what you can pull out of it.

  • its prolly gonna be worth watching imo, the idea seems pretty funny

  • looks like a nice machinima

  • another generic halo series that will have 2 episodes then never seen again...sigh

  • POOP!

  • I suggest using alot of people for these types of films to add more of a real battle effect

  • Looks like a really good series. Can't wait!

  • I agree with Jlam14 nobody cares so get a fucking life

  • when you said this was mostly comedy, you totally lied. that was not funny whatsoever

  • ass wipe this ain't an actually episode its a trailer learn to read

  • i totaly agree

  • ....well, since this was your first attempt..

    no offense, but it wasnt very good. Sorry.

  • wow u prolly get a boner everytime u do this rite

  • I really like the camera angles you chose also it looks like a really good series congratz

  • work on the font. everything else is great

  • Nice, although the Narrator should go see a doctor, his voice sounds so weird.

  • this is good, i cant wait! but i thing when it said defective, you could have left out the "!".

  • Kewl (:

  • this is absolutly brilliant. i find it amoung the ranks of deus ex machina by digital ph33r.

  • i am very intreged oO

  • i want to see this...and good job on ur first attempt at machinima

  • The series looks awesome, the ending titles were stupid, though, lol

    You shoulda put subtitles for the deep narrator voice cuz sometimes i couldnt understand him

  • very interesting. The plot is good, the only thing wrong was the execution, just a little polish and its pure machinima gold

  • lol that is one sweet trailer

  • looks good, but keep it serious. it sounds good if it is serious

  • first comment too! and why is the trailer 7 mins????? lolol but it looks ok

  • Lol...the Trailer lasted 7mins...

  • yeah, work on the battle scenes and id recomend trying to keep the series serious, it wouldnt be as good as i comedy.

  • warshawdow you are all like it looks like a gameplay of couse its halo dummmm

  • Good for a first attempt

  • could hav been made shorter but not bad

  • haha it looks awsome cant wait 4 it 2 come out

  • Looks awesome, but the battle scenes look more like gameplay!

  • a great first job but you needed better camera angles at some point and shorten the video some.

    p.s. don't flame me its just constructive criticism

  • FIRSTAAAAAZZZ!!!! OMFG¬!!!!!!

  • i really like it i think it looks intreseting that people keep comouing up with sweet idea i hope that the realy one is swet and i will be staying in tuned so see what happends cause this look very good for my standards.

  • Ok, First of all, that was only the trailer, so we don't know much about it yet, so for all you know it could be loaded with comedy, the trailer was just the history. Second of all, That was a defective trailer, the first attempt at machinima for him, but I guess he thought it sucked, so he never uploaded it, but now he has for some reason we don't know. Adding on to that, it was also defective, adding to the reason why u cocksuckers who are complaing shout shut the fuck up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • wow ur dumb

    Its called defective trailer cus the series is going to be called defective cus the genetically enhanced soldiers are defective. Not cus the trailer is bad. Don't try act smart when ur clearly not.

  • Wow, rofl i just got that. But you don't have to be mean about it. Bitch. Mother fucker asshole. Rofl.

  • Looks great.

  • this video kinda made me wanna kill people. i guess thatll make some people laugh.

  • Looks very cool, I will watch it for sure.

  • hmm great camera work and storyline although you may want to use alternate sound effects and more tactical battle sequences the side to side movement resembles the game too much other then that I'd say you have a good series

  • awesome trailer, i hope that it is more drama than comedy, could use something new.

  • im feelin this...im guessin since they are defective they may b a little special...ED... hopin thats wuts makes the comedy...

  • this seems like it will be a good machinima

  • and your not even first dipshit

  • And you're not even spelling right, dipshit.

  • me? how so? point out all the words i misspelled...unless your talkint to that other guy...

  • mispelled talking brandon

  • It was cool and everything, but when I first heard the voice, it scared me. :[

  • it looks good but there was one thing that annoyed me. it says a comedy/drama, but there was no comedy in the trailer. isnt the trailer merant to deliver what its going to be like? but ill still watch

  • looks good!

  • cool

  • Not bad for your first video...though, I'd have to agree with most people...this seems more of a serious series than a comedy. But all-in-all, nice storyline. It defenitely has potential.

  • great trailer! it sounds like we are going to finally get a great serious movie (for halo of course, and not counting digitalph33rs stuff) what i like about this is it looks like you actually decided to put a plot into this.

  • WRONG.

  • yea, digitalph33r was right when he said SERIOUS MACHINIMAS SUCK. (i know he didn't say exactly that, but it was to that meaning and pretty close)

  • This vids pretty good, i've seen better from machinima, but this still is good, btw, for ny1 who cares and does'nt know yet, wow patch 2.4.3 does have reg mounts at lvl 30, training is 35 gold i forget what the mount is.

  • not only was this retarded, not funny, and a waste of my time, the narrator sounds like a dipshit, whom is too lazy to pronounce the ending syllables of everyhting he is saying. i give this a fail out of 5.

  • It's comedy AND DRAMA!!!it's not supposed to be like friggin' arby n' the chief! once again, it's not his real voice, so calm down...he's pronouncing his words just fine, i don't see how you came up with the bullshit excuse "Whom is to lazy to pronounce the ending syllables of everything he is saying"(and learn to spell. "Everything" is not a hard word to spell)

  • Fuck you. You haven't got a clue what you're talking about. Grow the fuck up.

  • okay shirlock, please be so kind as to explain why my mind is being baffled by my own words?please, explain why i don't have a clue about what i'm talking about, and please don't tell me to "grow up", i am, everyone is. everyone ages, and therefore "grows up"

  • No, this video sucks. And come on, is it that hard to capitalize the first word of your sentences? That's like first grade man.

  • oh my god! it is in fact! my shift key was abducted by a shift key rapist and its gone! now before you pull that bullSHIT on me, look at your own first comment, dumbshit. your own words aren't even capitalized...oh my god! a crime you have pulled! look, i really don't care to reach over and press the shift key, okay? and apparently, neither do you...until you needed a comeback...

  • wow. Bravo. Clap Clap. You are really that dumb. Don't worry, little brandon, one day you will understand the wonderful world of sarcasm, then maybe we will all be freed from suffering your stupidity. i thinks you grammor is a really not good, and you ned to realy learn howe to spaek englesh bettar.

  • if you can speak english so well, then point out my grammatical errors! i have an accent, and use it in typing, im frow texas, WOW! yes, i use the words "Ya'll" and sentences like "look at your own first comment". But, i can't help it, i grew up with the accent, and it WON'T change. WOW you're the true fool here little andrew, im no idiot, OBVIOUSLY it was sarcasm, and apparently, you couldn't tel that i was using his words against him...one day litte andrew, one day...you'll understand...

  • accually if u go to like britan for a while u start speacking like them i now speak like them

  • lol, i've been watching a bunch of videos with people with a bit of a british accent, i myself have picked up thier grammar, but not the accent, but i have still have my current "Texan" accent. But, thats funny. Maybe i can go to Australia and pick up thier accent XD

  • ...wow. I thought eventually you would get it, but no luck so far. Ok, i see im fighting a losing battle, here, trying to to talk sense with a retard. (your talking directly to me, yet you refer to me as 'him'?PHAIL) I'll make this easy- why don't u go put on your safety helmet and go play with your ball, and maybe you'll get hit by a car and be put out of your misery.

  • :O oh my god! so your telling me that you can't read properly? if you would look back, when i said his, i was reffering to yauchomi not you, and he doesn't appear to be in the conversation, so saying "his" would be proper. You do realize that your proving your own mental disorder? "PHAIL?" try spelling it out with me, F-A-I-L! so now your having to stoop down to discrimination to make a comeback? for shame, Andrew, for shame.

  • O rly? i misspelled the word fail? My bad!!! I GUESS U GOT ME!!!! DUR.

    sir, i really have to hand it to you(and i like any blind prostitute, i know you love having it handed to you).

    You are, by far, the dumbest person on youtube i have ever seen. Its like someone is holding a big sign up in your face, but you just can't read it, so just keep coming back with your lame ass remarks. Well, i've filled my qouta of annoying morons for the year, so i bid you good day. Please drop dead.

  • oh yes, my remarks are smart-ass. well you know what fuckwad? so are yours, so you have no room to talk, and your comebacks in your previous comment have absolutely NOTHING to do with this "argument"...where the hell does a blind prostitute come into the conversation? as well as me being the dumbest person on youtube? your metaphor makes no sense whatsoever. how is a stupid person similar having a sign in a face and not being able to read it?

  • thats a metaphor for something like a kid goes in a death pit loaded with spikes and deadly snakes covering the bottom without caution. your english is horrible -"and i like any blind prostitute, i know you love having it handed to you"- what the hell does that mean? and i like any blind prostitute?

    and, your English is even worse at the end! the most retarded(reminds me of you)oxymoron is placed at the end of your comment..."i bid you good day. please drop dead" if your going to fight with me

  • choose words that will make sense...have a horrible day, and i hope your boyfriend dumps you for your mom

  • i told myself i wouldn't comment but i can't resist. Ok last one.

    You are the dumbest person on youtube because your the only one here who can't understand sarcasm. Next, "hand it to you" is a sex reference, albeit dumb(don't worry, you'll understand when your older). Finally, you can't SEE where the blind prostitute comes in- BECAUSE YOU ARE THE BLIND PROSTITUTE!Your probably going to just spit back at me what i said, while trying to make it sound stupid, but no my poor friend, your just dumb.

  • Wheres the comedy...?

  • it isnt a comedy R-tard

  • Shows what you know. It says "comedy/drama" in the description.

    Try reading before you comment the video, idiot.

  • read the description R-tard

  • as far as you know... :O

  • You're the fucking retard. It says comedy in the description. Learn to fucking read.

    Cunt.

  • umm...how am i retarded, and what does what you just said have anything to do with what i said?

  • Thank you, am i the only one here who notices that this looks LAME, BORING, AWKWARD, and SHITTY. This guy's voice alone makes me want to rip out his voicebox and put in a new one, maybe give him some hot soup and cold medicine. This sucked, please don't make any more. Especially the bullshit music which was endlessly looped, and the lame ass story.

  • 1. thats abviously not his real voice, so don't bitch about it...

    2. this is only the trailer, so you wouldn't know if the series would suck.

    3. sure, the music was endlessly looped, but who cares, the music only adds a feeling of drama, it's not the ENTIRE thing...

    4. the story isn't lame, it looks very interesting, and if you think it's lame, thats because you lack taste in videos, and obviously the only thing you would care about in your inferior mind, is stupid, perpetuous 5th grade humor

  • You fucking cunt. You're a clever boy aren't you? Dickhead.

  • who the hell are you and why the fuck are you starting an argument with me? pricks like you shouldn't be allowed to comment on youtube...and besides, your calling me a dickhead, when you pop up out of nowhere and start making fights?all i was doing was telling him was my opinion...and if he was going to use profane language, then shall I.

    and thanks for the compliment, i'm quite clever for my age.

  • 1. I KNOW ITS NOT HIS REAL VOICE- THAT DOESNT MEAN IT DOESNT SUCK. THE ONLY THING COMEDIC HERE WAS THAT AT FIRST, I THOUGHT HIS VOICE WAS MEANT TO BE FUNNY- SADLY, IT WAS NOT.

    2. yes, i would

    3. The Music was a FUCKING LAME attempt at drama, it sucked balls

    4. IF YOU CALL 4 VIDEOGAME CHARACTERS FALLING DEAD WITH THE SAME EXACT GROAN 'INTERESTING' I SUGGEST YOU KILL YOURSELF. THIS WAS NOT FUNNY, DRAMATIC, CLEVER, CUTE, OR ANY POSITIVE ADJECTIVE YOU CAN THINK OF.

  • if you hated it so much, why did you continue to watch it?

  • well when you start with positive expectations for something, you tend to want to see it through, even if you don't like them. Plus, if im going to complain about it, i have to know what im talking about.

  • then why not complain at all?

  • because there is the infinte pleasure of pissing of idiots like you =)

  • actually im not pissed, and obviously you were to complain with such profane language. if i were pissed, i would not have talked at all, i'm just sharing my opinion to you about how i find the preview good.