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  • yo times are hard, broke ass fuck no job,no car, blazing on a blunt gazing at the starz,i dont worry about shit jus keep popin bars,live for today cause tomorrows to far, i could die jus like lamar, wishing i could stop my baby momma from bitching, its ok keep on tripin, im to gone im sliping.......hahahha fuck you hoe !!!!!lmao adios

  • i'm going to use in a song!

  • give a damn?I give as much damn as God does when I stub my toe/hurts like when i listen to a weak flow/ya shit is old like That 70's Show/dont try steppin up to the big boys when you're barely a rapper cuz i cant really call you a foe/by now you should know/that im too fuckin deadly, like a tornado

  • I never thougt you were gonna be th one, the one that left me behinde with his crying soul

    Inever thougt you was gonna be the one that left me bleeding and crying on the bathroom floor

    i never thougt you was gonna be the one that made me feel heartbroken and teard up inside

    i never thought you were gonna be the one starin on me with the devils eyes

    and when you look at me while im crying it tears me apart cause

    i never thought that, you was gonna take my, soul and leave me behinde crying alone

  • " Something We All Ador, Something Worth FIghting For. Nothing but pain, Stuck In this game , Searching for Fortune & Fame. "

  • nice beat to beatboxing dude ;)

  • don't matter my grammer fuck standards rich or less advancer in the end all our questions have the same answer so embrace every moment of life's gift grip it with a type grasp cause you may drift from whats real or fake learn from your mistakes self destructive habit in a breath we take sealed fate gone and now missed but life goes on just another "sad song" from a kid that never belonged shoulda been me that day my time i guess jus got prolonged this is why i clear bongs
  • @beond760side lol @ the ending

  • this is basically the hip-hop version of "sunburn" by muse

  • Damnnnn beautyful!!!

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  • damn you've got some nice beats, but why do you always sample, why don't you create something on your own?

    subscribed!

  • Destroy the insane /Explode the crazy train /And Gain /The Vain /Cause This Stuff Is Lame /But im trained /To expect pain /Never obtained /But always Blamed /Wanna Clue? /Im waiting for you /Its true /Alone in the dark /Waiting for somthing new /Nothing to do /But Miss You /If only I Knew /That The heart You had was blue
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  • such a sick beat

  • phat beat with that Muse sample good job

  • Hey ... I wanna release a mixtape.. can i use tis for a sick melody? mesage me

    peace bro'!

  • a sick beat like this needs no words!!

  • best beat out of all the others (my opinion) best ever made..and also beat 42 nd 46

  • i love every thing aboutthe beat..espacially the bass its like weird (in a good way)

  • Hey man, i got a song that goes perfectly with this beat. I would really like to use it. Think you can send me the HQ? Check out some of my vids for my songs...

  • ye ye sketchy sounds jst right

  • amazing man its great

  • can i use some of your beats? i really like your style,

    I will send you a link of the result.

  • aye i want this beat can you message me a download link ?

  • i think i love this beat...FUCK!!!! :D:D:D

  • The timing is a bit off

  • im at 0:14 and love the intro - had to start off by sayin that

  • man heard this for long time ago, tryed to find it, and finaly i could :)

  • I luv dis beat its sick!

  • Amazing Check out mine too !! /watch?v=bd8jxrj3xDg

  • ok this the way i persuade a phase

    in life never need so i feed it the grave

    burried with a shovel

    never thought i needed tombs

    rain pours in a puddle

    while wolfs in full moon

  • give me this beat toooo homie ok?

  • -Hey, I made a mistake.. And no it can't wait, Cause what I do, it's what u hate.

    -When I look at u I see tears assuming u

    -It's what I do to u, whenever we meet So now, listen and take a seat.

    -I'm sorry for what I brought us into This is the mistakes that I can't slip through

    -I've given up, So this is where we break up

  • Hey, I made a mistake..

    And I know that you can't take

    The things I do to, that's what u hate.

    Something like that ye..

  • Nobody know me , ima a smoke around the city over you

    Nobody know me , ima a animal who you wanna stay out the house

    Nobody know me , They dont know what is fell this

    Nobody know me , nobody know me

  • its like a Ghost

    You cant see but you can fell

    But fells like invisible is a fuckin worst

    I need up in my life

  • See what i gonna do and lock

    Its like lose yourself

    You can do whatever you set on your mind

    I wanna this

    but have people who wanna fuck up my life

    turn him in a hell

    I need stay alive

    before the shots hit me

    Im down and my mother cry

  • HEY i make the continuation for the OfficialDJRelaxd heheh

  • theres burning in my pride a bleeding in my brain why did i ever think i needed this fame? this is lame for the terrible choice i made i wish i could go back and start over again i woulda nver done that to you i i hadnt abused all that booze im sorry im sorry please forgive wait fuck that-- im aint a little kid i can make desicions that are roight but also ones are worng maybe its time to just turn off this song
  • sick fuckin beat- this beat really gets to me man- check out my song i made to this on my page- keep it up nm

  • lisn my misson is to look for you a big ass kitcen with a couple kids so we can have a happy livin but who am i kiddin we all kno that all bullshitin that why when love leave us we dont miss it

  • - The faked smile is a reason to hide my pain

    - It burns inside like my heart is touching a Flame

    - So many Times we broke up, but we found Back

    - That was the last time, I promise i dont Phoneback

    - Is that a tear that you cry or is that again a sign that you lie

    - to stuck it in my Mind, like you Stole my Heart

    - and broke it in parts , why so Cold so Dark

    - You my Love in the Darkness

    - and What am asked is why you so Heartless

  • - Dont you feel, what i felt for you

    - Do you forget, what did for you

    - Do you forget, I gave you my soul

    - Allbecause I tought you the Girl i want.

    - what you Not & what u dont be

    - All because u dont see that u make me change

    - All Because i dont understood why u changed

  • the sun rises n my body is itchin double the does steal my fathers prescriptions i hate and i battle maniac addictions but the urge to perc up just keeps persisting worked up from a drug created a prison blood red and violet created a crimson my love and hate watch my eyes as they glisten watch death approach satan has risen pile it up layin it back sayin the facts throw my head back swallow um down stuck to the ground slowly my eyes turn black
  • nice to short though love the underground SOUND!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Can you understand? as you walk through this mirror land? who you are and what i am? i show you swiftly sitting/ sadistically knitting/ your life letting/ you understand its strife mixing/ as you start tripping/ because unlike you I understand/ what I am/ what I can/ who I am man/ I do give a damn/
  • never the same hand/

    but always touching the same heart/

    i take flavor in my art/

    and pleasure as i part/

    ways with blunt carts/

    understanding the smart/

    absorbing the heat/

    around me always fueling beats through me/

    always seeding lust to me/

    they all love yet hate me/

  • dont you see the fundamental anarchy/ raining down upon me mystery/ sifting through swiftly and sacrilegiously/ living sacrificially/ through this reality/ fantasies in my mind mentality/ mentally and challengingly/ accepting energy through synergies/ living this/ thinking this/ sinking in it blinking through this/ ignorance is bliss/ but arrogance is a death kiss/ but i see ive always saw/
  • i took it the raw/

    material a serial claw/

    smack bottom to death/

    and thats what they said..

    we take till aint nothin left/

    so now do you see?

    now do you understand?

    this reality?

    this mirror land?

  • sharing cryptically/

    critical registry dissipates like sand/

    it irritates the core of this chemistry/

    a blurry ideal chronically/

    curing faster than it heals magically/

    i send forces through/

    high winds mechanically to slew/

    any who compliantly with wingless/

    attempt willingly descend through endless/

    infinity crazily mounting bionically/

  • grounding infused engineering splitting/

    and fixing a fictionally thought player/

    sticking on ideals to flavor biologically/

    a layer bickering loudly and hastily/

    creeping through high rotary clouds/

    south of down mounds no sound quickly/

    escaping endlessly/

    but wishing forever eternally safe crowd.

  • @funnypop awesome rhyme !! xD it's sick! love it.

  • Lets see how this works,nah fuckit were over/

    Everytime we talk its like u never grow older/

    Your so immature, n i hate u for that/

    U always wana fight but i cant take that crap/

    I just want to be the one that causes your decease/

    Cause Im the one containing pain that needs to be released/

    I thought we were a perfect couple ever since the start of it/

    But i never seen you as the bitch that desired an argument/

    And u promised u would always be a friend to me/

    but now wat are we? WORST ENEMIES!/

  • keep doin ur thing

    big tune

  • yo im depressed, i need more cess, im all grown up, i've flown from the nest, yo i'm about to leave my past behind, and everything on which i used to rely, im all on my own with loads of mad loans, but filled with ambitions and even bigger goals, yo fuck the hard times and fuck the wives, fuck bitches, fuck snitches, don't stop the crime, cuz im still alive thanks to my nine, im so depressed and i keep askin why, this shit had to happen with me, my lifes like a ball of shit or a frisbee,
  • yo im diggin this beat could you send me a hard copy let me know an ill give you my e-mail

  • i enter the room nothing but tits an fumes but im consumed by the drug thats all ova me soon, someones givin me hugs but its cold so i grab a hold of my soul an jus let go but idk, maybe im laid out on da flo, oh there we go im standin up, oh what the fuck is that me then where am i? i got a wierd feelin an look to da sky, an its open but im hopin that ive done what i said but think im layin on the flo stuned or dead, i hear voices now, it sounds like a crowd, oh shit hey god what up now

  • sendd me this pls

  • now i now im just a kid but i know i could be more, wondering when ill score i want the drugs. never again do i want cold mugs filled with your poison like a lingering death shoved down my throat. i need out of this game wondering if ill ever get my day, does anyone ever what i have to say? fuck it as i walk this dark path not even knowing which breath is my last, knowing its soon is enough for me to blast, boom thats a head shot, down to the floor grab a mop whipe it up only to find all my gore

  • i would like to say a little sad story one day a little girl was smiling walking dowen road she had this dream of little prince love she draw alot od heart she draw little angels all arounde every day to bad my little girl she didnt know life its more harshe reality is backword now all the draws was broken hearts and chains shouldnt i know better its harde to be inccent in dark world in the this life there is no wrong from righte now i lurne the licean

  • this beat is nice! can u send me this in good qaulity im a rapper want to use it

    peace

  • story teller- babie was my everything, but soon we grew upart till wut we had in commin was anything we were searchin 4 lov but i missed took it, wats happnin, y u gota trip, i jus wana c u laffin again smilin with me, but it cant b , so get gone like stains removed by bleach

  • you suck

  • PT3:Evrything is going perfect to plan she actully thinks im a changed man,shes gonna find it hard to understand when i break her face with my hands,hold her trout tell she dont choke nomore,im sorry baby you wont know are son nomore,this is what you did! i blame you for my actions!,im haveing such a sudden satisfaction,never thought killing you would give this kind of reaction,you was the time table to my fractions,but now i got this new hope that never crashs this hospitality everlasting.....

  • u bombed this shit nigga...

  • HybridDragons thanks if you want i wrote some other shit too i love this guys beats its really easy to flow and talk about your life, check out "FL Beat #48 new Underground Rap Instrumental "BedTime"

  • pt2:baby momma its the same old song same old dance,you and me fuck a second chance,this world is crumbling and im trying to advance,sick waking up every morning going to court pulling up my pants,everyone on the jury stand is your favorite fan,so they look at me less then a man thats why i created a perfect plan,it'll bering salvation,2 months i waited patient,meny days i went debatein but the longer i waited the more i accumulated this haterd,i hate you so much i fake this relationship........

  • I came home jus last light we never work out all we do is fight,i told you i was out,you reached for the knife i pushed you on the coach, i hate it when are son has to see us fight,so ive been thinking about killing this bitch tonight,no more childsupport no more being broke because of this whore,nomore being traped behind locked doors,got a perfect plan to succeed and so much more, all i gotta do is fallow through i aint scared i'll do what i have too,take her out ofstate wraped inplastic&duckt

  • it takes somebody found out to see yo was in the spot light/ girl when i seen yo smooth black hair with those tan highlights/ had me crazy wanted to check u out in my house to fuck yo brains out/ had her screaming so fucking loud and had yo face full of whiteout/now i put and x by ur name on my checklist/now im on an exhibition to show another girl my lessons/

  • nice beat mannn

    5*

  • Continuing on..

    And Wipes Her Eyes/

    No more Hellos, Only GoodByes/

    She Grew so Vigor, and found out

    who pulled the Trigger, she unleashed

    her inner Demon, started yelling and Screamin

    but she got knocked out and blacked out,

    woke the next morning, raining and storming,

    she went back home, parents Told her its

    time to find a new home..

  • who pulled the trigger 0.o?

  • Some Crips....

  • I don't know who you are but this verse leaves lyricists like eminem or tupac in the dust! amazing!

  • lmao, who are you talking to? Eminem and pac are 2 of the best.

  • you. I heard a lot of rap and you verse is pretty amazing, nothing wrong with comparing you to them, after all they are only human

  • uhh... True Story... There was this young, Short, Angel in Disguise The Sort, that had beautiful Brown eyes and Even Brown Hair, she was Rare that it only took one single glare, For you to Fall in Love, she was blessed from Above and harmless like a Dove She, used to shine just like a Star then a car not to Far pulled out a gun for some fun, and did a Drive by, then she died family Cried now shes high in the Sky Her Older Sister Asked Why And had to Say Good Bye Now everyday she Cries...
  • Great Beat !!

  • just blown away...

  • no1 got nuthin on this tune

    anomoly ripped it too big

  • u can take ur shoes and clothes all i got now is my broes dont fuk wit dirty hoes all i know my roll is slowed like a king that lost his throne or a dog wit out his bone all she does is bitch and moan

  • TeeG Hamiora

    ur ridiculous i kant fuken live wit dis slit jah wristz yo hella skitzo u wer warnd from da get go so.... dont let go dont eavr let me go,ther wos once a time i told u so its neavr no u fell so low so howd i know tha future bro my minds so blow just thinking so criipn throwed my door wos open now its closed u had ur chance just but u just froze live da life that you have chose

  • nice sound..WOLFPACK!!!!

  • this is catchy as fuckk

  • THE BEST; NMCMAL FOR PRESIDENT!

  • no ears for music guys... comment well so he can improve... basss is out o note sample didnt cut well

  • its cool hehe i like it sketchy

  • =) just givin g my opinion dude anyway!

  • yea no probs with that

  • seriously, this is a kickass beat

  • piano dont fit... u didnt cut the sample well... bass is out of note... dude im sry!!

  • dude, your jealous you havent got the capacity to even produce anything close to this

    peace

  • oh really? =) lmao na i jus dont upload my shit on youtube cause some retards like u would steal my shit.... rofl

  • ok haha

  • dang skugger those are sum sick lyrics

  • This is Tight, where can I get some of your beats?

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  • C-RAZY!!

  • C-RAZY!!

  • omg! love it!!

  • copyright this shit

  • Yoo can i use this beat?

    its mad hott man

    nice..you got talent.

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  • You have a real talent...

    May I have your instrumental for a music?

    I already have create musics in the more complex, complex rhytme...

    I think that it is easy and I shall want to try... Please

  • sure go kill it hehe

  • God take god give, in peace and war(yea)

    I'll make you say this prayer, core for core(bitch)

    Its battle, stand up and fight,

    for wat they tell you is right, so take this knife

    and let the carnage bite, be a fan, fight fo ya land, and

    accept the fact that you mite neva see home again

  • when the earth gets cold

    people souls grow old

    kids die young becasue they lack the love that was givin when we were one/

    now we are all done/shone from life as we become dumb/ devils have us in their sleaves/ even if we beg on our knees/ and say please/they dont care about our needs/ they care about their fuckin greeds.

  • It's dutch, doesn't rhyme in english but still wanted to post it.

  • Yeah luister naar wat ik je te zeggen heb

    Ik leg je de defenitie van een mc uit, wat jij rapt is crap

    Ik laat je mijn tracks horen, maar nee ben niet iemand die snel opschept

    Luister niet naar die bitchez die zeggen dat je moet stoppen, ze zijn zo fucking nep

    Je maakt een mistap, volgende dag staat het al op het world wide web

    Shit, De wereld is hard als het gaat om de hoogste

  • Want je moet blijven spitten, wil je horen bij de dopesten

    Blijven spitten wil je hoger komen

    shit, t kan lang duren, blijf dromen

    T is niet dat al je dromen meteen uitkomen

    Blijf focusen op je droom, niet op het inkomen

  • damn nice

    i like doin my work to ur beats

  • yo you know i spit the tight shit//

    after this, ill screw your wife bitch//

    i do this the hard way//

    when your up against me, you better do what god says//

    cause this rap is the god one//

    better keep it low when you are in my hood son//

    cause i rap like a lunatic//

    shut the fuck, or youll get a bullet thru ya head//

    so ya better step back//

    or else muthafucka youll get smacked//

  • No... Fail

  • are you stupid, this is the shit, this guy has talent, your jelous i can tell, right?, why hate, why even comment if its negative, i bet he doesnt give a shit about your opinion anyways

  • I said No... Fail to someone who had posted somes shitty lyrics in the comments. I know NmCmal and I respect his music. Don't get me wrong.

  • oh alright, my bad bro

  • Legendary

  • methacrylicacid

  • often times i feel myself just slippin in and out of consciousness but concious with the fact my conscience is a conscious thing- I know what is right from wrong but yet i feel this burden's sting I am well aware With every obstacle i'm hurdling Hurricane- force winds- knock me off my feet I Stand up- I fall down- history repeats- itself it seems But this is not who i am falling back into the cracks, I try hard to understand Maybe it's my immaturity, cause honestly i can't
  • sick

  • yo we aint got nothin in the streets thats why we stealin

    the only time we got money is if we dealin

    so dont judge us by the shit we doin cuz thats how we was raised

    growin up in the hood can get a nigga crazed

    and aint nobody tryna help the ghetto youth

    take a walk in the hood an you'll see the proof

    there's babys cryin, mommas tryin daddys lyin

    and little kids wit no food dyin

    got no money except for the check from welfare

    i hope they no i care cuz its like nobody else cares. . .

  • how long did it take you to come up with that ? :)

  • 4 mins

    i played this beat twice

  • that not half bad homie :) keep it up

  • thnxx man i might use it on a track or somethin

  • yee for shore.. and good luck with it homie :)

  • check my response to this :)

    big ups nmcmal

  • montyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

  • im a heartless artist, gods forgot us, and believe us jeesus leaves us he is not beside us/

    they ostracizes white rappers like "he isn't a black?", and then go home and throw on em and listen to that/ im sick of hearing " hey ur sorta like slim shady", but thats crazy, cuz then id have gravy like him maybe?

  • yo wat up nmcmal im about to spit to this beat for that lyricist cypher wyze just called me out on ...hope thas coo ...stay up -J*LiiVE

  • sure my dude.. hit me up! peace

  • Hearing this beat, gives me chills, listening to a beat made with pure talent.

  • here we go kaos3cko at myspace yo this beat, kinda got me thinkin as i start drinkin, stumblin so hard and im slowly fuckin blinkin so click clack boom get ready for ya doom with kas and this beat all u feel iz tha zoom cuz u feelin like u on some extacy fuck wit me and ill delete ur life expectancy so come get wit me, or get tha dumpin as i prepare for huntin so u can say im gunnin i would really love to spit on ur tracks so in a message, NMCMAL get me back
  • An0m killed this joint right here

  • Pacin back in forth/Im going out my mind/Cant control the angry bottled up inside/Needa cool off needa take a ride/Think things over before i get in a bind/This shit just aint worth my time/Just relax smoke an L and everthing will be fine/Cause nothings worth dieing but lord Im trying/Ima keep my mind right stay strong wont go down with outta fight

  • ça prend les tripes !!

    t'es un monstre man, continue...

  • sounds good

  • cont'd

    But I think we need to phase it out, so we can live free without a doubt I seen what makes me fall to my knees, and all I ask to you lord is please At least let the children grow to see ten, and please let that mumma hold her baby again

  • Sit down, recline relax my mind, close my eyes and its this I find It seems everybody in this world is at war, but can someone anyone tell me what for? Im sick seeing hurt Im sick of seeing trouble, I cant stand greed and I hate struggle But tell me what is it I do? When im here fighting my own war too I wanna help but I gotta I hold my own, I wanna protect you but what about my home It seems the cycle just keeps on going and anger and violence keeps on showing

  • I spit it deep, forgive I speak from the top of the mind recline and find that this talent shine I get props and love like valentine you couldn't fantasize this vision my eyes is widened vision precise and memories last long, like this sad song for me though no sappy mood, I drop it heavy like fatty food, in life it's swim or sink in the deep end it's endless, war carnage and vengeance more targets including infants, the futures darkened like a movie entrance..and dimming, i'm finished.

  • this is probably one of my favorite beats from you. its just soo well. dude you got some serious talent

  • actually its kinda my fav too hehe.. thx bro!

  • yo dog, the big mony and the 5 cars will com to you, trust me brroo

  • freestyle

    this is the firsttime i listen to this beat

    in the first secound i felt the heat

    its ranging to my home

    where im sitting alone

    in my room watching this

    new lines coming soon

    i wouldnt miss this song

    where was it so long

  • alll your beats are good man

  • great beat for a diss song or some shit 5/5

  • muse is ill.

    beat is ill.

  • nice job mn

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  • I just recorded something to this, it was pretty heartfelt so I hope you enjoy when I upload it. It's probably one of my personal favorites.

  • i love this beat.

    yo nmcmal

    you're gonna hear me sing to this 1 dude.

    obv i will rap but u gonna hear some singing :P

    this is EXACTLY what ive been waitin for....

  • hehe nice.. lookin forward to it!

  • Hey man love this beat I post a video response if you got the time would appreaciate it if you checked it out

  • The time is now, it is worth listening

    Shine so bright, even blind folks see me glistening

    The mainstream cup i'm pissing in

    Souljah Bitch track in the rubbish bin

    Like a christian i'm free of sin

    Yet i'm portayed as a villain

    I'm like the joker just smilin'

    With a lyrical mind i'm compilin

    Call me Bomfunk Mc's

    Cus I'm on the beat freestyling

  • nice accept chrisitans arent free of sin lol

  • dope shyte :)

  • Turn on the radio: Bitch represents/

    i turn off that shit, fuck this 50 cents/

    Lil Wayne is da Prom Queen, smilin' on the camera, but suckin Birdman dick, when he ain't on screen/

    the classics were bombin the booth, but the rap shit make crime common to youth/

    now you see Soulja dudes dancin fancy shit/ the game be stupid, but i keep my handy clips/

    i'm havin trouble seein the message in raps/ money, guns & pussy? oh, you better stop messin with crap.

  • lol how is it freestylin if your typing? heh

  • if they dont even have a cam they can but idc coz i dont but this is great

  • dopeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­eeeeeeeeeeeee

  • yo NmCmal wat could a guy like me do to collab on a beat with a guy like u?

  • lololol

  • nice one man 5/5 . i added an emotional one too check it out. peace

  • This is fire. Nice job once again NM