Firstly, this is a WONDERFUL effort. It's indeed an impressive presentation. However, you need to work on the accent part a lot. Get yourself enrolled in some accent training program. It would be sad if you put so much effort in one aspect and slack equally in the other.I think you have reached a certain level of fluency in English, so now is the time to work on the accent. Both in the US and in India, there are many accent training courses! Enroll.
I will be brutally honest with my comments.
Firstly, this is a WONDERFUL effort. It's indeed an impressive presentation. However, you need to work on the accent part a lot. Get yourself enrolled in some accent training program. It would be sad if you put so much effort in one aspect and slack equally in the other.I think you have reached a certain level of fluency in English, so now is the time to work on the accent. Both in the US and in India, there are many accent training courses! Enroll.
dipanjang 1 year ago