Sounds reminds me of eraserhead with its feel. Loved the low angled shots and leading lines. Felt movement between shots also was very easy to follow. Love the slight time skips. Taking the strain scene mustve been a patient game...
I just watched this again. It's still very good. Perhaps a splash sound to let the audience know that he's jumped? Apart from that, this still upholds a very dark, depressing tone. Great stuff :)
the music is really..... freaky... and high pitched.
does this really go on for 7 and a half mins?
i like it but its very long to go without voices. hu is the freaky man? o its matt. if you haven't gathered i write while watching. i like the water effect where u have fadded it into the background.
what a wonderful short film. you should be really proud of yourself :)
harrysfunzone 2 years ago
Sounds reminds me of eraserhead with its feel. Loved the low angled shots and leading lines. Felt movement between shots also was very easy to follow. Love the slight time skips. Taking the strain scene mustve been a patient game...
However didn't feel the sence of 'cornering'
at the end with previous shots being so open.
overall I thought it was awesome!
Mezziel 3 years ago
I just watched this again. It's still very good. Perhaps a splash sound to let the audience know that he's jumped? Apart from that, this still upholds a very dark, depressing tone. Great stuff :)
rwrobert 3 years ago
GRAEME! i didn't know u two knew each other! :)
the music is really..... freaky... and high pitched.
does this really go on for 7 and a half mins?
i like it but its very long to go without voices. hu is the freaky man? o its matt. if you haven't gathered i write while watching. i like the water effect where u have fadded it into the background.
madpinkhatter 4 years ago