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@619Joe182 Judging by her style of dress, casual mannerisms and intimate tone of voice, I would say that they are just on a date. You know, two people having dinner on stormy night. It turns out she's just a con artist, that is apparently guilty about what she does.
Loved seeing Bree Michael Warner but this really felt incidental and ended a little flat. Not really sure what I was expecting or where I would have wanted this to go but it just never seemed to materialize. I was drawn into to start with, so kudos for creating tension and intrigue.
This is a total and complete rip off of the scene from Out of Sight. No one noticed that? It's almost exactly the same. Style, story, shots, everything except for the money at the end.
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she was a prostitute they didn't know each other, that is why she asked him what he likes and is surprised that he asked her back since her clients usually don't care, the money at the end was her pay i know it doesn't seem that way at the beginning but that is the point
She is a prostitute, and he payed her to have sex with him. After that night she probably had such a good time that she was having a little difficulty taking the money because she would like to think of him as a friend and not a customer. ^^3 thats my guess
Very interesting. I like the lighting very much and the colours chosen to set the mood. Acting is very realistic....very good direction there from the director. The actress is very good and really on the moment. Does anyone think she is a look alike for Jennifer Beals from Flashdance?
it was interesting...i thhought theangles were mediocre and nothing special..the dialogue was good...I didnt like the cuts between the restaurant and the bedroom it looked weird and purposeless...film was better than most but needed some tweaks and rewriting on the script...
script seems like a recycling of sexual tension moments from softcore skin flicks. shots seemed too much like they were going with the "less is more" approach, but i didn't really succeed. the "twist" is that she's a prostitute... it would be a twist if one were to have this type of dialogue with a street hooker but it's not much of a stretch if she was the type of escort who provides "the girlfriend experience". this is somewhat implied in the job description. not much of a twist if you ask me.
i like the dialogue when she says when a man takes control and let his hand explore... ^_^ i think thats the best part of having sex... i think its verryy sexy.... by the way the prostitude feels like for the first time a man is asking for her opinion her choice, she feels like a valuable rather than a trash...
really...so he got a prostitute and took her out to dinner and had stimulating conversation with her? i dunno...i didnt really get prostitute vibe from her but maybe...just personally if you or someone else didnt explain that to me i wouldnt have gotten that.
she feels like for the first time a man is asking for her opinion, her choice ( remember when she says no one ever asked me dat before) 4:29 , she feels like a valuable rather than a trash.. see how she hesitates before taking the money!!
what is a prostitute? they have a lot of prostitutes who are not in the streets...a lot women who sleep with men for money but they are very active in their community and well respected..nobody call these women prostitute but that is exactly what they are...
Have you ever made a film? A dolly shot must be for a reason, I didn't see one here. Static suited the slow, sexy, tempo at the table and it mixed well with the hand held cutaways to the bedroom Lighting? Maybe a bit too hard on the rainy window shots but for the most par.....never mind I just realized all your critique was cliched bs and that it was meant in jest.
Fantastic. Awesome setting, excellent dialogue, wonderful choice of music. Sets the mood in the movie. Lighting sets the setting, and very good ending. I like twists.
This was amazing film making. One of the hottest films I've seen. From the slow bass playing in the background to the dialogue and camera and lighting. 10 stars
This is one of the best shorts i've seen on here. Everything was so professional; the audio, lighting, acting, camera work, and editing. I enjoyed the dialogue and I LOVED the ending.
she was actrually a prostitute and that is why she asked him what he liked, and she responded that no one had ever asked her before since those type of men don't care whether she feels pleasure- they are selfish and perverted
If you guys would notice she did not "steal" his wallet...the money was left out for her and that is HER little purse she takes with her. The producer/director/actors ALL understood WHAT the "business" is about. I'm impressed. Oh...this is further highlighted by the emphasis that she doesn't like sex in movies the psychology is very simple...it is because they are getting "paid" for it...same as she is. DUH!
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Ghostlymuso 1 month ago
rubbish
razielus20 2 months ago
At first I didn't like it. But the end sold me into it. Good stuff.
BouncingFoxFilms 3 months ago 3
ok, I see, all of us have cracked, well almost all of us.
underdog? bree michael warner? are you Sirius? pls
ThruGlassDarkly 3 months ago
Like my comment so the top one does not give away the ending.
tdplonnnie 3 months ago 15
The acting is amazing! The story is great! I really loved the cinematography! The lighting is excellent! Well done. I look forward to seeing more :D
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GMatthews537 4 months ago
i dont get it
is she a prostitute or did she just steal his money?
619Joe182 4 months ago
@619Joe182 Prostiture but didn't want to take her money because she enjoyed it
spiazo 3 months ago
@619Joe182 Judging by her style of dress, casual mannerisms and intimate tone of voice, I would say that they are just on a date. You know, two people having dinner on stormy night. It turns out she's just a con artist, that is apparently guilty about what she does.
datosmandatos 1 month ago
good
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rklinesmith12 5 months ago
What a great short film! Acting in this film created so much tension and attraction. It is beautiful
cscdigitalgraphics 6 months ago
Loved seeing Bree Michael Warner but this really felt incidental and ended a little flat. Not really sure what I was expecting or where I would have wanted this to go but it just never seemed to materialize. I was drawn into to start with, so kudos for creating tension and intrigue.
ultramanj 8 months ago
A well made, well acted short film. Bravo. [From a novice, just-getting-started filmmaker].
ZarruqFilms 9 months ago
man giggle 2:00
arakshootout 9 months ago
This is a total and complete rip off of the scene from Out of Sight. No one noticed that? It's almost exactly the same. Style, story, shots, everything except for the money at the end.
mattman1138 10 months ago
ehh
AnHERO4422 10 months ago
i have a GIANT boner now...
dayv619 10 months ago
Brilliantly written.. Classy Short....
chivamm 11 months ago
I loved her answer to what she found sexy.. that's exactly how i feel, love when a man take control ... great film, no boring parts :)
iTzMisTV 11 months ago
Lady Gaga?
firefeature 1 year ago
i like the seduction...
bgreeen88 1 year ago
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Awesome movie!
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trex991 1 year ago
anybody know wher i can watch this movie online?
crazymonk43 1 year ago
@crazymonk43 u r watching it online silly :)
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TheEhEhFilms 1 year ago
loved it amazing script, direction and acting
dom902 1 year ago
That was awesome! The sound editing was amazing as well as the flashforwards. Lighting was also excellent. Very good actors as well! Nicceee!
showstopper98 1 year ago
brillent
7272dre 1 year ago
I bet you the creators of this short film saw the movie "out of sight". The tone and editing are extremely similar. Well done.
Atlasfilms08 1 year ago
Great story set up. I got sucked in and didn't see that ending coming and it took my breath away. Very satisfying to watch.
sweeperbart 1 year ago
I love how the film bookends with the two roses in the first and last frame. Good job, especially to the actress and sound editor!
jesseshulman 1 year ago
really good!!! It's like you didnt see that coming! I mean, the fact that she was a protitute and he insisted in asking what did she like.
lelyhappyface 1 year ago
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kane5250 1 year ago
I don't get it! was she a hooker?
williamhoffa 1 year ago
Incredible short!, The story is amazing, and the ending just surprised me, I dind expected that! great work from the director and the actors
yhelat 2 years ago
almost nobody....
suddle my friend <F,
kikikyami 2 years ago
good flick, whats up with her ripping him off at the end? didnt get that part other then pretty cool
Clone56 2 years ago 2
she was a prostitute they didn't know each other, that is why she asked him what he likes and is surprised that he asked her back since her clients usually don't care, the money at the end was her pay i know it doesn't seem that way at the beginning but that is the point
444papaya444 2 years ago 2
She is a prostitute, and he payed her to have sex with him. After that night she probably had such a good time that she was having a little difficulty taking the money because she would like to think of him as a friend and not a customer. ^^3 thats my guess
kikikyami 2 years ago 2
Very good. An intense and compelling story line that kept me engrossed to the end.
optheatre 2 years ago
WOOOW!!! i like it a lot!!!.. great short!.. beautiful women!
Canica15 2 years ago
Very interesting. I like the lighting very much and the colours chosen to set the mood. Acting is very realistic....very good direction there from the director. The actress is very good and really on the moment. Does anyone think she is a look alike for Jennifer Beals from Flashdance?
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stunninglady1 2 years ago
that was good u think.....
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ccbfbcdabddg 2 years ago
poooorn.
cheezpuffz650 2 years ago
*Warner* is the most *corrupt* company ever.
kakifry 2 years ago
This is an amazing short film. I also love the dialogue and the sexual tension.
bioshockprincess 2 years ago
loved the dialogue. the sexual tension was good (but we all knew what was gunna happen;) it was good.
purpledoe188 2 years ago 3
it was interesting...i thhought theangles were mediocre and nothing special..the dialogue was good...I didnt like the cuts between the restaurant and the bedroom it looked weird and purposeless...film was better than most but needed some tweaks and rewriting on the script...
jondm18 2 years ago
i think there was no restaurant, the table they were eating in was inside the room, like a hotel room
444papaya444 2 years ago 2
that guy is hawt ;) i would have his hand on my body anyday :L
hopefaithlov 2 years ago
script seems like a recycling of sexual tension moments from softcore skin flicks. shots seemed too much like they were going with the "less is more" approach, but i didn't really succeed. the "twist" is that she's a prostitute... it would be a twist if one were to have this type of dialogue with a street hooker but it's not much of a stretch if she was the type of escort who provides "the girlfriend experience". this is somewhat implied in the job description. not much of a twist if you ask me.
pclown 2 years ago
Aw.........
GoldVisionFilms 2 years ago
Its okay, not too great
KCRInterviews 2 years ago
good!!!
mcbanhgioo 2 years ago
i have seen this movie atleast 5 times
awesome five stars
iGiveSkeetSkeet 2 years ago
were is the music? i heard it before with the music i liked it better!
Buchuki77 2 years ago
hot!
flyonthewall001 2 years ago
beat it, geek.
alvarobunkers 2 years ago
Very nice!!
gymbrit7 2 years ago
The ending was the perfect finish to the movie
merenakittn 2 years ago 3
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stupid whore, she's a prostitute her opinion shouldn't ever matter :D
wa7edfathey 2 years ago
so hot i cant even stand it. Phew.
moemagic112 2 years ago
nice work. especially liked the lighting. this has given me exactlly the right inspiration for my next film.
chavymagee 2 years ago
I thought there was a music before.. ?
MiniMean 2 years ago
i like the dialogue when she says when a man takes control and let his hand explore... ^_^ i think thats the best part of having sex... i think its verryy sexy.... by the way the prostitude feels like for the first time a man is asking for her opinion her choice, she feels like a valuable rather than a trash...
fhsdkfh 2 years ago 2
tht was really well written and directed :D and her voice is very sexy
latinopitt 2 years ago
nice twist at the end, you think its a date and then.... of course
TheBedlamCube 2 years ago
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bullshit. stilted, awkward, pathetic.
deepochristo 2 years ago
OH!
DAMN!
this is hot. the ending made me cheer.
AWESOME. <3
sbort 2 years ago 3
i don't get it whyd she take the money? is she a con artist? are we not supposed to know?
lloe1 2 years ago
she is a prostitute silly....haha
lithiumX666 2 years ago
really...so he got a prostitute and took her out to dinner and had stimulating conversation with her? i dunno...i didnt really get prostitute vibe from her but maybe...just personally if you or someone else didnt explain that to me i wouldnt have gotten that.
lloe1 2 years ago
she feels like for the first time a man is asking for her opinion, her choice ( remember when she says no one ever asked me dat before) 4:29 , she feels like a valuable rather than a trash.. see how she hesitates before taking the money!!
lithiumX666 2 years ago
what is a prostitute? they have a lot of prostitutes who are not in the streets...a lot women who sleep with men for money but they are very active in their community and well respected..nobody call these women prostitute but that is exactly what they are...
sexyfancy 2 years ago
5:47 ROFL, PARIS HILTON!! HAHA
wrhaha 2 years ago
is the concept about a prostitute?
Honestly thats what I got....
the missing deep meaning of sex in a prostitute's life...
Desert0roses 2 years ago
great short film. see how she hesitates before she takes her money? she didn't want to.
st3phaniew 2 years ago 24
@st3phaniew I'd pay him
MrsTonyDinozzio 1 year ago
ehh.
breebreebreebreee 2 years ago
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Static camera, wooden leads and film school lighting. Only decent dialogue prevents this from deserving a place at the bottom of the trash can.
jpsartreny 2 years ago
Have you ever made a film? A dolly shot must be for a reason, I didn't see one here. Static suited the slow, sexy, tempo at the table and it mixed well with the hand held cutaways to the bedroom Lighting? Maybe a bit too hard on the rainy window shots but for the most par.....never mind I just realized all your critique was cliched bs and that it was meant in jest.
donkiyboy 2 years ago 18
very well explained
nickelLess123 2 years ago
great acting, great dialogue, stupid concept
dreamcomefalse 2 years ago
Wonderful.
eccentricjenna 3 years ago
this is my favorite short film ever i have watch this like thousand times and i dont get tired of it! its so fukin sexy damn it!!!!!
demasiado de sensual! es un calor intenso!
Buchuki77 3 years ago 5
that was really cool!!
mauriciofarespaes 3 years ago 2
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omg really someone owes me 7 minutes and 51 seconds of the rest of my life!
officialcullen 3 years ago
youre acting like youre four years old
nickelLess123 2 years ago
This from someone who is possibly a Twilight fan?
AmiiisME 2 years ago
ERKK!
thebestcindiella 2 years ago
Very good short but can't seem to find the film title anywhere on imdb - wanted to see what else the filmmaker did
mr1981z 3 years ago
Somebody owes me 7 minutes 51 seconds of life.
Indexcase913 3 years ago
I don't get it.
But it was great = D
xXGabbiliciousXx 3 years ago
This film is unsettling with the true reality where sex can hold both different intentions and untold purposes.
HeadThenRun 3 years ago
Fantastic. Awesome setting, excellent dialogue, wonderful choice of music. Sets the mood in the movie. Lighting sets the setting, and very good ending. I like twists.
5 *****
TorchofRock 3 years ago 4
Wow! That was absolutely fibulas! What an actress! Fantastic script! Everything so well done...
MizMaia 3 years ago
Thank you for making this(:
absolutely great.
reiddanielle 3 years ago
freaking amazing! i love it!
sati769leigh 3 years ago
yea... nicely done and all but its kind of ripping-off of 'out of sight' a little too much
dolson1014 3 years ago
hahahahaha, nice ending, I thought it was gonna like they were married or something like that
maverick1520 3 years ago
hummmm
thatss sexy
(:
xxtrumperxx 3 years ago
so sad...
15beauty 3 years ago
Great dialogue, beautiful lighting, good acting, haunting music.
somatichdg 3 years ago 3
damn...........she's bullshit
lailyaALI 3 years ago
it's posible that ... someone could write the dialogue here pleasee??? I can't speak english ... and I can't understand it :(
assa1573 3 years ago
porn for women with a twist, nothing more nothing less.
It will get panties wet but I expected more.
AFpilotJJ 3 years ago 4
is there a way to get this on dvd? i love it the dialogue is amazing, lighting everything about this is awesome
waynesinthemist 3 years ago
wait, she was a prostitute?
breevanazzi 3 years ago
nice job Mr. David Hamilton the lighting is perfect Luke Amos did his thing.
drunkonworkahol 3 years ago
that was pretty freaking awesome
jasesy 3 years ago
wow. that was...
AWESOME.
JOkillsKidds 3 years ago
Perfect.
toribby 3 years ago
amazing :)
bubby408 3 years ago
this was really good! Nice job
bamproductionstudios 3 years ago
hmm......I wonder if the gal was a prostitute or a thief or she just didn't like the guy and wanted to get away with his money!
mprulez 3 years ago 5
wow! nice short film! =D
hippiefairy08 3 years ago
HAHHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHHA this is good u neva expect a hoe 2 b so clever
zsofosztszop 3 years ago
he got pwned.
hollayyalloh 3 years ago 2
Ohhhh snap.
OMGcrackerhead 3 years ago 3
is this a real movie..? where is the complete movie?
nickmacki 3 years ago
its a short movie. it says so in the description. that means it was filmed for the sole purpous of being a short movie
trema006 3 years ago 7
bello
101CiaK 3 years ago
I'm always amazed how many views we've received. Thank you soooo much for watching and all the lovely comments!!!
breewarner 3 years ago
You were good!! I wish I knew a girl who could act as well as you!
IUProducer 3 years ago
was this made by the same people who made 'Try' or no
onetwothreekissme 3 years ago
this was really well done. the acting is really good as well. well written. What school do you guys go to? or what school did you go to?
Dafine21 3 years ago
This was amazing film making. One of the hottest films I've seen. From the slow bass playing in the background to the dialogue and camera and lighting. 10 stars
Cr8zDrgn 3 years ago 2
Superb - Acting was bang on too - Nice work
jediboy11 3 years ago 2
this was fantastic. well done.
cantbeyoursuperman 3 years ago
That was HOT! Great example of how porn is obscene and not sexy compared to this. Where's the next chapter?
dfchick83 3 years ago
OMDZ that film was amazing sent shivers down my spine!
Entity414 3 years ago 2
reallly nice prost i must say... if only india had such men who behaved so decently wth a call gal.....huh, wht 2 do
nsbisht69 3 years ago 2
This is one of the best shorts i've seen on here. Everything was so professional; the audio, lighting, acting, camera work, and editing. I enjoyed the dialogue and I LOVED the ending.
filmstr 3 years ago 6
very well made short. Clever dialogue.
Albrechtc834 3 years ago 2
was she a prostitute or did she jack his money?
saoceana 3 years ago
Asking myself the same question, for a moment I thought she had killed him though...
fdelrosario 3 years ago
she was actrually a prostitute and that is why she asked him what he liked, and she responded that no one had ever asked her before since those type of men don't care whether she feels pleasure- they are selfish and perverted
444papaya444 3 years ago 6
I didnt get that at first ('^^3)
thanks for explaning
kikikyami 3 years ago
Love the ending!! Love the whole short to be honest, very well done.
helenashman 3 years ago 2
Melancholy.
-well done-
elifreedom 3 years ago
That woman was beautiful. Wow
TylerEdge818 3 years ago 3
DIOS TE AMA!!
nososecuador 3 years ago
Hahaha.. I could guess the ending!!
But that was a great short film
Agustine115 3 years ago 2
love this movie soooo much!!!!!
aya270386 3 years ago 2
Great film, using just enough light, and not seeing the backs (out of focus) of the other when talking to each other, I love it!
They are both on their own, far away from each other.
I love it, great work!!
MauriceSpees 3 years ago 3
Thats messed up haha
bydme45 3 years ago
gud but sssssssssssss
stupinmkio 3 years ago
I love the way she bites her lips...That's sexy!!!
ArtificialGirly 3 years ago 3
This is absolutely brilliant, nice job.
a58ybah 3 years ago 2
that is one fucked up clip. lol. why would a man that sexy ever need a hooker?
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be5tial 3 years ago
that guy just cant believe she doesnt prefer sex in movies.
steelfrsh 3 years ago 2
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Talking Heads BORING!!!!!!
franmandc 3 years ago
Loved it, fantastic shots, brilliant what editing software do you use?
Marillionmad 3 years ago 5
That is brilliant! Loved it!
kriniere323 3 years ago 5
".. and the real cover is your naked skin.. " !!!
jaydesh9 3 years ago
If you guys would notice she did not "steal" his wallet...the money was left out for her and that is HER little purse she takes with her. The producer/director/actors ALL understood WHAT the "business" is about. I'm impressed. Oh...this is further highlighted by the emphasis that she doesn't like sex in movies the psychology is very simple...it is because they are getting "paid" for it...same as she is. DUH!
mzadamz01 3 years ago 20
I like the analyse good job..
I was kinda slow :P
candyhandy 3 years ago
she looks like hilary duff a bit
ak47gand 3 years ago
or penelope cruz
onetwothreekissme 3 years ago
Beautifully done. I loved this!
PsychicBLUE 3 years ago
yes that women , she's a great actress.The way she combine the character with those dialogues , really perfect !!
is really meaningful
reinedparis 3 years ago 5
brillantly written and directed.....wonderfully written dialogue...........
artyflap 3 years ago 2
Awesome not because their SEX scene but the meaning it hid,
that lady was not interest to have sex as a prostitute or Call girl
but as a wife or life partner. Since she might have some problem
for which she did that
dododudeitsmii 3 years ago 2
I love her voice.
DarkPizza 3 years ago 5
the dialog was amazing, and the little twist at the end made it all the more interesting. I wish there was more similar films out there
0Lilu 3 years ago 5
really very nice
drastic7777777 3 years ago 3
awesome actress! she reminds me of angelina jolie
Anna5151 3 years ago 3
I think she was amazing, so cool and in seeming control!
I like to think she was worthy every penny.
vampyrechick25 3 years ago 4
that was about as captivating as watching Gigli in slow motion. Well directed and edited, but the dialogue was bland.
ContractKiller84 3 years ago
SHE WAS A WHORE!
zipst3rrr 3 years ago
we kinda figured that out.
carinapanic 3 years ago 4
this is something that entices the mind which i think is the greatest sex organ of all...nice work in making this sort film...nice twist in the end.
jominalu 3 years ago
FUCKING SWEET!!!!
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DumbAssCrew69 3 years ago
she remind me of Scully from Xfiles specialy in the end....
stela81 3 years ago