it's a nice song ; i'd like to hear you singing another style of music to compare it with this one...cuz in my opinion you did very well so far...full support
I can hear heavy auto tune... was waiting to hear your voice without it throughout the song. Anyways, like the rest said, do covers first and dont use so much auto tune. All the best.
Great track man but the auto-tune sonunds terrible :-( Sorry, just being honest. If you've written and produced all this music with garageband, i'd love to see what you can do in a studio. :-)
Too much autotune bro, try doing covers. Now a days people seem to get more attention by doing that, you might have the talent but you gotta work more on it, perhaps do a song with out auto-tuning it so much. Trust me people that head that way don't get anything but haters and trolls. i.e Rebecca Black
As some ppl already told, first of all, do the kindda song u really like, it'll always sound better than any other! Cuz u'll do with luv u know!?
Second stuff, lay off the autotune, it does make ppl think u got no talent!
third - keep it up with the good work man, but believe me, u'll only be successful by the time u start singin' the kindda songs u like!! N I hope u do it soon, I'll be waiting 4 that!!
Listen clolsly.. Your Auto tune is too much + Make that song little slower .. Because words in your song is too compressed , try to get some words out of your song , and then I think it will Be okey..
just wanted to add...im not a hater not at ALL you asked for an honest opinion so I gave you mine and I truly wish you'll succeed because you know gotta top your dance career!!!!:) and overall you don't want to be an artist with no future so just keep up your work!
iight soooo im a huge r&b/soul all that fan...thats to start with...but your piece it sounds a little bit repetative like there are probably 50songs about a bad girl....then please please pleeeease take off that autotuning it will just get in a way for you...and I would recomend you to experiment with this song a little bit like lrerecord it in different tempos maybe, change up some things in the lyrics and all that kind of shhhhhtuff and compare them afterwards honestly you got nothing to lose
There's a reason why Jay-z said there's a death of Auto-Tune. Stick to dancing babe. You won't make it in the business singing...not with the kind of artists out there. Much love.
Dunno, this is a 2005 like-song. People aren't making it through like this anymore. Do the music that you like be it rapping or soul music, whatever! Don't be afraid. I'll keep an eye on you.
I also think that you should loose a bit of the autotune...but it's catchy, a very good start! keep working, i think you could do something bigger...gd luck :)
Well, it's a good base for a song...You should fasten it up and put a club banger background beat + you should invent a line or a nickname that you will say in every song you sing like Pitbull for example. Follow your heart and create by what you feel. And since you're a dancer, follow your body movement and sing. If you know what I mean :D Good luck ;)
lack of pitch control and far too monotone due to the autotune. put more dynamics and get the fucking autotune out of there. add some motion to the melody. you may have a good voice but the autotune drowns it out. also add some harmonies in there. the bassline and the beat is layed down pretty nice. thats my honest opinion . it has potential. good luck.
I read your comment on the party rock anthem vid, and you can sing alright, though I am not really into this kind of genré, you do have lots of talent.
The song is OK but there is way too much auto-tune. But you definetly got potential and hopefully Usher and the company who you were working with think you're good enough
It`s not a bad song....but if the beat would be more MAN...not pussy like...it would be a hit..and if you don`t edit your voice and sing like a bitch...;)
One of the best songs I've ever heard that was made by an amatuer. I think you have alot of potential, just keep working and hopefully you'll get signed!
I don't like the beat. I don't like the song. I don't feel like doing anything when I listen to it. I SUGGEST GET MORE POWERFUL MUSIC THAT CAN MAKE YOU DANCE OR MAKE YOU WANNA DANCE. This is just my opinion.
you have a really pretty voice, but i think your song still can improve I mean: from 0:49 to 0:54 you have a tired track, you know the kind of track one would prefer to cut away. I wish you all the best... But,,, in general I loved it
dude, your amazing. you have a great voice! i right songs but i cant sing i have a perfect song for you that you would make it 10x better, please reply, thanks.
hmm i dont know about the song :\ abit crap... your voice sounds really multi-tracked and messed with and that worries me because it makes me question if you can sing without all the technical help. but otherwise you sound like you have some potential! but like @simnikiwe1 said, if its what you really want, then it shouldnt matter what we think... just go for it babe!<3
@PrettiBoyGhost u never said that u said :S i will learn to read when u learn to write :P jokes just saying "its koo, i dont really like pop either... i just did a song like this cus i knew mostly other people would like it" its not the best way to get people to like ur music
honest opinon, dude i got everthin the voice the rite music u deserve to be on jive records I can't say everthin that is good about u but i wish u the best of luck :)
I think.. cut down on the autotune so that your real voice can come through, but I guess that's up to the producer (the one you'll hopefully get).. other than that, good luck man!
i like the idea of this song but you really need to fix the lyrics man. the chorus is okay but the verses do not flow at all. i'm not trying to be mean, just trying to give some perspective!
i like the song bro.... it does need to be professionaly recorded man but you do have the talent... ima check out a video where you dance. good luck man hope all goes good for u.
hmmmm...to be honest....you are rly good....i think your voice will be perfect with songs like ''Hot Girl'' that R.I.O sings....keep up the good...rly nice
It's pretty good! Like you said you do need a studio, that would make the audio better. But other than that it's pretty good!!! Keep up the good work and I hope you become famous 1day.☺ Sincerely, QueanOFMusic
awsome u need to be famous!!
TheBRay02 2 days ago
you deserve to be more than a dancer! i hope jive records will sign you!! i like the song and your voice! :)) good luck!!
sexyhonig1863xD 1 month ago
it's a nice song ; i'd like to hear you singing another style of music to compare it with this one...cuz in my opinion you did very well so far...full support
grigoflow 1 month ago
sounds good, maybe move the beat a little faster tho
Lindsayifyable 1 month ago
i like it :) you could go places ! love your voice ! :)
1478Emma 1 month ago
you need to sing with more passion not "shes a bad girl" do "Shes a baaad girrrrl"
SYRUPNDINOS 1 month ago
Sounds good ;P congratssss :) kisses**
lauramager 1 month ago
Sometimes u go too fast which isn't the best, but song is pretty good in general!
Greetings from Croatia!
filipmisko 1 month ago
You sound like another Lil Wayne =/
Miranlin 2 months ago
i would definitely buy it.
TheTheliked 2 months ago
I can hear heavy auto tune... was waiting to hear your voice without it throughout the song. Anyways, like the rest said, do covers first and dont use so much auto tune. All the best.
jeynalim 2 months ago
Great track man but the auto-tune sonunds terrible :-( Sorry, just being honest. If you've written and produced all this music with garageband, i'd love to see what you can do in a studio. :-)
orientalsuicide 2 months ago
Singing is not your thing...maybe writing and producing.....
freejdc2 2 months ago
it's good it just needs to be recorded better good job though good luck ;)
Sh0ked 3 months ago
Ahhh the auto tune...
Do a cover on a new song. You'll get more viewers.
Great job though, just make sure you sing , not the editing system.
C0DSNIP3R 3 months ago
Too much autotune bro, try doing covers. Now a days people seem to get more attention by doing that, you might have the talent but you gotta work more on it, perhaps do a song with out auto-tuning it so much. Trust me people that head that way don't get anything but haters and trolls. i.e Rebecca Black
javystar22 3 months ago
THIS IS SUPER DOPE!
youngroach724 3 months ago
nice :D
i like your style :D
im subscribe :D
laelmoOxXo 3 months ago
sup pal!
As some ppl already told, first of all, do the kindda song u really like, it'll always sound better than any other! Cuz u'll do with luv u know!?
Second stuff, lay off the autotune, it does make ppl think u got no talent!
third - keep it up with the good work man, but believe me, u'll only be successful by the time u start singin' the kindda songs u like!! N I hope u do it soon, I'll be waiting 4 that!!
Good luck!
rexardye 3 months ago
Listen clolsly.. Your Auto tune is too much + Make that song little slower .. Because words in your song is too compressed , try to get some words out of your song , and then I think it will Be okey..
MusicViruss 3 months ago
NIce :P
sleepyheartz 3 months ago
too much auto tune honey.
xxLovelyGarnetxx 3 months ago
i think your really good and deserve a chance at a real studio and label.
good luck brother
97djsg 3 months ago
i like it
imboss42 3 months ago
just wanted to add...im not a hater not at ALL you asked for an honest opinion so I gave you mine and I truly wish you'll succeed because you know gotta top your dance career!!!!:) and overall you don't want to be an artist with no future so just keep up your work!
HipHopFan1654 3 months ago
iight soooo im a huge r&b/soul all that fan...thats to start with...but your piece it sounds a little bit repetative like there are probably 50songs about a bad girl....then please please pleeeease take off that autotuning it will just get in a way for you...and I would recomend you to experiment with this song a little bit like lrerecord it in different tempos maybe, change up some things in the lyrics and all that kind of shhhhhtuff and compare them afterwards honestly you got nothing to lose
HipHopFan1654 3 months ago
@jesseDConnell ima check ur vids bro
PrettiBoyGhost 4 months ago
@PrettiBoyGhost Thanks bro! That's sick u got to be in OMG that's a dream to live right there!
jesseDConnell 4 months ago
Nice job dude. Sounds good. Yeah u gotta get it professionally recorded though
jesseDConnell 4 months ago
@jesseDConnell thannks man i really appreciate.
PrettiBoyGhost 4 months ago
@PrettiBoyGhost No problem
jesseDConnell 4 months ago
uhmm really, i think that effect made your song sound so bad. You are good!! butt i think better try without that effect!! go on rocking!
marulera27 4 months ago
THUMBS UP! if Justin Bieber's Mistletoe video brought you here!!
TristenMovies 4 months ago
@TristenMovies
No way in hell
Bieber sucks!
I came here by Lil Wayne vid
rexardye 3 months ago
There's a reason why Jay-z said there's a death of Auto-Tune. Stick to dancing babe. You won't make it in the business singing...not with the kind of artists out there. Much love.
SEXiAFRiCANPRiNCESS 4 months ago
Dunno, this is a 2005 like-song. People aren't making it through like this anymore. Do the music that you like be it rapping or soul music, whatever! Don't be afraid. I'll keep an eye on you.
vinexlaser 4 months ago
@vinexlaser yea i miss that era... i appreciate it though ill def keep it up thanks!
PrettiBoyGhost 4 months ago
I'm just not feelin' it. Like your not singing by the song. Without emotion!
AtTheEnd1000 5 months ago
I think there is too much Autotune.
Slitka 5 months ago
Love your voice!
love the song :]
good job and good luck , you are awsome!!!
Best regards from israel ♥
XDandiTaeminX 5 months ago
i like your voice. the song is pretty cool too. i think you have potential to do well in the business :)
Frankii1212 5 months ago
the song is not good.... and if you want to get a record deal don't start with auto tune bro
lookatmenowbeach 5 months ago
this is fully autotuned!! but the tune is not so bad
ilysasha 5 months ago
I also think that you should loose a bit of the autotune...but it's catchy, a very good start! keep working, i think you could do something bigger...gd luck :)
PaBrateKorisnik 5 months ago
I love your lyrics, and the beat, but if you lay of the autotune you'll be okay.
Try and record the song again only without autotune.
Autotune truly does ruin a song.
GameberrySmoothie 6 months ago
Well, it's a good base for a song...You should fasten it up and put a club banger background beat + you should invent a line or a nickname that you will say in every song you sing like Pitbull for example. Follow your heart and create by what you feel. And since you're a dancer, follow your body movement and sing. If you know what I mean :D Good luck ;)
2Bdanii 6 months ago
i think it's really good. i would definitely buy it on i tunes :D
nicolejadexx1 6 months ago
get better lyrics
LilChiva1414 6 months ago
very nice
Mrbatskop 6 months ago
But I agree with the others you need to put some emotion into it :)
SkellyLeigh 6 months ago
This is good!
SkellyLeigh 6 months ago
Man,you have verry good voice,keep doing like that and you will be famous one day trust me ;)
Bolecar96 6 months ago
lack of pitch control and far too monotone due to the autotune. put more dynamics and get the fucking autotune out of there. add some motion to the melody. you may have a good voice but the autotune drowns it out. also add some harmonies in there. the bassline and the beat is layed down pretty nice. thats my honest opinion . it has potential. good luck.
uckid4ever 6 months ago
@uckid4ever <---- what he said
MrImmuneity 6 months ago
Its good very good but u should sing songs with a faster beat!
backoff2020 6 months ago
I like your voice and the song is pretty good :)
4everMahomie 6 months ago
monotone..... sounds like you put no effort into it..
3DIRT3 6 months ago
Um...no offense, but if you don't like the style, don't sing it. You'll always do better on a style you really like.
It was actually pretty good singing, but lay off the autotuning. It just makes people think you have no talent, even if you're really good.
TheArtOfBeingInsane 6 months ago 2
You have potential, dont waste it on a genre your not into.
killa932777 6 months ago
@TheArtOfBeingInsane But every singer uses Auto Tune!... :p
allahswaggerrVEVO 1 month ago
I read your comment on the party rock anthem vid, and you can sing alright, though I am not really into this kind of genré, you do have lots of talent.
robinoman1 6 months ago
The song is OK but there is way too much auto-tune. But you definetly got potential and hopefully Usher and the company who you were working with think you're good enough
saschaheims 6 months ago
:) Liking this!!
cheddarcheese412 6 months ago
nice one
AmsheeHassan 6 months ago
It`s not a bad song....but if the beat would be more MAN...not pussy like...it would be a hit..and if you don`t edit your voice and sing like a bitch...;)
dukiofree 6 months ago
One of the best songs I've ever heard that was made by an amatuer. I think you have alot of potential, just keep working and hopefully you'll get signed!
ErikIsYoDaddy 6 months ago
The song is a little annoying, repetitive, and too tweaked, but for sure you can sing. Record something better and you will have a hit!
brnsurgeon00 6 months ago
I don't like the beat. I don't like the song. I don't feel like doing anything when I listen to it. I SUGGEST GET MORE POWERFUL MUSIC THAT CAN MAKE YOU DANCE OR MAKE YOU WANNA DANCE. This is just my opinion.
nikeshocksshocks 6 months ago
you have a really pretty voice, but i think your song still can improve I mean: from 0:49 to 0:54 you have a tired track, you know the kind of track one would prefer to cut away. I wish you all the best... But,,, in general I loved it
justin07777 6 months ago
I think its pretty good, and i like your voice, but im really not into the beat and music.(: ( i still think you should get signed)
DaFunkGurls 6 months ago
It has potential, I suggest you lay off the Autotune just a bit, it's too heavy.
MistakenMarq 6 months ago
I like it!! :)
giovannaeme 6 months ago
your music style is not my favourite style, but it sounds nice and I think you may have success career. God bless you !
razaudi 6 months ago
love it! don´t lisent to hater! ;) one day i will happy to say that i was one of the first people to listen to Malcolm Stylez !
(sorry for my bad inglesh)
MsMg96 6 months ago
this is great! nice work! but its, hmm how to say it, too soft? i don't really know
what word to fit here, but you got talent! and i hope to see you putting efforts in your singing career.YOU CAN DO IT.
danielnordin 6 months ago
dude, your amazing. you have a great voice! i right songs but i cant sing i have a perfect song for you that you would make it 10x better, please reply, thanks.
did i metion your amazing? ;)
ohaha12 6 months ago
@Eloquence34 hop off my dick
PrettiBoyGhost 6 months ago
Hey Bo this is good. Soon I'll be seein you on tv with the big playahs
nerd1925 7 months ago
if your voice wasnt in the song then it would be good the beat is good doe
xxConniexxx1 7 months ago
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xxConniexxx1 7 months ago
like!
TheKenthope 7 months ago
Yo this is pretty fresh u got talent
cole2eric 7 months ago
Dude its okay i think if you put a little more work in it you I would buy your records man ;D yo good luck manl
ZZZzzRuta 7 months ago
hmm i dont know about the song :\ abit crap... your voice sounds really multi-tracked and messed with and that worries me because it makes me question if you can sing without all the technical help. but otherwise you sound like you have some potential! but like @simnikiwe1 said, if its what you really want, then it shouldnt matter what we think... just go for it babe!<3
randomizercleoXxX 7 months ago
Dude, fuck our opinions...if you want a recordin deal, then go get it. "if it's to be, it's up to you"...not us
simnikiwe1 7 months ago
Love It, But Auto Tune Rewins It! <3
GreatCaitlin 7 months ago
ummm. you have a good voice i do not like the song sorry
kohlgirl00 7 months ago 10
@kohlgirl00 its koo, i dont really like pop either... i just did a song like this cus i knew mostly other people would like it
PrettiBoyGhost 7 months ago
@PrettiBoyGhost
ya, i know,i have 2 brothers i know
kohlgirl00 7 months ago
@PrettiBoyGhost nice way to promote yourself saying you dont like what ur singing...
DeCoY6699 6 months ago
@DeCoY6699 i never said that i said pop music... read correctly next time
PrettiBoyGhost 6 months ago
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@PrettiBoyGhost u never said that u said :S i will learn to read when u learn to write :P jokes just saying "its koo, i dont really like pop either... i just did a song like this cus i knew mostly other people would like it" its not the best way to get people to like ur music
DeCoY6699 6 months ago
hats off to u
vrhuvr 7 months ago
honest opinon, dude i got everthin the voice the rite music u deserve to be on jive records I can't say everthin that is good about u but i wish u the best of luck :)
dynastywarrior202 7 months ago
MAKE ME THE R.I.O song....i want you too sing ''hot Girl'' r.i.o song...plz...
petp4p 7 months ago
Loooove it. :D I hope you get noticed! :)
MrsKyleeJonas 7 months ago
the song is awesome
1999mgl 7 months ago
one word to describe this is .... AMAZING!
ccfabulous 7 months ago
Dude ur voice is good u have the talent :)
mrbevla 7 months ago
nice
theSUNtheMOONx 7 months ago
nice dude u have talent :)
Giwrgos123yo 7 months ago
I think you need more lyrics other than "Shes a bad girl, shes scandulas" But other than that it has an awesome beat and I think youll do great!!
19MEmyselfANDi97 7 months ago
amazing song! hopefully you get noticed!! (:
cutegurl279 7 months ago
I think.. cut down on the autotune so that your real voice can come through, but I guess that's up to the producer (the one you'll hopefully get).. other than that, good luck man!
MostlyDeranged 7 months ago
good song ^^ hope u get noticed
Icame2annoyYou 7 months ago
Amazin' ♥
AaliyahMarieeeRx3 7 months ago
this is amazing...ur really good hope u go far with such a great talent tht u have there!!!!!!!!!!
cheerroxful 7 months ago
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kickthecat911 7 months ago
Man you got the voice and everything hope you get signed
KurizuKurizu 7 months ago
u probably shouldnt auto tune so much but other than that great song
jiop1234 7 months ago
Great song mate!! Get this properly recorded and I think you and the song will be able to go far!! Nice one! :))
YourFatHi 7 months ago
really good except mabey done professionally and a lil less auto tune, besides that i love the lyrics, beat and everything else! :)
TheAfroBoi 7 months ago
wow this song is great and i agree with comment under me
jesus21sanchez 7 months ago
i like the idea of this song but you really need to fix the lyrics man. the chorus is okay but the verses do not flow at all. i'm not trying to be mean, just trying to give some perspective!
Comedicmusical1327 7 months ago
autotune but good song
westbromwoohoo 7 months ago
can i have a download link?
ionizedgod 7 months ago
i like the song bro.... it does need to be professionaly recorded man but you do have the talent... ima check out a video where you dance. good luck man hope all goes good for u.
xFONZIx07x 7 months ago
You look like lil romeo lol..... btw keep it up homie
TheAleksOG 7 months ago
it's a awesome song but FUCK please this get this professionaly recorded :DD
verbs123 7 months ago 8
@verbs123 haha thanks im glad u like it. i will sumtime soon!
PrettiBoyGhost 7 months ago
Sweet video!
somereversedpeople 7 months ago
I luv it!!!!!!!!!!!
Biggy6644 7 months ago
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CocoNani12 7 months ago
AWESOME!!!!
snakefreak69 7 months ago
Love it:) great job
itsme7773 7 months ago
omg.
prettyinpimp 7 months ago
this is fresh man! Hopefully you get noticed and I can say i was one of the first thousand to know you haha
bballguy01 7 months ago 8
@bballguy01 haha i hope so 2 man... appreaictae it bro
PrettiBoyGhost 7 months ago
@PrettiBoyGhost no prob
bballguy01 7 months ago
i like it its cool something different and it not about sex like most of the songs are but awesome job
lilybud131 8 months ago
very nice
Teleswagz 8 months ago
your vocals getting better
nbldunlapjr 8 months ago
Swag!!!!!
DunkTipTV 8 months ago
@DunkTipTV SWAGG SWAG!!. lol appreciate it bruh
PrettiBoyGhost 8 months ago
It's okay, just the lyrics are kind of repetitive. But other than that good. :)
Lovmissjb93 8 months ago
@deltanwalston ha its crazy bruh
PrettiBoyGhost 8 months ago
thumbs up if you got here from big time rush world wide
EBisME94 8 months ago
you have a nice voice but i don't really like the song and there's a little bit too much autotune
cooldude10149804 8 months ago
nice (:
KF350 8 months ago
Your awesome! Hope to hear a record deal soon!
callumkhang 8 months ago
this is awsome
TheGamingShow147 8 months ago
ur rly good and might b on our radios :)
ngrdtbr 8 months ago
@ngrdtbr haha thanks
PrettiBoyGhost 8 months ago
hmmmm...to be honest....you are rly good....i think your voice will be perfect with songs like ''Hot Girl'' that R.I.O sings....keep up the good...rly nice
petp4p 8 months ago
It's pretty good! Like you said you do need a studio, that would make the audio better. But other than that it's pretty good!!! Keep up the good work and I hope you become famous 1day.☺ Sincerely, QueanOFMusic
QueanOFMusic 8 months ago
its good kind of sry for this but not that gd
anasomar1 8 months ago
it's really good, keep it going!
ThevattensLang 8 months ago
Your well good :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Theminceme 8 months ago
@Theminceme thanks appreciate it!
PrettiBoyGhost 8 months ago
@deltanwalston i appreciate it... aigh ima check out the new vids
PrettiBoyGhost 8 months ago
i appreciate it... n koo fasho
PrettiBoyGhost 8 months ago
its good man keep it up
ska8er4myholelife 8 months ago
@ska8er4myholelife i appreciate the support bro!
PrettiBoyGhost 8 months ago