Hi! I like you to recitate poems but maybe you could write them in the informations to the video? Sometimes i have to listen it twice to understand what you are saying.
people seriously don't get how deep this poem is...this here is actually how the world works...those who have the most have giving away the best part of themselves. destorying all and anything even those who go through outlets of education etc. someone, else is suffering as you develop within this system!!! its all about winners and losers and the end everyone is harmed...
I did this monologue for my year 11 trials. I got full marks! :) I did it much slower and a bit more drifty evil!
madamebiLLy82281 8 months ago
this is scary.
fiveohfourpanda 2 years ago
heavy...
Forealzchola 2 years ago 2
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SamSamSammmmy 2 years ago
this was great did you ever think of doin theatre
miketouch123 2 years ago 2
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ummmm not to be mean wat was the point of doing this?
Dullahmac14 2 years ago
ummm not to be mean wat was the point of your comment dipshit.
zildjiandrummr12 2 years ago
ummmm kinda scaryyy buh goodd =]
ixheartxshoes23 2 years ago
This Scares Me...
sexyoasis777 3 years ago
Very well done.
Shirotaka92 3 years ago
HAHAH! This is awesome in a very creepy/chilling way
Jmusec 3 years ago
this was so awesome!
jermdukes2007 3 years ago
You wrote such a creative dialog? I loved it. It was freakishly wonderful and inspiring to other creative minds.
EclecticTones 3 years ago 2
luvin it x
becci8861 3 years ago
II BLAME THIS VIDEO FOR MY NIGHTMARE FABLED! LOL! I WATCHED THIS BEFORE I WENT 2 SLEEP!. ii hope u enjoyed the response. ha!
KayKirb 3 years ago
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the dark background and evil voice contradict the line "But men can seldom identify me"...
i would have liked to see more nuance... but you found a good way to get the point across...
I might try this one...
Musicpri1988 3 years ago
ummmm...okaaaay
FabledVerse 3 years ago
Sometimes...you scare me
vyseisheretoo 3 years ago
The clarity of this, is amazing.
DarknessBlackness 3 years ago 4
this was dope f.v.
great delivery and video!
Dreaontv 3 years ago 2
Hi! I like you to recitate poems but maybe you could write them in the informations to the video? Sometimes i have to listen it twice to understand what you are saying.
eMJeyCGN 3 years ago
wooow...
she2much4u 3 years ago
This poem is simply brilliant. Good find, and great delivery
Taraemusic 3 years ago
Hey I've met that guy before. He took my Power rangers morphing bot when I was 7. That asshole.
callmeQ 3 years ago
he took yours too.
damn damn damn.
hight0wertv 3 years ago
Thanks for sharing your creativity! I still remember when you did "The Blind Boy". Was that what it was called? Much appreciated.
Hugz! C a l v i n
sfcalvinaz 3 years ago
That was really.... crazy-awesome, I actually enjoyed it, It was so... deep, and the visuals helped with the creepy mood.
thien0995 3 years ago
kinda kreepy but fitting for wat its ment for lol always love the quoted words :D
~G~
cuteboi1226 3 years ago
5*'s
hight0wertv 3 years ago
ok - u sound like geoffrey holder lol
(aka punjab from annie) - hilarious!
great selection and great presentation
zeeartfuldodger 3 years ago
people seriously don't get how deep this poem is...this here is actually how the world works...those who have the most have giving away the best part of themselves. destorying all and anything even those who go through outlets of education etc. someone, else is suffering as you develop within this system!!! its all about winners and losers and the end everyone is harmed...
givemewisdom 3 years ago
this was fucking GENIUS!!!! AND, I LOVE U FOR IT!!!
givemewisdom 3 years ago
Luhved it! Beautiful... Did u pratice this? LOL Either way... Great job!
My favorite part is
Perhaps I will protest
What I have long suspected,
That all along I have only been doing
My Maker's will,
Winnowing away the chaff from the wheat.
Somehow I know
That will never stand up in court.
HILARIOUS!
rb06 3 years ago
WELCOME BACK!!! You delivered this with such perfection... I love the intonation and diction... GREAT VIDEO!!!
One Luv
Pat (5 of them thangz)
★★★★★
pln30906 3 years ago
LOL, does this mean bush is the devil?? lol, j/k.
My fav. part was:
"Five were wise, five were foolish;"
One shall be taken, the other left--"
Good stuff.
atlien06 3 years ago