@Serun dude ur just an asshole this nigga right here singin/rapin his heart out an gotta put him down this shit koo quit ya hatein an get off dis shit ur no worth it but dajjal koo song nigga
I can relate to the lyrics....like myself I have been through the hoops of having a decent song but no track to match my own talents....but keep your head up....the wonders of a studio will kill that....peace.....I like what i hear
Thanks for the PM dude, I dig your track! If I may, I'd like to offer some advice: get yourself a better DJ man, your current instrumentals don't do your lyrics justice, and your flow cant evolve without a good audio tech
soo true dawg. ur fresh as fuck. u ever heard of the builderberg group? look it up. ur fresh as fuck. you should make a song about the new world order and the verichips an shit ya mean? look em up if u dunno what im talkin about. u got some fresh rhymes homie
Wow thank you for sending me this music.It is very deep.I love the part "fuck the gods have a little bit of faith in man". Peace and good luck ill listen!
Well to be brutally honest, it was kind of monotone, which pulled most of the emotion out of the song (plus why did you work with some gay green day tune?)Your voice didn't sound really raw or hard (or maybe this song didn't present that very well), if I hear Vinnie Paz rhyme "Im a marxist and a fucking godless heathon" I really feel it, when you rhyme it it's a little too sweet.
I do like the lyrics and I think there is alot of potential to go from, but a long long way to go my friend :)
i like the beat to this track. you sound like an og rapper, like snoop dogg.or p diddy.mostly p diddy. youre a good guy and rapper. good luck man.i think you can do it.
by this song I see you have some hidden knowlege but you have to know that your time is up and "mankind" can't move up the stairway to heaven anymore. Your style is going out of style soon so enjoy the brief time you got and try to trick as many children of God you can.
we can't let you all travel the stars up there because you would get us all killed.
the instrumental is a shit man
santiwade 5 months ago
Gee u suck horse cock sir!
Serun 1 year ago
@Serun dude ur just an asshole this nigga right here singin/rapin his heart out an gotta put him down this shit koo quit ya hatein an get off dis shit ur no worth it but dajjal koo song nigga
sparkblunt420 1 year ago
GREAT =D I like
piizn 1 year ago
am feelin this shit bro
ABM2010yo 1 year ago
You are in the new top 10 of my favorite underground rappers. 2 people below Immortal Tech. Gratz.
AstralRecordings 1 year ago
you dont deserve thumbs down. this songs is hella dope.
The831BayArea 1 year ago
Maybe better quality on the sound of your lyrics? Sounds amateur-ish.
ChazSupreme 1 year ago
This is a really good song mate DEEP thumbs up
h4tchetman 1 year ago
this is pop right?
Sugarshush 1 year ago
hey would you ever want to collab
RealFutureStar33 1 year ago
Fuck that, this is more than awesome....
TheLuciferianAvatar 1 year ago
Awesome!
TheLuciferianAvatar 1 year ago
bomb shit homes.
MrTeaBag1212 1 year ago
Thats some real shit right there. Keep it up.
MetalPaint565 1 year ago
nice bro!
badrakascarface 1 year ago
I can relate to the lyrics....like myself I have been through the hoops of having a decent song but no track to match my own talents....but keep your head up....the wonders of a studio will kill that....peace.....I like what i hear
sideeq2002 1 year ago
A couple people have said it already, but congrats on the new mike! It's much better than the old one.
VulcanFleet 1 year ago
Not that 1 line rhymes but thats not even it beat doesnt match and yah just kinda ammitureish
moe1243 1 year ago
loving the new shit keep it up!
minilamby123 1 year ago
this is siick broo
thundershock66 1 year ago
Fuck the illuminati! Fuck the Pentagon! Fuck the Masonary!
THUG LIFE CODE ! fuckers !
BVRVVK 1 year ago
No offense to you whatsoever mate, but this instrumental was just plain whack. In my opinion, it didn't seem to suit the lyrics at all.
It seems that bioLogickk got to it first, but yes, I agree with what he said.
It also seems like you got a better mic! Your voice sounds very clear now! That's already a good step to your dream.
Sorry I didn't post on the day you posted, I was busy with work these days.
Keep up the good work! I'll try to continue supporting!
inf1lnl1t1i 1 year ago
different style man, i like it. good job
MayleneBurnsRed 1 year ago
nice job bro (;
McRoomster2009 1 year ago
sick and sweet ;)
kateandnick123 1 year ago
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regielou 1 year ago
Thanks for the PM dude, I dig your track! If I may, I'd like to offer some advice: get yourself a better DJ man, your current instrumentals don't do your lyrics justice, and your flow cant evolve without a good audio tech
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regielou 1 year ago
@bioLogickk...totally agree with u about the dj! lol. he needs 2 b sacked!
regielou 1 year ago
Amazing text. Respect man.
BVRVVK 1 year ago
DOPE!
liamaries 1 year ago
Hehe I like this alot but the beat was kinda funny soundong still tight though
unluckybee 1 year ago
pretty dope
90hockeyplaya 1 year ago
KEEEPP THE LYRICS. awesome.. but if you could make a remix with a different sound and beat? sure it'd be cool. goodjob. thumbs up.
mofogachoga 1 year ago
good lyrics nice beat but the singing wasnt my favortie
whiteboy420pothead 1 year ago
shit tight dawg
sickx3rolasx3 1 year ago
good job buddy. Hope you make it and wish you best of luck
chris2dbone 1 year ago
nice raps man, feelin this shit
FoUr2wEnTy420 1 year ago
Not bad.
Aniwazoa 1 year ago
not that good.... sorry :/
HolywafflzFtw 1 year ago
you sound kinda bad...
MsTwistedThoughts 1 year ago
1 percent of the world is ruling us all
they got 90 percent of the money n nuclear bombs
soo true dawg. ur fresh as fuck. u ever heard of the builderberg group? look it up. ur fresh as fuck. you should make a song about the new world order and the verichips an shit ya mean? look em up if u dunno what im talkin about. u got some fresh rhymes homie
pattyboy424 1 year ago
hip hop but with a very wierd beat. xD i love it keep it up the message will conquer all!
Ratpick45 1 year ago
Good Job! ;)
BloomITM 1 year ago
Rate + Comment + SubCrib !
54MusTiii54 1 year ago
nice, recording deal bro, contact some1
mattthecow1 1 year ago
nice guitar backround
ninjabx101 1 year ago
dope lyrics beat not so much but thats nasty
ToOflYgAmiNg 1 year ago
lol this dude is empowered by satan
IndonesiaNegaraKu 1 year ago
damn your god puffy
hempnight250 1 year ago
Wow thank you for sending me this music.It is very deep.I love the part "fuck the gods have a little bit of faith in man". Peace and good luck ill listen!
crappieya 1 year ago
nice man how do u do this stuff
NEXcorp000 1 year ago
Great content!
Needs better production
djqaran 1 year ago
this song is fire man... nice track.
AREVERB 1 year ago
that's pretty sick. the lyrics are reallll nice but I don't think your flow is right for that beat. other than that this is a pretty sick song.
sophisticatedstoner 1 year ago
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I was born a pussy a child of a whore
Im a dicksucker like my father the biggest dicklover(((Whahah)Bitch Go fuck ur mama!!Cuz i kno u aint getting bitchess
koerdowmaster 1 year ago
nice
like it
but quality is bad
really go to the recording studio and make an album)
ctrchika 1 year ago
This is the truth, spoken and gathered from the heart.
lduvelle 1 year ago
nice...h.
theshirzadegan1 1 year ago
Like the alternative style man, check out CyrilSneer1982
CyrilSneer1982 1 year ago
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suck really hard!
mugge13 1 year ago
Your raps Are Really Good Its About Life You awesome (:Comment On Mine yeah :) Love Brogan x
welshbrogan1 1 year ago
Great song,Keep it up bro.
JinxProz 1 year ago
awsome
MegaDavo2010 1 year ago
Amazin Mate!
NsLStaR 1 year ago
I Like This!
13vaidas14 1 year ago
this really good bro :)) i like it! :D
KaneDogg94 1 year ago
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was gonna tell you to fuck off, but this is aight i guess...
Devon187 1 year ago
Great but the audio needs some fixing!
Samminsane47 1 year ago
str8
TwatHammer131 1 year ago
do not take a record deal they will fuk u up
givemetenth2010 1 year ago
@givemetenth2010 I agree
LittleDrummerBoy239 1 year ago
; Rap/Hip-Hop's fifteen minutes are over, time to move into Black Metal.
Cheers!
12Zwolf 1 year ago
good stuff
CrimeTeVo 1 year ago
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very good
thomascow1 1 year ago
dope
MrMannyFesto 1 year ago
very good pal
32UnitedIreland 1 year ago
Nice work!!!
xxlaceylacexx 1 year ago
Good track (:
+5
MsRaiS1 1 year ago
danm i thought you were gonna be some little wanna be but if you spit about what matters and not about bitchs and hoes and youll do good
vwellthen 1 year ago
That's just, just dope!
The best thing to ever come out of sounding like satanic bliss!
myztainzydeout 1 year ago
It was OK. I thought the beat didn't really go. Try with real hip hop beats. Not these rock mixes. :-)
mugen1237 1 year ago
not bad dope lyrics beat is aight
jcstlo 1 year ago
this songs fucking garbage...
flyingboatdriver 1 year ago
dope flow homie .
skateforlifee702 1 year ago
Keep it up man, need some serious beats to go with those lyrics, then you got it locked.
Keep going.......
flyingmarc00 1 year ago
good music
great lyrics
thanks
dtginternational 1 year ago
i liked it
But i think you should work on the quality best of luck
weaam1910 1 year ago
yeh thats cool man
pinball281 1 year ago
Keep on rockin!
DDTrampled 1 year ago
damn this is some nice stuff you got here! no bad at all! keep it up yo
madapina 1 year ago
Keep it up
Spyder8561 1 year ago
kool
MrUnTouchAble103 1 year ago
nice style changing,kept message,AWSOMME!!! but you still have to make some 3min+ songs xD!! :D keep up good work!
thebouboule007 1 year ago
dude awesome song you are great keep it up ! :)
DeadBoy434 1 year ago
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Well to be brutally honest, it was kind of monotone, which pulled most of the emotion out of the song (plus why did you work with some gay green day tune?)Your voice didn't sound really raw or hard (or maybe this song didn't present that very well), if I hear Vinnie Paz rhyme "Im a marxist and a fucking godless heathon" I really feel it, when you rhyme it it's a little too sweet.
I do like the lyrics and I think there is alot of potential to go from, but a long long way to go my friend :)
Homerus 1 year ago
Glad to hear a song thats not about clubs and sex
xXxDetoxxXx 1 year ago
this is fucking great!!
xTrOniiK 1 year ago
Wow this is amazing. I love this.
parentaladvisory121 1 year ago
I love the beats, flow of the words and lyrics. All I would suggest is a bit more clarity in your words. You've got extreme potential though.
vvolfflovv 1 year ago
AHH SHIT YEAH , this is going in my favs :) . getting better and better mate , and the sound levels of the vocals is much better .. I LOVE IT PEACE
ohhhREALY 1 year ago
Hey this is pretty good
GorryProductions 1 year ago
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burn your rhyme book and make something useful of it, keep yourself warm.
GunRomancer 1 year ago
i gotta be honest. im not a fan of this song. go back to the old heavy beat shit!! undergrounds gonna come back!!
mean71cuda 1 year ago
Nice! BUMP THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
trevor55757 1 year ago
chill beat
LandOfAryan 1 year ago
damn bro your lyrics are powerful ,much respect.
TheGhillieCutter 1 year ago
powerful lyrics man.
RedAsterisk 1 year ago
good good sh**
CHEA!
HomeTownPublishing 1 year ago
This song is lookin like chillin
CRYPTfromCATACOMBZ 1 year ago
pretty good
MrUnTouchAble103 1 year ago
i like the beat to this track. you sound like an og rapper, like snoop dogg.or p diddy.mostly p diddy. youre a good guy and rapper. good luck man.i think you can do it.
SimplyShadow 1 year ago
not bad
TheOfficialAnomaly 1 year ago
sounds good man
hardcoreberlinj 1 year ago
Ye man you really need a record, youve got the skills.
TheRealMindblock 1 year ago
- i love this kinda shit man, i love it! real message, real lyrics. you just got another subscriber. going on my ipod f'real.
KingKanzKan 1 year ago
Love it, man.
powerofthepistols 1 year ago
by this song I see you have some hidden knowlege but you have to know that your time is up and "mankind" can't move up the stairway to heaven anymore. Your style is going out of style soon so enjoy the brief time you got and try to trick as many children of God you can.
we can't let you all travel the stars up there because you would get us all killed.
supermike2164 1 year ago
u got the tupac kinda style
bkormann12 1 year ago
@bkormann12 Nah lol not a Pac style :P Dope thoughh, I'll buuy ur shit.
iNvat0rZim 1 year ago
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You suck. Get off your candy ass beats and spit some meaningful lyrics.
mamaloney1 1 year ago
dude, when are you going to get a record deal?
PersoAryanism 1 year ago 16
@PersoAryanism nah nah, he goes mainstream his lyrics will get watered down fam, keep this shit underground!
Salamovic 1 year ago
yes we will, but are we not doing that already by our own standards? lmlao peace man. one love
HahRyzun360 1 year ago
Nice song mate...
LAZrailkapinda 1 year ago
Really Dope. I really like that you were able to change up your style without changing your message. props man.
sjvdude 1 year ago 12