animation: a little slow, like walking in syrup. it could do with more bounce as well. pay attention to his silhouette. you need to work on the facial animation as well- when you watch this without audio, you cant tell what your chara is thinking. as for everything else, it looks kind of dull - theres ALOT of grey in this video so it doesnt stand out. did your chara have to have a grey shirt? more variety in the colours please.
sorry tht all sounded really harsh ^^; but i think it would help u.
yeah it was my first real ani and it had to have the shirt i was wearing the day we took the pics and i wasnt thinking much about composition as i was trying to get it done it was a tough couple of months lol look at my other animation with the rig I got online its much nicer but theres still a lot of stuff I need to "learn" instead of "look up" you know?
Nice run cycle. The other animation is a bit wonky though.
staticenz 1 year ago
@staticenz thanks lol it's a year old, I'm a bit better now
TheExiledLeader 1 year ago
and the "animate tall buildings" lol there's nothing to animate
TheExiledLeader 2 years ago
lol there was comedic intent
TheExiledLeader 2 years ago
animation: a little slow, like walking in syrup. it could do with more bounce as well. pay attention to his silhouette. you need to work on the facial animation as well- when you watch this without audio, you cant tell what your chara is thinking. as for everything else, it looks kind of dull - theres ALOT of grey in this video so it doesnt stand out. did your chara have to have a grey shirt? more variety in the colours please.
sorry tht all sounded really harsh ^^; but i think it would help u.
angelsmurf16 2 years ago
yeah it was my first real ani and it had to have the shirt i was wearing the day we took the pics and i wasnt thinking much about composition as i was trying to get it done it was a tough couple of months lol look at my other animation with the rig I got online its much nicer but theres still a lot of stuff I need to "learn" instead of "look up" you know?
TheExiledLeader 2 years ago
Good concept, but needs some more skill in animating, texturing, lighting and modeling.
darthvenom7830 2 years ago
Your name is Darth Venom. I will definitely take advice from you. hahahahahahahahahaha. No, seriously.
mtotheizzick 2 years ago
I agree. the idea is good but this could be improved.
angelsmurf16 2 years ago
Very good man!
jweinrub 2 years ago
it looked better in class lol omg roflamo ftw
kingnolife 2 years ago
um...
marsunderscorefenix 2 years ago