you and me have the same writing style write deep write whats true to you. i gota folder filled with stuff like this. keep writting man and people will keep listenin
I like the fact that you spoke to something close to your heart. More people need to cherish their families and especially their moms. I liked it, good job :)
@PeebleWeeble check this dudes channel out! he goes by the name "Daddy Dice" yet he's calling this kid a fag! hahahah real original name loser go kill yourself .. at least be intelligent and constructive
@MrMeEMP You clearly have no respect or knowledge of poetry, or grammar for that matter. Learn to spell first then maybe you can actually have an opinion worth accepting about poetry of high standards like this. Keep it up MrBrian
Not bad. I watched this after seeing your comment on CuDi's Down & Out vid, so I was expecting a freestyle to a beat or something. Or at least some dope CuDi-type music, but I reckon you could kill it on a beat man
This is really inspirational, love it! I agree with the other people and I think it would be even better if you made it more musical somehow. But seriously, keep up the good work, this is good!
So when you talked about collabing with kid cudi do you mean you wanna write him songs or that you wanna sing/rap with him? if you wanna do the one i mentioned last you should be doing real music not just talking words.... and your begging attitude makes me wanna bang your head against the table cause thats fucking annoying,, nobody have ever gotten nowhere by begging, but doing shit takes you to places! good luckk
Alright how about this. You put a beat to this and rap it, I will try my best to spread your stuff like wild fire..hehehehe. Do it. I think other people will do the same.
Hey man, have you considered putting one of your poems to a beat? or maybe collaborate with someone who knows a lot about that sort of thing...I feel you might be able to make some good music with just some basic computer programs. I mean, hell, sam adams did it. you can do it too.
Oh wow that was lovely :)
missfrizzyuk 5 months ago
These faggot haters need to hop off damn
dakillah2490 8 months ago
you and me have the same writing style write deep write whats true to you. i gota folder filled with stuff like this. keep writting man and people will keep listenin
ryan19554 8 months ago
Amazing!
zombienerfman 8 months ago
lame, lmaooooo
artfoolman 8 months ago
your comment made top on lil waynes john song. Hopefully thatll get u some views.
InsanityRewritten 8 months ago
this definitely made me cry...
PoeticallyDivine 11 months ago
this is good. keep doing you and your stuff will only get better.
matthewbonk 11 months ago 2
hey can u post the lyrics?
A2K686 11 months ago
saw your comment on the Def Jam vid like some of the otheres here, great poem mate!
PsnMOB 11 months ago
You can do much better.
imgaston 11 months ago
good job ditto the "keep it up"
WithShadesofWhite 11 months ago
keep it comin brother, im totally with you, def jam poetry has got to keep going..
lets keep this alive.
respect.
derrickdd 11 months ago
damn ... better than i expected... saw ur comment on that def jam vid
converseshoeboy 11 months ago
great poem. i cant do poetry but all the poems i ever heard in the past you could work a bit more. still really good work man
spartan001191 11 months ago
Thank god for 1080p.
Jdawgster3 1 year ago
very deep man !! good stuff
kingagu65 1 year ago
Why so much hate? Man what's wrong with people this guy's good....
Next thing you know another dumbass troll is gonna come saying he's the next Justin Bieber....
Gawsh I hate people
Dreathrevolution 1 year ago
good stuff my man keep it up! definitely subbing
VibezProductions93 1 year ago
gay.
KingKawala 1 year ago
I like the fact that you spoke to something close to your heart. More people need to cherish their families and especially their moms. I liked it, good job :)
Rustam1327 1 year ago
Your not as good as you think you are, sorry
techno3939 1 year ago
This poem changed me. It touched my heart. Let's share it out, so it may touch others.
Keonovic 1 year ago
find another hobby :(
TreyErnest 1 year ago
beautiful #GreenSquad
kiddrew21 1 year ago
awesome, your rhythm is beautiful
amparkr 1 year ago
So dope, man. Keep your shit up. Might be hard getting your name out now, but hard work will pay off.
seabass631 1 year ago
saw your comment on saul williams vid
i'm usually not even into poetry but
wow that was really good
AlexIsSmalll 1 year ago
This was so pro, I can totally relate as well.
TheMrChocolate1 1 year ago
man this is amazing, you need to make more.
Hesham11 1 year ago
great poem, I've been watching the def jam poetry and yours stands up to that quality. Would love to hear more
omgshift111 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Just watching this to show some love
JWalk 1 year ago
@SirJazz I hope that's in a good way?
Jimhupponeword 1 year ago
Gave me goosebumps, great stuff man :)
StefanoDastolfo 1 year ago
i was sure this was gonna be a spam or somethin that i hate but i was 100% wrong great poem
Devilsprinter20 1 year ago
Great poem, trully emotional...
Well done!
cursed2409 1 year ago
true soul flow essence ^.^
sagaz47 1 year ago
You sound like 'marsraps'
MeanLunch 1 year ago
I really like this, and im not really to smart on poetry.
Mattisastud91 1 year ago
oh, and i love the emotion... beautiful :]
mark95427 1 year ago
hey if you wanna go "mainstream" you should try and make a book of poems and publish it. i would definitely buy it.
mark95427 1 year ago
nice one man :D
Jimmybob2804 1 year ago
thats not a poem...
it's clearly a rap sketch.
alastarian1 1 year ago
good stuff bro! I WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOU SPIT SOME OF THIS POETRY IN A BEAT.....DID YOU EVER DO IT?
foxfiretb 1 year ago
DOPE
akeem1693 1 year ago
I don't understand everything, but some lines are amazing.
Keep the good work on ! looking forward for new videos.
Congrats from paris !
supervhvh 1 year ago
This is good. Glad to see real poetry is still alive
thanameznick 1 year ago
At first I thought this would be pretty lame. and then you proved me wrong!
RetroGamer1990 1 year ago
You're a fag.
PeebleWeeble 1 year ago
@PeebleWeeble check this dudes channel out! he goes by the name "Daddy Dice" yet he's calling this kid a fag! hahahah real original name loser go kill yourself .. at least be intelligent and constructive
tragedymusic 1 year ago
@tragedymusic You must be his bitch
PeebleWeeble 1 year ago
@PeebleWeeble Sure thing Daddy Dice
tragedymusic 1 year ago
if Def Poetry didn't get cancelled...you should be on episode
dhruv494 1 year ago
I wonder why this video has only had 3664 views so far!
ebstudiopro 1 year ago
Dude your awesome, keep it up!
hogwarzparty 1 year ago
White Martin Luther King Jr.
13370wn4g3g4m3r 1 year ago
really nice. keep it up:)
ashleyrasshy78 1 year ago
this is deep shit great work
drixcarlson94 1 year ago
your horrible you might as well ga home
MrMeEMP 1 year ago
@MrMeEMP You clearly have no respect or knowledge of poetry, or grammar for that matter. Learn to spell first then maybe you can actually have an opinion worth accepting about poetry of high standards like this. Keep it up MrBrian
Ecrip10 1 year ago
@MrMeEMP ok sir let me see you put a poem up in 1080p and than we can all discuss that ok?
tiente1190 1 year ago
Not bad. I watched this after seeing your comment on CuDi's Down & Out vid, so I was expecting a freestyle to a beat or something. Or at least some dope CuDi-type music, but I reckon you could kill it on a beat man
andyjb49 1 year ago
I think that was just beautiful. Cheers to your success cuz u deserve it
LuvsGalaga 1 year ago
This is really inspirational, love it! I agree with the other people and I think it would be even better if you made it more musical somehow. But seriously, keep up the good work, this is good!
cementishdog 1 year ago
your shirt freaks me out cause of the shit i believe , but sick video man you truely are DOPE as you said in one of them comment :)
TheCreativeNerd 1 year ago
satanic shirt ? go fuck yourself
zeitgeisthero 1 year ago
Usually i don't click on the people who post comments on other videos to check em out.
But the way you asked i had to straight forward dude i have no prob posting this on FB. good stuff man keep it up!
mastercheeks94 1 year ago
doooooooope. keep it up.
linedefeater 1 year ago
So when you talked about collabing with kid cudi do you mean you wanna write him songs or that you wanna sing/rap with him? if you wanna do the one i mentioned last you should be doing real music not just talking words.... and your begging attitude makes me wanna bang your head against the table cause thats fucking annoying,, nobody have ever gotten nowhere by begging, but doing shit takes you to places! good luckk
LobsterBeef 1 year ago
Alright how about this. You put a beat to this and rap it, I will try my best to spread your stuff like wild fire..hehehehe. Do it. I think other people will do the same.
coldburgers 1 year ago
keep it up bro, its going on facebook.
zzIIHeLiiOsIIzz 1 year ago 13
Your words are very powerful. I think you should try to rap some of your stuff.
SORRHE 1 year ago
this was powerful man really good stuff no joke
keep up the good work
mondon8t3r 1 year ago
You have an excellent voice, and delivery. Your passion shows well.
skyling94 1 year ago
You have an excellent voice, and delivery. Your passion shows well.
skyling94 1 year ago
You have an excellent voice, and delivery. Your passion shows well.
skyling94 1 year ago
Hey man, have you considered putting one of your poems to a beat? or maybe collaborate with someone who knows a lot about that sort of thing...I feel you might be able to make some good music with just some basic computer programs. I mean, hell, sam adams did it. you can do it too.
Petaaaaah 1 year ago
Fucking beautiful!!! I will post this on my facebook liked and sub
popopopopopo8 1 year ago
Keep it up man.
This is great stuff...
i love my mom too
Slickskates 1 year ago
I need to listen to it a few more times but im liking it bro honestly keep going!
xXxLiVeMyLiFeXxX 1 year ago
nice man
bigtemarifan 1 year ago