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From: MrBrianJRoberts
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  • Oh wow that was lovely :)

  • These faggot haters need to hop off damn

  • you and me have the same writing style write deep write whats true to you. i gota folder filled with stuff like this. keep writting man and people will keep listenin

  • Amazing!

  • lame, lmaooooo

  • your comment made top on lil waynes john song. Hopefully thatll get u some views.

  • this definitely made me cry...

  • this is good. keep doing you and your stuff will only get better.

  • hey can u post the lyrics?

  • saw your comment on the Def Jam vid like some of the otheres here, great poem mate!

  • You can do much better.

  • good job ditto the "keep it up"

  • keep it comin brother, im totally with you, def jam poetry has got to keep going..

    lets keep this alive.

    respect.

  • damn ... better than i expected... saw ur comment on that def jam vid

  • great poem. i cant do poetry but all the poems i ever heard in the past you could work a bit more. still really good work man

  • Thank god for 1080p.

  • very deep man !! good stuff

  • Why so much hate? Man what's wrong with people this guy's good....

    Next thing you know another dumbass troll is gonna come saying he's the next Justin Bieber....

    Gawsh I hate people

  • good stuff my man keep it up! definitely subbing

  • gay.

  • I like the fact that you spoke to something close to your heart. More people need to cherish their families and especially their moms. I liked it, good job :)

  • Your not as good as you think you are, sorry

  • This poem changed me. It touched my heart. Let's share it out, so it may touch others.

  • find another hobby :(

  • beautiful #GreenSquad

  • awesome, your rhythm is beautiful

  • So dope, man. Keep your shit up. Might be hard getting your name out now, but hard work will pay off.

  • saw your comment on saul williams vid

    i'm usually not even into poetry but

    wow that was really good

  • This was so pro, I can totally relate as well.

  • man this is amazing, you need to make more.

  • great poem, I've been watching the def jam poetry and yours stands up to that quality. Would love to hear more

  • @SirJazz I hope that's in a good way?

  • Gave me goosebumps, great stuff man :)

  • i was sure this was gonna be a spam or somethin that i hate but i was 100% wrong great poem

  • Great poem, trully emotional...

    Well done!

  • true soul flow essence ^.^

  • You sound like 'marsraps'

  • I really like this, and im not really to smart on poetry.

  • oh, and i love the emotion... beautiful :]

  • hey if you wanna go "mainstream" you should try and make a book of poems and publish it. i would definitely buy it.

  • nice one man :D

  • thats not a poem...

    it's clearly a rap sketch.

  • good stuff bro! I WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOU SPIT SOME OF THIS POETRY IN A BEAT.....DID YOU EVER DO IT?

  • DOPE

    

  • I don't understand everything, but some lines are amazing.

    Keep the good work on ! looking forward for new videos.

    Congrats from paris !

  • This is good. Glad to see real poetry is still alive

  • At first I thought this would be pretty lame. and then you proved me wrong!

  • You're a fag.

  • @PeebleWeeble check this dudes channel out! he goes by the name "Daddy Dice" yet he's calling this kid a fag! hahahah real original name loser go kill yourself .. at least be intelligent and constructive

  • @tragedymusic You must be his bitch

  • @PeebleWeeble Sure thing Daddy Dice

  • if Def Poetry didn't get cancelled...you should be on episode

  • I wonder why this video has only had 3664 views so far!

  • Dude your awesome, keep it up!

  • White Martin Luther King Jr.

  • really nice. keep it up:)

  • this is deep shit great work

  • your horrible you might as well ga home

  • @MrMeEMP You clearly have no respect or knowledge of poetry, or grammar for that matter. Learn to spell first then maybe you can actually have an opinion worth accepting about poetry of high standards like this. Keep it up MrBrian

  • @MrMeEMP ok sir let me see you put a poem up in 1080p and than we can all discuss that ok?

  • Not bad. I watched this after seeing your comment on CuDi's Down & Out vid, so I was expecting a freestyle to a beat or something. Or at least some dope CuDi-type music, but I reckon you could kill it on a beat man

  • I think that was just beautiful. Cheers to your success cuz u deserve it

  • This is really inspirational, love it! I agree with the other people and I think it would be even better if you made it more musical somehow. But seriously, keep up the good work, this is good!

  • your shirt freaks me out cause of the shit i believe , but sick video man you truely are DOPE as you said in one of them comment :)

  • satanic shirt ? go fuck yourself

  • Usually i don't click on the people who post comments on other videos to check em out.

    But the way you asked i had to straight forward dude i have no prob posting this on FB. good stuff man keep it up!

  • doooooooope. keep it up.

  • So when you talked about collabing with kid cudi do you mean you wanna write him songs or that you wanna sing/rap with him? if you wanna do the one i mentioned last you should be doing real music not just talking words.... and your begging attitude makes me wanna bang your head against the table cause thats fucking annoying,, nobody have ever gotten nowhere by begging, but doing shit takes you to places! good luckk

  • Alright how about this. You put a beat to this and rap it, I will try my best to spread your stuff like wild fire..hehehehe. Do it. I think other people will do the same.

  • keep it up bro, its going on facebook.

  • Your words are very powerful. I think you should try to rap some of your stuff.

  • this was powerful man really good stuff no joke

    keep up the good work

  • You have an excellent voice, and delivery. Your passion shows well.

  • You have an excellent voice, and delivery. Your passion shows well.

  • You have an excellent voice, and delivery. Your passion shows well.

  • Hey man, have you considered putting one of your poems to a beat? or maybe collaborate with someone who knows a lot about that sort of thing...I feel you might be able to make some good music with just some basic computer programs. I mean, hell, sam adams did it. you can do it too.

  • Fucking beautiful!!! I will post this on my facebook liked and sub

  • Keep it up man.

    This is great stuff...

    i love my mom too

  • I need to listen to it a few more times but im liking it bro honestly keep going!

  • nice man

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