Liked your poem. I believe most of that will come true(maybe besides the animals talkin ;). But it's nice to have calm relaxed people like you around. Look forward to more:)!
You got to see the Giant causeway in person? I want to visti Ireland sooo bad :) -- loved the poem. Innocence is so hard to hold onto in this real world.
Excellent poem, and yes the simple, heartfelt honesty comes through. Beautiful photos too. Come to my intro video and see my pictures. I think you'll like them.
So nice of you to say that, thank you! I am glad you liked my photos as well. Ireland is such a beautiful place I want to share it with everyone. I will definately check out your video. =)
What a lovely poem. One of my favorite themes is the question of how an adult may bring back the innocence and wonder and open-mindedness of a child in their lives. That's something that eg. eastern philosophy (taoism, buddhism) and some esoteric/new-age traditions
What strikes me as very charming is the very literal way this poem was written. To me, this just adds to the appeal of the poem, since I see the writer -who is only 15- doesn't try to appeal older than they are. Honesty; that's what they call it.
Thank you! I too am very interested in this topic/theme, and have been for a long while now.. I think you explained the essence of my poem better than I did. I wanted that pureness/honesty to come through, but I'm afraid some might see it as being too simplistic. Anyway, thank you very much for your kind words! =)
I disabled the ratings because within a very short time (30 min at most) some one came and rated my video 6 different times just to lower it to 2 stars. I don't know why why someone would do that, but I just thought I would explain why I disabled them.
Thank you Joey! I have been working on some more recent poems and hopefully they should be ready very soon. =) .. (I know I said that before but there have been some major set backs..)
I am very glad you liked it Sam! Sorry for not being able to film myself reading my poetry just yet. For now though I hope you are enjoying my photos. =)
wow , I love this one , you are so right! where is the
kindness/peace and Innocence?
5dolphingirl 4 years ago
Liked your poem. I believe most of that will come true(maybe besides the animals talkin ;). But it's nice to have calm relaxed people like you around. Look forward to more:)!
aalex124 4 years ago
I love visiting those places. The cliffs at the Giants Causway are so big in person.
hashmeister 4 years ago
You got to see the Giant causeway in person? I want to visti Ireland sooo bad :) -- loved the poem. Innocence is so hard to hold onto in this real world.
Clereece 5 years ago
Excellent poem, and yes the simple, heartfelt honesty comes through. Beautiful photos too. Come to my intro video and see my pictures. I think you'll like them.
rhythm7a 5 years ago
So nice of you to say that, thank you! I am glad you liked my photos as well. Ireland is such a beautiful place I want to share it with everyone. I will definately check out your video. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
WOW! That was so great! I love your poems so much!:D
missmalevolent 5 years ago
Thank you, really! It still feels unreal to hear people say that they love my poems so much. I'm glad you like my work! Thanks again. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
Nice poem, I had just gotten home and was kind of in a tense mood, this poem helped me relax.=)
LittleShane 5 years ago
Thanks. That is really such a sweet comment! I'm glad my poetry was able to help you. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
What a lovely poem. One of my favorite themes is the question of how an adult may bring back the innocence and wonder and open-mindedness of a child in their lives. That's something that eg. eastern philosophy (taoism, buddhism) and some esoteric/new-age traditions
have discussed.
CleverDjembe 5 years ago
What strikes me as very charming is the very literal way this poem was written. To me, this just adds to the appeal of the poem, since I see the writer -who is only 15- doesn't try to appeal older than they are. Honesty; that's what they call it.
CleverDjembe 5 years ago
Thank you! I too am very interested in this topic/theme, and have been for a long while now.. I think you explained the essence of my poem better than I did. I wanted that pureness/honesty to come through, but I'm afraid some might see it as being too simplistic. Anyway, thank you very much for your kind words! =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
I disabled the ratings because within a very short time (30 min at most) some one came and rated my video 6 different times just to lower it to 2 stars. I don't know why why someone would do that, but I just thought I would explain why I disabled them.
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
Awseome poem. I quite like poems :D
F1lmJunkie 5 years ago
Thanks so very much! I am glad you liked it. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
i love it. its great. read some of your 'new work' now.
joeyranaway 5 years ago
Thank you Joey! I have been working on some more recent poems and hopefully they should be ready very soon. =) .. (I know I said that before but there have been some major set backs..)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
kool i like this poem i wonna be able to c u read them tho
samhartopp 5 years ago
I am very glad you liked it Sam! Sorry for not being able to film myself reading my poetry just yet. For now though I hope you are enjoying my photos. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago
Brilliant, again.
Thank you.
NotEvsie 5 years ago
You are so kind! It is I who should be thanking you, for watching and listening. =)
fourtwenty420 5 years ago