Be careful not to get swept away by the current, dragged under by a torrent of words in a whirlpool, soaked to the skin by a cascade of alliteration and onomatopoeia, and if you do get into deep water, do it naked since clothes are always a hindrance in the steam of consciousness.
Well I thought that it could have been improved considerably if I could have had a bongo playing astrophysisist like Richard Feynman for some percussive effects.
Being astute you will no doubt have noticed that the poem makes mention Tannu-Tuvan postage stamps... Feynman even though only an infinitesimal part of the general population could understand his mathematical physics captured the world attention by playing the bongos and inventing the atom bomb.
Fantastic! Going to watch part 2 now :-) X
ruth7784 2 years ago
i always enjoy a nice dip in a stream of consciousness.
mctrmt 2 years ago
Be careful not to get swept away by the current, dragged under by a torrent of words in a whirlpool, soaked to the skin by a cascade of alliteration and onomatopoeia, and if you do get into deep water, do it naked since clothes are always a hindrance in the steam of consciousness.
weegingayin 2 years ago
Too true.
mctrmt 2 years ago
Phenomenal !!! Also we all like cups of tea
kennymelodica 2 years ago
Well I thought that it could have been improved considerably if I could have had a bongo playing astrophysisist like Richard Feynman for some percussive effects.
Being astute you will no doubt have noticed that the poem makes mention Tannu-Tuvan postage stamps... Feynman even though only an infinitesimal part of the general population could understand his mathematical physics captured the world attention by playing the bongos and inventing the atom bomb.
Tuvan throat music was also missing
weegingayin 2 years ago
Yeah but you are from the woods and do big bonfires.
It is not every bodies cup of tea or mead for that matter
weegingayin 2 years ago
I like it!
hoosierhiver 2 years ago 2