Original song - Suicide Fly

[giraffe610]

I love listening to this, you have a beautiful voice :-)

[asidFact]

not badd u could be famous for that song and i think u sing pretty good and i think u could be a good artist of songs and one more thing to say good luck if u try to get a record lable or cd (=

[TheGirlfromyear3000]

i love the way you play guitar :]

[memorylane71]

i really enjoy your music very much ..

you have a tallent .

your gonna make it big some day :)

[shotgunboy0610]

you are hot! and you sing cool

[StephanieeeMarieee]

beautifully donee

[ashtarion666]

practice the timing and you got it... nice song by the way... , just stop your fingers getting distracted by your voice :) love ya,,

[ratchetnclank2007]

Wow really great voice and song.

[asidgw19]

Thanks very much for listening!

[thesexmademestupid]

Your very tallented

x

[SongofChance]

I saw your video a year ago, I thought it was very poetic. I bet you can do it a lot better now, since a year has passed. Great song. Would you consider putting an updated version up?

[asidgw19]

Thanks, yeah sure I could manage dat at some point! Watch this space :D

[1AJoe]

I commented before, I still love this song, I'm not queer, ha ha this song has so much passion. some of the greatest songs are simple

this song ain't simple! it's just great!!!!!

[asidgw19]

Thanks very much for the fab comment! an cheers fir listening!

[voverdosev]

i love it but its hard to hear you so next time maybe sing louder or something

[Agent1991]

great voice ... thanks for singing ...

[bodhival]

Wonderful sound - I'm replaying this.

[asidgw19]

thank you! glad to hear that :)

[guitarrox]

you write some amazing tunes ! very nice picking and your voice sounds superb ! rox digs your style  another 5er on ya for shore :)

[asidgw19]

Cheers very much! and thanks for taking the time to listen :)

[B0MM3R]

great voice

[asidgw19]

thanks, ive been workin on it since this song and trying to improve all the time

[OsvaldoPaese]

I really like this song. Your voice is very pretty. The lyrics are better than average. I like your guitar arpeggio's. It's a good song. I just wish it was recorded a bit better. I think the vocals should be more upfront, you know what i mean?

This makes me wanna see more of your video's.

[asidgw19]

thanx very much for your comments. I am hoping to get a few of my songs recorded properly sometime this year but at the moment im very busy with university and sport.

[a2dsmusic]

Nice original song!!

[asidgw19]

Thanx, glad u liked it!

[bbantichav]

did u wright any tab for this cos it is awsome!! an i wud like to no how to play it

[ReinaDelCid]

Wow you sound very much like the Cowboy Junkies. Have you heard them? If not, you might enjoy their music.

Nice job - very mellow. :-)

[asidgw19]

thanx, ill hav t check them out

[helewa007]

so lovely really sweet

[GregoryLog]

Love it! Great job writing the lyrics and great job on singing! A very tender song and performance!

[asidgw19]

cheers for having a listen, glad you liked it!

[XxMissChloeLouisexX]

Pure talant better than me anii day keep goin!! u shud get far!!

[asidgw19]

thanx very much!

[vinthium]

5 stars!!!

[asidgw19]

thanx!

[everybodysalone]

love it, its very 'joni mitchell' which is a good thing :)

[asidgw19]

thanx, wow im pretty happy to be compared with joni mitchell!

[jenny0285]

very impressed with your lyrics!! new found fan!! ha ha!! keep up the great work hun!! x x

[asidgw19]

thanx very much! cheers fir listenin x

[1AJoe]

Beautiful !..I found this vid by accident..What a touching song,Thank's for sharing(don't be afraid to let it out ...your good)

[asidgw19]

Thanx very much, im glad you stumbled across it!

[Ottawarocket]

Your songwriting never fails to amaze me, another great song.

Rocket

[caputnick67]

very nice... subtle ,sugestive lyrics

great texture and atmosphere. you really build a landscape in my mind.

[asidgw19]

thanx for listening and thanx very much for the comment!

[thejamesholz]

lol suicide fly :-)

[kadiehabana]

You are amazing. You are one of the most incredible artists I've ever heard. Would you mind posting the chords of the song? Thanks.

[asidgw19]

wow thanx very much! yeah sure will put it in the description

[irock198]

You did great i rated you five stars

[irock198]

you really have the talent to make it big. great job. i liked it.

[mkellers]

Nice!!thats a really good song,you definitely have talent!I really liked the tempo changes in the song aswell,keep this up,you have alot of potential to go places with your music,well done!

[asidgw19]

Wow thanx very much, an thanx for takin the time to listen!

[runeshai]

Very nice. I liked V3 the best. That and the chorus that came right after that. That part was pretty smooth. Nice lyrics though, I like it. Reminds me a little bit of Neil Gaiman.

[ateal50]

this song sucks

[califronianbadass]

yum

[califronianbadass]

sigh.. do u have a boyfreind.. im avalable ;)

[uniqueScream]

You did good, I like it. I really like the lyrics.

[asidgw19]

thanks for taking the time to listen! And thanx very much for the comment

[uniqueScream]

hey you did good, I love your voice. your lyrics are great. Don't get discouraged by what other people say, their just jealous. ;)

[wackywhitty]

this song makes me sad

[SongofChance]

good song, nice imagery, authentic. I was not bothered by the tempo by the tempo thing, it helped the song breathe a little, and usually I am a tempo nazi

[asidgw19]

Thanx, ive tried it a couple o times while keeping the tempo but im not sure if it sounds as good

[Rigel66]

I like it...Making effort to express yourself...and doing a hellava job...only giving 4 stars though...timing issues...not sure if it's intended or just...whatever. Other than that, you do seem to write lyrics well.

[SuicideFriendly]

That was cool. The words are incredibly good! Check out the song "Fly" on my Channel.

[soupie]

Ha ha, i was only jokin about the bressay thing, i live in fetlar, he he, Good luck with the open mic night:)

[asidgw19]

lol yeah i did git dat! Fetlar ay? a fair bit away fae me, im in d northmavine. Cheers

[cwfarnham]

I liked it ill sub..rock on chick..u have a good mind for lyrics.. and your playing is good..also playing and singing is very not easy!!!5!!

cwfarnham tax payer/pot smoker

[ParadiseEarth1]

Hello Antonia, real nice... I wish you would post the lyrics to your songs on the description; it makes it easier for someone like me to get into the imagery. Kind of an addiction of some sort to want to be taken into some wondrous worlds or situations by a sweet song, like yours....

[asidgw19]

thanx, lyrics are up and will do the same for my other songs

[ParadiseEarth1]

You're sweet and kind, I can't stand it anymore... I'll be on the other side of the fence and I'll keep this one close with me tonight... and no one is going to fall -- for the base of the Apex is wide as sound...

[soupie]

Boy, boy, du shuld sing a sang boot Bressay!!!

only jokin, that was actually nice, ever get any gigs?

[asidgw19]

lol thanx! I hivna actually tried t get a gig, im doin my first open mic night next tuesday tho.

[Stanno223]

cool. i like you. tempo changes are not uncommon in a lot of songs. and i think they work just fine for this one. good for you for putting your own music on here. i don't have the balls to do that yet! just covers. you're really good.

[she4me]

You play guitar well, you have a nice voice. I noticed your tempo increased twice when you started strumming. I found it interesting that you included a solo break (sans solo). Why the obsession with death?

[asidgw19]

cheers, i just taught myself to play so im still trying to work on maintaining tempo an things like that. lol im not really! Im actually quite cheery (if you would believe it). When i write lyrics certain phrases or a couple of lines pop out at me then i just carry on from there. I can see why you would think i am though, they do say its easier to write depressing songs... I have a song called 'for the glamour' which is more upbeat.