Homer Z - Two Last MorningZ [PREVIEW] Full HD 1080p + HQ

[sawmassacre13]

I don't know how long you produce music but you got a long way before you will be able to produce a decent track...............In this track the vocal was not timed well, the lead is very basic and kick is not that good,. these days more and more amateur producers are able to produce much better kicks,. The other big problem is that the sounds are not mixed properly and the mastering, Equalization is poor, I'm not a hater but I suggest you spend more time learning and not promoting yourself..

[Charbyzic]

@sawmassacre13

aha... why its the lead basic¿? In the good hardstyle, the lead its like that and its cool, this is like 2007 hardstyle, 2011 hardstyle its a shit, with rawstyle things, i like NU STYLE, NOT RAWSTYLE... And if you search any video of fl studio 9 hardstyle or something like that... in every video the music its a SHIT MAN... And i have kicks 10 times better than that, but i putted an shuffle nustylized kick, and thats cool, like showtek kicks... Bye

[Charbyzic]

And if you listen well, the SNARE ITS PERFECT, KICK ITS PERFECT PITCHED, AND LEAD ITS VERY GOOD... An normal "amateur" producer make bad snares, this snare its like professional snare if you put attention, i spend very long time for how to make the snare like in professional hardstyle, i spend more time to pitch good kicks...

[sawmassacre13]

Mate obviously you have very little experience in music production because all aspects of your music are far from perfect, as a matter of fact nothing ever is perfect even in pro productions so don't use that word. I must inform you that snares, clap are not that important. In hardstyle the KICK/Bassline and the LEAD are more important than the snares so if your kick and lead are bad than your good snares won't make it better. I hope that you'll take my view as contrastive criticism.

[Charbyzic]

@sawmassacre13

ok ok but lead its good, i dont know why you say it isnt good... and the kick its good too, it has a good pitch, not the best but its good... And why you disliked the video? -.-"

[sawmassacre13]

@Charbyzic It's not fair to say that I dislike your video or music. You are still a beginner so I was just trying to point out things that you should improve on. I'm sure that with time your production are going to be better. Good luck !!!

[pkroze]

Not bad at all ;)

[Charbyzic]

@pkroze

thx :P i think its more good hehe =))