A Park Secret

[ASAngelo]

0:57 rather

[VeniceKnipe]

Why I think so too Angelo. Thank you for making me re-visit one of my shorts. I usually fear watching them after they're posted, but I think enough time has passed for less judgment.

[ASAngelo]

I think you are doing great Ven. I imagine it is hard to see it in yourself alone sometimes.

It's difficult to be talented, creative and know what one is going for ... then see the result in reality is just not the same as the intended vision. Yes? We learn.

You leave such excellent footsteps here on youtube. You are unique. There is just no one quite like you. If you put together another video, I will do another channel share.

[VeniceKnipe]

Yes, projects often become something altogether different once edited. Just like life, it never is quite what one imagines in their head. I think that is something to achieve-to be able to vision something in ones head, and produce an exact replica.

I have not ventured deep enough into the complex network that is youtube, so it may be that there is an abundance of talent hiding all around us!

[ASAngelo]

Well said. I have seen some rich talent on youtube in abundance. But it is like anything. No one person has all the abilities. Teamwork would make a great channel or independant film engine.. hmm.

[ASAngelo]

2:57 great shot

[dancegypsy]

Another great one. The last two lines were perfection!

[VeniceKnipe]

Thank you! It was difficult fitting in everything in three minutes. (for the competition). Im glad it remains effective.

[partygirlvox]

Beautifully shot, wonderfully put together - I really like this one :D

[VeniceKnipe]

=) Thank you

p.s. AbFab was the greatest!

[partygirlvox]

So you're a fab film producer and have great taste in tv too... you rule :D

[VeniceKnipe]

Thanks. Yeah, id like to think it has a different meaning to everyone who should view it. Good luck to you too!

[ASAngelo]

I am completely impressed! 5 stars.

Your style, technique, creative aproach and cinematic eye are developing. It comes right through again Mis Knipe. You've a fine set of actoresses as well.=)

If you should ever get better equipment and be a part of a large prod. w/ bells & whistles, try not to lose unique qualities that are inherrent in your first films. Consistency of style in the creative phase makes you unique.

I do wish you well in the competition.

Regards,

your fan;)

Angelo

[VeniceKnipe]

Thank you kindly Angelo!

I agree with your advise. I hope Ive developed some style by now, and id like it to progress even more. Eventually I think my style will remain consistent. Once Ive created something that I believe is new and unseen. As long as I keep challenging myself I think I can achieve that.

#%$&<--- fingers crossed for the competition!

-venice

[mojoman1313]

i ALWAYS like your stuff. You have a unique slant on things that is always fun to watch. I never know what will come next. VENICE FOR PRESIDENT 08!

[VeniceKnipe]

Thanks! Yeah, slants are cool I kinda like them. ;) Im experimenting right now. Trying to find a style that is my own.

As far as the presidency....I think think i'll tackle filmmaking first.

[slinkstercoollady]

Cool editing effects. Nice job. Good luck with the competition1 If your up, you've got my vote!