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From: allleeeyyyx3
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  • 1- Once again the whole thing......... :D

    2-i don't have a least favorite part. I never do :P

    3- No not really. I think your writing is already brilliant. It will improve by itself and you wont even notice.

  • Amazing Chapter!

  • 1.can't choose

    2.didn't have one

    3.nope <3

  • 1. uhm.... i cant choose! AH!! IDK ALLOFIT!

    2. hmmm im gonna have to say nothing! DUH!

    3. I have none!

  • Amazing *-* I love it ^^

    I'm going to read the second chapter right now :D

  • amazing. i love this!

  • so goog!!

    1.umm the start!! LOL

    2.nothing it was all brill!!

    3.u dont need to, ur amazinggg!!!!! :DD

  • Loved it :)

    1 All of it :D

    2 None of it it was all so good :)

    3 Not sure

  • omg!!

    Amazing chapter!!!

    I loved the parts where Star says that there is only one guy who changed her life <33 I don't have a least favorite part except for the fact that David got killed :(

    Can't wait for more!!

  • 1. loved the whole thing, so emotionally hard-hitting.

    2. i didnt hate this part, just david's death is sad

    3. nope, i like it :)

  • 1.EVERYTHING

    2.NONE

    3. its GOOD as it is

  • loved it

  • 1.) The first couple of lines : ]

    2.) David's dead :/

    3.) Nope it's amazing the way it is :D

  • 1. But why was it so damn hard to deny...HER.  :D

    2. David died :(

    3. Uhm... no! Your writing is great!

  • 1. I liked it all seems like an interesting plot

    2. That david died :(

    3. I don't think u need to improve ur writing its pretty gd :)

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