1- Once again the whole thing......... :D
2-i don't have a least favorite part. I never do :P
3- No not really. I think your writing is already brilliant. It will improve by itself and you wont even notice.
shaunamarie07 1 year ago
Amazing Chapter!
JonasLifeStudios 1 year ago
1.can't choose
2.didn't have one
3.nope <3
robomex55555 1 year ago
1. uhm.... i cant choose! AH!! IDK ALLOFIT!
2. hmmm im gonna have to say nothing! DUH!
3. I have none!
Gvike2011 1 year ago
Amazing *-* I love it ^^
I'm going to read the second chapter right now :D
EffyEdwards 1 year ago
amazing. i love this!
TheRealKennaNicole 1 year ago
so goog!!
1.umm the start!! LOL
2.nothing it was all brill!!
3.u dont need to, ur amazinggg!!!!! :DD
Sophluvshorsesxoxo 1 year ago
Loved it :)
1 All of it :D
2 None of it it was all so good :)
3 Not sure
NelenaxJemixStories 1 year ago
omg!!
Amazing chapter!!!
I loved the parts where Star says that there is only one guy who changed her life <33 I don't have a least favorite part except for the fact that David got killed :(
Can't wait for more!!
minnieiscool 1 year ago
1. loved the whole thing, so emotionally hard-hitting.
2. i didnt hate this part, just david's death is sad
3. nope, i like it :)
PINAYL0VE 1 year ago
1.EVERYTHING
2.NONE
3. its GOOD as it is
13carl05 1 year ago
loved it
CasiAngeles193 1 year ago
1.) The first couple of lines : ]
2.) David's dead :/
3.) Nope it's amazing the way it is :D
JonasBrothersLove8 1 year ago
1. But why was it so damn hard to deny...HER. :D
2. David died :(
3. Uhm... no! Your writing is great!
This has been flagged as spam show
1.idk
2.david died
3.improve your writing?thats crazy
disneylvr1000 1 year ago
1. I liked it all seems like an interesting plot
2. That david died :(
3. I don't think u need to improve ur writing its pretty gd :)
Msalbel 1 year ago
1- Once again the whole thing......... :D
2-i don't have a least favorite part. I never do :P
3- No not really. I think your writing is already brilliant. It will improve by itself and you wont even notice.
shaunamarie07 1 year ago
Amazing Chapter!
JonasLifeStudios 1 year ago
1.can't choose
2.didn't have one
3.nope <3
robomex55555 1 year ago
1. uhm.... i cant choose! AH!! IDK ALLOFIT!
2. hmmm im gonna have to say nothing! DUH!
3. I have none!
Gvike2011 1 year ago
Amazing *-* I love it ^^
I'm going to read the second chapter right now :D
EffyEdwards 1 year ago
amazing. i love this!
TheRealKennaNicole 1 year ago
so goog!!
1.umm the start!! LOL
2.nothing it was all brill!!
3.u dont need to, ur amazinggg!!!!! :DD
Sophluvshorsesxoxo 1 year ago
Loved it :)
1 All of it :D
2 None of it it was all so good :)
3 Not sure
NelenaxJemixStories 1 year ago
omg!!
Amazing chapter!!!
I loved the parts where Star says that there is only one guy who changed her life <33 I don't have a least favorite part except for the fact that David got killed :(
Can't wait for more!!
minnieiscool 1 year ago
1. loved the whole thing, so emotionally hard-hitting.
2. i didnt hate this part, just david's death is sad
3. nope, i like it :)
PINAYL0VE 1 year ago
1.EVERYTHING
2.NONE
3. its GOOD as it is
13carl05 1 year ago
loved it
CasiAngeles193 1 year ago
1.) The first couple of lines : ]
2.) David's dead :/
3.) Nope it's amazing the way it is :D
JonasBrothersLove8 1 year ago
1. But why was it so damn hard to deny...HER. :D
2. David died :(
3. Uhm... no! Your writing is great!
Gvike2011 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
1.idk
2.david died
3.improve your writing?thats crazy
disneylvr1000 1 year ago
1. I liked it all seems like an interesting plot
2. That david died :(
3. I don't think u need to improve ur writing its pretty gd :)
Msalbel 1 year ago