Dancing

[romanticomelancholic]

Great coreo and awesome body articulation in overal. But yah, the timing is off of the melody.. We cant feel the emo

[chocolateorgi]

I think your technique is superb... All the moves are spot on... One tip for improvement... Show more emotion. Feel the music and let it take over your body.

Well done!

[4theGoodSoul]

@chocolateorgi huh? .. not sure it is superb..

But good effort... listen to the song. Immerse yourself in it.

Keep trying!

[thisnameisborrowed]

def work on that panche...beautiful shoulder roll..i LOVE 1:12 nice foutees! try to keep your legs straight at 1:55.. pretty split!!...overall very good!! i think you need a little bit more technique but you are definitely a lyrical dancer girl!!

[33dela33]

good work!!!!although i have to agree with lamarmickens....i can't see the passion that this song needs!!!to understand what you are dancing is the most important thing and this is what attract people that watch you!! Keep dancing!!!

[xXxL3TiZi4xXx]

the choreography is good but in my opinion all your body's too heavy.you have to improve...

[shekinah1999]

I really liked you and expressed their feelings! I agree that you can not express them all.

[Ziggsyboy]

that was really good!

the movement was really original.

what was the stimulus?

something in relation to love or loss or anger?

[courtneyisakitty]

ok, so she's not the next debbie allen, but she wasn't THAT bad at all, leave her alone guys!

[sailmoo]

what's the name of the song?

[Jingelien]

elisa - dancing

[jaleah2828]

pick a different song if you going to dance like that. it was sloppy. i didnt like it.

[darkslyva]

well, i think that you should work on your technique (sorry, i don't know how to spell that word correctly) very hard. your arms are very heavy and you don/'t dance with passion. that's my opinion

[xXxL3TiZi4xXx]

in my opinion all your body's too heavy.you have to improve...

[ilnaafn1a2]

@darkslyva . youu spelledd it correctlyy . lmaoo ! :))

[Green0eyed0secret]

It was good, but the first part looked a little robotic, then there was another part when you were walking around towad the end where you looked like you were making it up as you went along. But besides that I really liked it :D

[fullrockon]

you did amazing :)

[JCWsbabygirl]

it was ok she just didnt look like she was trying but it looked liked she was being evaluated so she might of been emberest so people dont juge her she was pretty good

[dancelover269]

this waas awful im 14 and could do way better than that her leaps and turns were awful and it all looked so choppy

[CiaraRandom]

shes reallyy good buht i didnt like the begining and when yu take steps tryy to make them look kinda like strides or else it looks sloppyy!!! other then that it was reallyy good

♥CiaraSadie♥

[kaleighhx33]

i think you did amazing (:

[AlleMeineLiebe]

a little sloppy but really good work

[potita28]

no trasmite nadaaaa pongaalee sentimientos!!!

[trace0the0moment]

i don't think this was preformed as strong as it could/should have been.

[Desthedes21]

I felt like energy was lost during the end of the song. Even if you're just "taking steps" to another spot on the dance floor, you're still dancing. Make it count. Other than that, awesome choriography and awesome dancing!

[haileywisener]

What is this girl's name? She looks familiar.

[anniebobannie185]

she's from state college, pennsylvania...you know anyone from there?

[JoyGhaleb]

good choreo!!.. but the timing isn't correct. Beginning is a little bit too much but the jumps and falls are beautiful!! Keep on doing what you're doing.. hopefully you will be the best one day:)

[donas3]

osceno

[IlyHannuksela]

infatti...con la grazia d'un elefante...

[kid22008]

what song is this!!!

[hellwiew96]

Elisa - Dancing. it's a wonderful song.!

[TyraJune01]

love this song

[KatPotter71]

This is such a powerfully emotional song, you need to make it much more about what you are feeling. You were way too focused on the steps, especially in the beginning, I seemed almost like a practice routine in class rather than something you would showcase.

[pretzelkid14]

umm .... for the age level the choreography and ability isnt where it should be!

[vanessavillalp]

technique lacking.. kinda sloppy.. no emotion..

love the song though..

[sandrahelm]

I love it, i think the song and the dance fitsnice..good that everyone have different taste..=)

[dolphingidget]

yeah, your a great dancer, just some technique could be worked on, the only thing is like the others said is that ballet doesnt work at all with this song though......good job though ^^

[Sydneygdncr]

yeah thhis was a little wierd..

[marynrenae]

Good choreography, but i have to say this is more of a lyrical/contemporary song for a dance piece. you have amazing technique though.

[DancerN650]

oh i 4got to mention. i agree with the others...ballet doesn't work with this song

[DancerN650]

uhm you have good technique but you could use more work on it good potential to be better though

the choreography did not go with the song. the beginning was choppy and irrelevant. there was alot of walking and running...you were all over the place. you looked unorganized and you know you don't want your audience to be able to pick up that you are about to prepare for a move

[dadadancer93]

choreography could be better and u were all over the place

you need more technique, but there definitely is potential

the dance moves at the beginning were so choppy that it didnt go with the slow song

and if you cant do a move or complete an extension, then dont do it

the ending was pretty tho

if you keep working hard, post a video a year after u did this and im sure u did 10x better

[cutie2988]

what the hell are you doing!? you look like an idiot

[88IMMI88]

Good dance..good music....but it doesn´t work togther...sry :)

[MsLaGuitariste]

Good job!

ilove the dance.

[letsgoskitzo]

This dance is not working with this song. Sorry.

Okay dancing, but it's not working for me.

Good song, needs different style of dance to fit it.

[Purdyricia]

i think this is a really good dance but the song is not workin

GOOD JOB THOUGH

[xxDancingBabyxx]

eww

[sk8ergrl3213]

i think that u either picked the wrong song, you accidentally got off beat, or maybe you just need something a bit faster for your sense of dancing

[babeeg6]

wtf

[AnnieGirl245]

ok?

[lanellycrazy]

ma xk sta facendo esercizi ???

[ilariettatink]

ma n'dò va questa?

[IlyHannuksela]

solo su you tube può stare! xkè effettivamente nà cosa del genereè inguardabile!

[wackyjacky93]

Your techinique is really good! But I didn't see any emotion. And this song is basically all emotion. I mean, I cried the first time I heard it.

[soulessrobin]

i dont knwo why... but this doesnt work. Your actions are precise, but too fast... and although you can dance, i cant feel what your doing and the song is all about what you feel...

i just feel that maybe you should hear the music before you dance to it...

[XxdancexrileyxX]

I totally agree ,

this music shouldn`t be with this coreography.

its a contemperary song and ballet isn`t the best choice to dance to this song. Plus you need some more technique. your kind of just doing the steps , you have to put some meaning into it .

sorry , but its only the truth .

[soulessrobin]

Hey there, had to add a little more since I gotta a reply.

I dont necessairly feel that ballet is the wrong style of dance for this song. I do in fact feel that almost any style can be used on almost any music so long as it is done correctly.

My opinion still stands that I simply feel when you dance it should be less about technical things and more about FEELING your music.

Thanks.

[BeckyIsSarcy]

"I dont necessairly feel that ballet is the wrong style of dance for this song. I do in fact feel that almost any style can be used on almost any music so long as it is done correctly."

so you think you could hip hop to this song?! or do a tap routine?

[soulessrobin]

HIP HOP has many different styles of dance. But Yes, I think with the right form of hip hop dance this song would be a great inspiration.

Again, as long as a song has a beat/rythem (i can never spell that word) any style of dance could be used for it.

Of course, a rock, headbanging or krunk might not work too well with it. But it's possible.

You dont think so?

[BeckyIsSarcy]

i dont, no... hehe sorry.... i understand how an element of hip hop could be encorperated (also not good at spelling) but not all dances can be done to every song... but i could stand corrected. i mean at the moment im working on a piece for an assesment with "leave me to love" by imogen heap... and its got elements of a type of hip hop and also contemporary... but ye... :D

[soulessrobin]

Imogen Heap is wonderful. Im in love with a song called "Hide and Seek". Dont know why, but in love with it I am.

But anyway, yeah -- so we've stated our opinions and its legible and we're great! ^__^

And just so that we all know, I wasnt saying I didnt like the way she danced to this son -- I just felt like it lacked the passion that dance is meant to have. That it was mechanical, not that she should have chosen a different style of dance.

with that said, have a great one! Ciao

Lady

[AndreaFaceTM]

i think that this would be more of the Contemporary/Ballet style of dance.

hip hop would MAYBE work for the ending of the song because of the fast beat and rythem.

but you have a good reason.

[Randoliath]

you are very good.

you keep your moves very sharp and clean.

good job. (:

[loreex3x]

not.

[kkkbaybay]

she is really good!