not bad, but not great...you actually remind me of me when i got started...good word play and diction...but lacking in smoothness of flow...kinda choppy...but you good though...and lyrically you going over they head too! lol!
sounds great to me. the flow is consistant and well thought. you can just end the song instead of havin that long beak at the end but other then that good job.
you did really well. really great flow, i enjoyed listening to it. it was kinda hear at certain parts when you had the guy rapping with you, so just annunciate when he does cause it's a great effect. you have a kind old skool flow which i like, so i say keep doing what you doing and just cut the rest of the song or fade it out once you're doin. i'm feeling it! :) two thumbs up! ;p
thts wats up...... wish i did 1 wth ya
ghostbusters1989 2 years ago
not bad, but not great...you actually remind me of me when i got started...good word play and diction...but lacking in smoothness of flow...kinda choppy...but you good though...and lyrically you going over they head too! lol!
bigkevfromthespoke 2 years ago
sounds great to me. the flow is consistant and well thought. you can just end the song instead of havin that long beak at the end but other then that good job.
killaman22 2 years ago
Good flow on this one for sure, you already know stay up !
- DJ Sukhai
randyhaxor 2 years ago
This is really good! I agree with
BEAUTIFULBROWNSKIN the song have a really good flow and that old skool feel that makes it that much better. I would like hear more.
ld3kingdom 2 years ago
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ld3kingdom 2 years ago
you did really well. really great flow, i enjoyed listening to it. it was kinda hear at certain parts when you had the guy rapping with you, so just annunciate when he does cause it's a great effect. you have a kind old skool flow which i like, so i say keep doing what you doing and just cut the rest of the song or fade it out once you're doin. i'm feeling it! :) two thumbs up! ;p
BEAUTIFULBROWNSKIN 2 years ago
corrections::::
....kinda hard to hear
....once you're done
BEAUTIFULBROWNSKIN 2 years ago
im likin this a lot
barnabywillow 2 years ago
lol sweet
and first comment :D
cheng2012 2 years ago
Thanks. Pass it on
Kallabronn 2 years ago
i will
cheng2012 2 years ago
thts wats up, wish i did 1 wth u
ghostbusters1989 2 years ago