the reason for * too many syllables* is because he counted 68 as 2 syllables not 3
sixty / eight / yes / yes / yes ----- instead of six / ty / eight
thats / when / you / go / down / on / me /
and / i / owe / you / one
TheCrazyAwesome2 5 months ago 3
ugh! there was one too many syllable because the last line was: and i owe you one!!! *rolls eyes* multiple meanings!!!
chocaholics1 6 months ago
@chocaholics1 and / I / owe / you / one
five syllables?
ArJButay 3 months ago
....that was 18 syllables.
*shrug*
adaheemskerk 8 months ago
@adaheemskerk Yea I noticed that too. My theory is that he said one yes too many in the first line
Gravep4l 8 months ago
wait a second. There were 18 syllables.
He said Yes thrice. BUT he hugged me today so I'll forgive
where have i heard this... i just discovered shane today but im sure i have heard this
clinker243 1 year ago
@clinker243 same here, I think it's george carlin
booman111 10 months ago
BAH! I love Shane Koyczan~ He's so amazing.
That haiku was beautiful... in every living aspect.
SilkenBlade 2 years ago 15
brilliant
shaddupwhore 2 years ago 8
the reason for * too many syllables* is because he counted 68 as 2 syllables not 3
sixty / eight / yes / yes / yes ----- instead of six / ty / eight
thats / when / you / go / down / on / me /
and / i / owe / you / one
TheCrazyAwesome2 5 months ago 3
ugh! there was one too many syllable because the last line was: and i owe you one!!! *rolls eyes* multiple meanings!!!
chocaholics1 6 months ago
@chocaholics1 and / I / owe / you / one
five syllables?
ArJButay 3 months ago
....that was 18 syllables.
*shrug*
adaheemskerk 8 months ago
@adaheemskerk Yea I noticed that too. My theory is that he said one yes too many in the first line
Gravep4l 8 months ago
wait a second. There were 18 syllables.
He said Yes thrice. BUT he hugged me today so I'll forgive
adaheemskerk 8 months ago
where have i heard this... i just discovered shane today but im sure i have heard this
clinker243 1 year ago
@clinker243 same here, I think it's george carlin
booman111 10 months ago
BAH! I love Shane Koyczan~ He's so amazing.
That haiku was beautiful... in every living aspect.
SilkenBlade 2 years ago 15
brilliant
shaddupwhore 2 years ago 8