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From: DepthPerception1
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  • I miss you <3

  • Wow!!! XD

  • RIP Darling. God bless your soul

    

  • Really Really Nice.

  • Tears to my eyes

  • Beautiful

  • Good job! I that really hit home with me, good good job.

  • This is amazing, you spoke what every broken hearted person has felt so perfectly. Keep the poems coming plzzz :)

  • marrryyy mee!!!!! <3 <3

  • omg i just died

  • does he say "slivers" or "slithers" ?

  • im just crusin thru spoken poetry n i came across this... dude this was amazing beautiful all those typa words mashed up into one dnt really make sense sooooo im just guna say wow :) loveeeeed it

  • W.O.W just.......that was good. I could really tell the emotion in your voice. I heard your poem I don't love you and it inspried me to write new poetry. you're good man.

  • As a fellow writer I say WOW...."I traced her face and body so many times in the dark I could draw them blind..." Beautiful writing!

    Respect from London, Shell x.

  • im gonna marry you :]

  • You are adorable...You look different in the new video (Growning up). Love your poems...it is not even that many and I am hooked...Someone in Atlanta GA loves you! Keep it coming, and wish you the best!

  • will you marry me...say yes..lol...but seriously i love all of your poems..please keep em coming...

  • Wait a minute i had to come back to quote this part lol.." and while we met in secret my love for her was no secret to the world especialy not to the world"...geez im luvin this piece!!! ima need u to come back n post more !Lol

  • your pieces are always filled with passion and the word play is priceless...awesome!

  • omg..

    i wanted to cry...

    i love this..

  • Your subtle yet common topics are incredible. I love it.

  • that was awesome i love it :)

    keep up tha great work!

    <3 OnE LoVe,Kristina

  • Ur an adorable Poet! ;o] But I loved this & ur delivery! You outta' stop by my channel, I'm one real beautiful poet & I'm raw! I know you'll love me! Stop by, k! ;]

  • BRAVO!!!

  • are your poems expressions of your true feelings or do you just have a vivid imagination...

  • WOW! tHAt WAS AMAZiNG

    i lOvED it. x33

  • "cuz i kno their tongues could never dance as fast as out hearts" wow... ur a clever guy.

  • YOu need to keep posting videos man

  • I don't know why I didn't see this before, but, I love it. Really great work, George.

  • Wow, blown away mate, nice!

  • Yo, good poem George. I haven't heard or seen you in a while. You are a talented writer man. Holla when you get a chance.

    blessings,

    Brutha Gimel

  • ammmazing

  • Tall as God!

    Nice line.  Good stuff dude. Keep writing!

  • ya flow kinda sounds like shihan and since i am really in love with him. . . . ya voice draws me in but ya words hold me here i love this poem and it is so true def a fav

  • i totaly agreee

  • I second... i love shihan and this young poet.. is truly on his way.. i really like the closeness of this video, the rolling of his eyes.. "she doesnt want to ruin what she has with him".. really hot poem!

  • fuck man... fuck.

  • GJ as always!

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