Nice intro and bridge, but I felt a bit let down when I hear the chorus because I was expecting an interesting key change, a new melody, and for it to get a little louder. It's good and it has awesome potential.
Your song here makes me feel extremely... Mortal. Like time is skipping away. It's moving and very pretty. The only thing I think you need to work on is maybe making your voice a little louder. For effect. But it's lovely the way it is as well. Thank you. :)
I don't know anyone who was raised correctly who could not appeal to this song. Well written and good voice behind the lyrics. I salute you sir on a job well done, smiles are contagious and you spread them. Have a good day.
@charlieocheerio HAHAHAHAH. You're funny man! I never thought about that. You sick perverted mind you....LOL. cheers for the comment man. Really appreciate that
@brianpotter3 yes, he sent me the video too and i dont know who he is.. i hear speed metal only and this song is to slow for me (almost depressing), anyway, - he has talent.
@sweetkiki16 yes it was me singing. I wrote it a month ago for my my parents. Glad that you like it. I like to write lyrics during my spare time. If you want to listen, I've got song about haiti and japan too. :D
@YunaBraska12 awwwwwww. You're a good defender. Thank you. I don't really mind people making fun of my video because they have no heart. So yeah. heheheh. But you're awesome! heart heart*...thanks for the sub :D
@lubyou345 I always think about my parents. That's why I kinda wrote this song. I'm glad there's 80% out there giving me positive feedbacks. The other 20%...hmmm...yeah. I feel sad for them because they don't love their moms. Thanks for the lovely comment lubyou345...Have a nice day :D
@d2dap636 I'm sorry to hear that. Really. I don't mean to make you cry. But I'm glad you like it. Be strong ok. I'm sure, and in absolute certainty that your mother is happy right now because her son or daughter remembers her. It's ok to shed some tears from time to time. But don't get too upset. Be happy always and have a nice day. :D
You grow up, ey... the past seemed to have passed so fast and the present seems to take forever, the future feels like years away. But its only the present that counts. So forget about the past and the future. live for the present :)
This song really brought tears to my eyes..because its lyrics are one with my thoughts, as far as childhood and the passing of time are concerned. The sun and the moon may disappear from the sky, but they are always there, with us :)
I thought it was a joke at first though... lol
DestroyEverything92 2 months ago
Awesome song!! You should be famous bro!
DestroyEverything92 2 months ago
P.s. 11 people are just mean they hate to much to love
imasuperdork 7 months ago
Omg that's the most sweetest song I have ever heard ="•)
imasuperdork 7 months ago
lol i thougt u actually werent a guy anymore lol. nice song tho.
fatbob2011 7 months ago
sweet song :)
SuzieLady 8 months ago
Omfg :) this is great! I wanna do a cover!
sessybeech 8 months ago
Beautiful T_T
pooki3b8r 9 months ago
That was a good song & very sweet:D
633Sunshine 10 months ago
nice singing!
TheWaterpologirl13 10 months ago
sweet song :D...keep it up
etherfreak 10 months ago
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! <3333333333
beautyitized 10 months ago
I love it <3!
4geouse 10 months ago
this song make me sad T_T
soldierfrontglitch 10 months ago
Spool touching great job!!!!!
qwerty321756 10 months ago
Reality hurts great song
speeddemon002 10 months ago
This really is lovely :) Well done. Especially relevant to me right now...
KatieAtLarge 10 months ago
lovely :)
EpicEmi 10 months ago
Not bad! Not bad at all! :D
*Hugs*
<3 Candace
iLeaveYouWithHugs 10 months ago
Nice intro and bridge, but I felt a bit let down when I hear the chorus because I was expecting an interesting key change, a new melody, and for it to get a little louder. It's good and it has awesome potential.
Ihateyoubillclinton 10 months ago
wow really nice and touching :)
ironman127b 11 months ago
Your song here makes me feel extremely... Mortal. Like time is skipping away. It's moving and very pretty. The only thing I think you need to work on is maybe making your voice a little louder. For effect. But it's lovely the way it is as well. Thank you. :)
-J
TheLostGirls2 11 months ago
I don't know anyone who was raised correctly who could not appeal to this song. Well written and good voice behind the lyrics. I salute you sir on a job well done, smiles are contagious and you spread them. Have a good day.
SliceIceNDice 11 months ago 6
@SliceIceNDice :D. Thanks for your cool comment good sir! I want to show this to my parents on their anniversary next month.heheh
cre8Athief 11 months ago
good enough :)
kathyross100 11 months ago
i know what youre going threw jean hughes 1971---2009
graemeleetv 11 months ago
oh i get it! LMAO I thought you sent me a sex-change song HAHAHAHA!!!!
charlieocheerio 11 months ago 4
@charlieocheerio HAHAHAHAH. You're funny man! I never thought about that. You sick perverted mind you....LOL. cheers for the comment man. Really appreciate that
cre8Athief 11 months ago 2
@cre8Athief haha idk whether thats sarcasm or not xD it just sounded weird when i saw it in my box. i was like o.0
charlieocheerio 10 months ago
@cre8Athief wait, have you changed the title??
charlieocheerio 10 months ago
Not bad..
carmenultra 11 months ago
Nice! I bet your parents were really pleased to hear your song :)
jaykay415 11 months ago
aaawwwwwww
sanndee2591 11 months ago
Beautiful song - Best of luck with your career :)
cutiepetoodee 11 months ago
simpley beautiful
sofadofa123 11 months ago
nice one Kid
craicheaDARA 11 months ago
I almost wanted to say that you had to stop sending me vids, but this vid is really amazing and your voice is so clear =)
I like the vid GBU =)
Sinvudyo 11 months ago
@brianpotter3 yes, he sent me the video too and i dont know who he is.. i hear speed metal only and this song is to slow for me (almost depressing), anyway, - he has talent.
QwAdr0x256 11 months ago
WOW!! i am crying and am soo sorry!!
2011Smiley1 11 months ago
This is pretty good
Psycomantis1 11 months ago
Is this you singing?? Very nice!
sweetkiki16 11 months ago 2
@sweetkiki16 yes it was me singing. I wrote it a month ago for my my parents. Glad that you like it. I like to write lyrics during my spare time. If you want to listen, I've got song about haiti and japan too. :D
cre8Athief 11 months ago 2
Hey got ur vid outstanding but do I know u? Or no but I loved it
bailypicitfan 11 months ago
This is really good. My mom passed when I was nine and this song made me remember all the good times. Keep it up :)
TeamStefanXOXO 11 months ago
plastic surgery???
no just joking i love the song
nemostert 11 months ago
dont listens to these assholes u were great i subes :3
YunaBraska12 11 months ago
GAY AND SHIT
somalianprince1 11 months ago
@somalianprince1 TWAT
CarpMania10 11 months ago
@somalianprince1 u better hope im not near where u live i will killu cause u said that! ur gay and shit
YunaBraska12 11 months ago
@YunaBraska12 awwwwwww. You're a good defender. Thank you. I don't really mind people making fun of my video because they have no heart. So yeah. heheheh. But you're awesome! heart heart*...thanks for the sub :D
cre8Athief 11 months ago
@YunaBraska12 where you live?
somalianprince1 11 months ago
Reminds me of the times how my mom is there for me
ELnationz 11 months ago
@ELnationz sorry to hear that. But just be happy always. Your mom always be there in your heart. Just dont for get that :D
cre8Athief 11 months ago
@cre8Athief :D
ELnationz 11 months ago
Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Va1entine82 11 months ago
What a wonderful song(:
Made me think about how much my mom means to me<3
Just Wonderful,, It brough tears to my eyes (':
lubyou345 11 months ago
@lubyou345 I always think about my parents. That's why I kinda wrote this song. I'm glad there's 80% out there giving me positive feedbacks. The other 20%...hmmm...yeah. I feel sad for them because they don't love their moms. Thanks for the lovely comment lubyou345...Have a nice day :D
cre8Athief 11 months ago
good stuff check out my music
rambballer15 11 months ago
Bravo
austin7761 11 months ago
great job ♪♫
CombatOasis 11 months ago
Keep up the good work! Sounds good~
MillerGenuineCraft 11 months ago
Really nice!!!! : )))
Tokrimus 11 months ago
The song is nice.
Ebenupe 11 months ago
Heed! Let's take notice of [The END] our time_ Mathew24:36-39
There are real understandings and hope profusely in God's Word, the Bible:
The world is managed_ 1John5:19 Revelation12:7-12
Major +/- occurrences_ Mathew24:7,8,10-14,21,22
Predicted changes in People’s behaviors_ 2Timothy 3:1-5
The True God will act soon_ Revelation16:13,14 Daniel2:44
We too must act so to be saved_ Revelation18:4 Zephaniah2:3 John17:3 Mathew6:9-11,33,34 Mark13:13
A New World, at hand Psalm37:9-11 2Peter3:8-13
plptous 11 months ago
really awsome! very touching! hehe
sparrowgirl84 11 months ago
beautiful song
davidcharles19681 11 months ago
great song.. saved it to my home screen on my fone..
PurpleRagGang504 11 months ago
Wonderful song! My mother passed last month and now ya got me in tears, seriously. I hope you make it to the top.
d2dap636 11 months ago 3
@d2dap636 I'm sorry to hear that. Really. I don't mean to make you cry. But I'm glad you like it. Be strong ok. I'm sure, and in absolute certainty that your mother is happy right now because her son or daughter remembers her. It's ok to shed some tears from time to time. But don't get too upset. Be happy always and have a nice day. :D
cre8Athief 11 months ago 8
gentle voice goes good with the sweet melody i love it, its beautiful
missjaja13 11 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
justin bieber said this was gay
jmodz1 11 months ago
this song is so beautiful and inspiring to me. Hope the best for you man
HiMyNameIsSid123 11 months ago
This is sad but a beautiful song at the same time.
ZhouFantastic 11 months ago
god bless your voice *-* it made me really sad but there is always hope and brighter things always come
LLawlitaxDD 11 months ago
aww man im really srry
LittleLeaLea14 11 months ago
:( im so sorry
tommykrongyut123 11 months ago
nice video!!!!
SuperBOMD 11 months ago
Life is short...indeed...live in the moments...your music is very nice!!!
luvumor4 1 year ago
You grow up, ey... the past seemed to have passed so fast and the present seems to take forever, the future feels like years away. But its only the present that counts. So forget about the past and the future. live for the present :)
soranykurdistan 1 year ago
This song really brought tears to my eyes..because its lyrics are one with my thoughts, as far as childhood and the passing of time are concerned. The sun and the moon may disappear from the sky, but they are always there, with us :)
moonymoon27 1 year ago
Nice strum
yuzz101 1 year ago
you had i great childhood from what i can tell ..... haha your acesnts gone when you sing .... have you noticed it
Yoshiegg11 1 year ago
Sounds like you enjoyed your childhood. You are one of the lucky ones.
TheMassDefect 1 year ago
awww!!
2manykisses4u 1 year ago
T_T
EdMagician 1 year ago
it's kinda hard to grow up, huh? =P
serinaxoxo 1 year ago