A little too much fiddling with the deck at a few points and REALLY awful patter. "You could have picked any card out of the deck but you chose only one." What does that even mean? You're talking for no reason most of the time.
@Exitmat yeah pattering to a camera is not very comfortable to me because there is no interaction. I dont have a script or a whole show, so just doing a trick its kinda hard to talk naturally. Thanks for the feedback
You performed the effect really well and the change was executed beautifully. Some minor suggestions would to be more casual and natural as you perform the GHP. It was executed quite well but I felt like you rushed it a bit as if to cover up something. It's usually done as an off-beat movement so try not to call attention to that move when you perform. And also, I did enjoy the sleight you used at the end of the effect, well executed.
thanks for your feedback. As for the "off beat" moment, well, its pretty hard to have one when performing for the camera, but live it gets by no problem. thanks steve
the trick was very well done, and the half pass was quick and unnoticable but i must say that there were a lot of unnecesary actions after the GHP was complete. you shook your hands across the side of the deck like 4 times and it just looks very oddespecially since you are not doing anything other than holding the deck. I understand that under misdirection this would go unnoticed, but im just criticizing what I see on camera
yeah i see what you mean about squaring the deck when its not messy, but aaron says to use a squaring motion, bringing the deck to the left fingertips, as a covering motion, and thats what i did. Altogether the squaring motion lasts maybe 1/2 second, so i dont think its too big of deal. Thanx for the constructive criticsm though
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akmalhafiz1 5 months ago
pretty good
chrisrocks626 7 months ago
really good performance but try not to draw attention to the sleights. other than that it was really good
TheUndergroundMagic 11 months ago
@TheUndergroundMagic thanks but keep in mind a camera doesnt fall for misdirection or look up for a split second of eye contact
sillyoffapilly 11 months ago
@sillyoffapilly fair point
TheUndergroundMagic 11 months ago
A little too much fiddling with the deck at a few points and REALLY awful patter. "You could have picked any card out of the deck but you chose only one." What does that even mean? You're talking for no reason most of the time.
Otherwise good job on the sleights.
Exitmat 1 year ago
@Exitmat yeah pattering to a camera is not very comfortable to me because there is no interaction. I dont have a script or a whole show, so just doing a trick its kinda hard to talk naturally. Thanks for the feedback
sillyoffapilly 1 year ago
Daft question, but r u using a bridge size deck ??? Great vids anyway bro subbed!!!
hEaDsHoT187jp 1 year ago
@hEaDsHoT187jp no and i have pretty small hands too i cant even do a magicians palm, i have to use the gamblers cop
sillyoffapilly 1 year ago
well done.your ring finger is well hidden not like mine :) plus your cam is much better.nice job
asudenegru 1 year ago
You performed the effect really well and the change was executed beautifully. Some minor suggestions would to be more casual and natural as you perform the GHP. It was executed quite well but I felt like you rushed it a bit as if to cover up something. It's usually done as an off-beat movement so try not to call attention to that move when you perform. And also, I did enjoy the sleight you used at the end of the effect, well executed.
All in all, keep up the good work!
-Steve
QbanLinx 2 years ago
thanks for your feedback. As for the "off beat" moment, well, its pretty hard to have one when performing for the camera, but live it gets by no problem. thanks steve
sillyoffapilly 2 years ago
I love the half pass. Oh yeah you should use court cards for the 'cover' cards, if you know what I mean.
Chinchillas96 2 years ago
the trick was very well done, and the half pass was quick and unnoticable but i must say that there were a lot of unnecesary actions after the GHP was complete. you shook your hands across the side of the deck like 4 times and it just looks very oddespecially since you are not doing anything other than holding the deck. I understand that under misdirection this would go unnoticed, but im just criticizing what I see on camera
4.5/5
PSDproductions4 2 years ago
yeah i see what you mean about squaring the deck when its not messy, but aaron says to use a squaring motion, bringing the deck to the left fingertips, as a covering motion, and thats what i did. Altogether the squaring motion lasts maybe 1/2 second, so i dont think its too big of deal. Thanx for the constructive criticsm though
sillyoffapilly 2 years ago
very very smooth
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i live in prescott :D
were do u buy ur cards?
LittleLead 2 years ago
i just get them online, ebay or kardwell
sillyoffapilly 2 years ago
oh ok :D
LittleLead 2 years ago
hey dave tell me how the change is done please
nathanlulu 2 years ago
awseome half pass,very quick,all sleights done smoothly,trying to work out the change.excellent stuff
nathanlulu 2 years ago
!!!!!!!!WOW
ACEKING26 2 years ago
oh, i forgot, perfect half gravity pass !
Bonqq 2 years ago
thanx!
sillyoffapilly 2 years ago
sorry for my english:P i mean try to hide that move when you try turn the two cards
Bonqq 2 years ago
yeah its hard to do for a camera normally i would lower my hand while talking, but you cant get away with that when its not live
sillyoffapilly 2 years ago
great change, try to now show that flip card
Bonqq 2 years ago
what do you mean "show that flip card"?
sillyoffapilly 2 years ago