All In~A Jemi Short Story~Chapter 4

[TheDdlovatofan101]

Omg please keep posting!! I love this story!!

[lovelivedance13]

omg you have to finish this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[DemGomezSelLovato]

next one please

[mongouseGirl8786]

please please please make more i LOVE your stories please make more asap-3 your an amazing writer

[lovelivedance13]

posttttttttttttt asap;)

[xxdreamychici1xx]

plz come back i need this story, Maids love and blood lust or im gunna have a heart attack your like the best writer on youtube i need your stories there like food for my brain

[chinahome1]

yeah ur awesome where r the rest of the players and these.

[vgricvgrud]

@chinahome1 yeah these r awesome pls come back

[1233ilovecookies]

Ppplllzzz continue I miss ur stories sincerly Mari lenas friend

[dacb36]

love it can't wait to see what happens

[Imani48erenidy]

i love this! THIS SHOULD BE A SERIS!!!! Did you know that you are a really good writer? :D

[Sofigre0811]

What song it is? When is new episode coming???:D

[rose607143]

OMG im in love with your storys and i really think you should totolly make more storys well as for the computer situation i think its ok to wait a little while cuz i like the suspencion in this storys:) i love jemi but i still think joe jonas is a total ass on real life.

[1233ilovecookies]

I feel like I should buy u a computer or something cuz I lve ur stories

[laraxbesta]

Hey, I love ur stories. When R u gonna upload epi. 42 of a maid's lovestory? xoxo

[shoping1011]

I think you should post more :)

[caprisun547]

Oh y did ur dad do that

[caprisun547]

Love it post more soon purty please

[xAnnaxBbyx]

AHHILOVETHIS

KEEPPOSTING-3

[musicisall2me]

Loved it! post more soon please??

[Northfacegrl95]

Please post soon!

[missjonasgirl100]

i love it

[shoping1011]

@HJTL101 I agree make Joe realize what he did to her family

[HJTL101]

OH MY GOODNESS!!! PUSH HIM OFF!!! TELL HIM WHAT HIS GANG DID TO YOUR MOTHER AND HOW IT AFFECTED YOUR FAMILY, NOT FALL FOR HIM!!

[joenelisxoxo]

Sorry guys T.T my dad pawned my laptop Ima have to wait for it >.<

[101jaja101]

The wait is so agonizing! pleade pot more ASAP! Btw awsome episode couldnt have done better. oh and the joe N demi is totally hot ;p

[xxDisneyxxDorkxx]

I swear to God, if you don't upload soon I'm gonna DIE of agony!!!! My dad's birthday is on Thursday!!!! DO YOU WANT ME TO DIE?!?!?!?!

[XxMusicChic4everxX]

O.O

I need more...............

[joenelisxoxo]

Im posting blood lust and maybe players or maid's love or all in later.

[iluvthejobros561]

Uh oh :P

[joenelisxoxo]

Sorry guys the weather is bad in miami right now and im afraid that my internet will break down so :/

[Meelzdiva]

He's gonna do her...

[OldSchoolLover94]

@Meelzdiva oh wow!!! You just get to the point dont you?? I think your comment is hilarious!!!!

[missjonas2398]

omfj...again pleeeeeeeease do another how can you leave us like tht it should be a crime

[EliANDLilmel]

that's not rape, she did not say no XD

[lovatolover78]

post soon :) :) :)

[lovatolover78]

wow that was so good !!

[strawberrysara06]

omg u cant just leave us like that please post soon, i am dying pleasee!! i will do anything, do u want a cookie? this is seriously soo good!!, ur such a good writer, where did u learn how to write so good, such a good story too, i dont even knwo u yet i love u right now :)

[100TeamEdward]

awesome next one plz love the ep

[icharmed]

haha interesting LOL <3 awsomee

[AtHiNa2710]

WOW! Thats so awsoome!! Please post next!

[GirlGirlicious]

o.0 this is really really awesome story! it's just...wow! i cant wait to ream more of this! can u pls post as soon as u can! and maid's love is also something that i am looking forward to :P ♥ u r awesome

[caba4128]

Pretty pretty pretty pretty AWSOME *-*

[steph4dougie1]

AMAZING =D

Can't wait for the next one POST SOON!

[luvinit963]

bom chicka wow wow

[xoxoKellJBxoxo]

Uhhhh Joe, yeah treat the girla dn then make out with her.....totally normal :/

[sayekuna10]

Joe is getting it on!

MORE PLEASE!!!

[lydiaxo33]

thisssssssssssssssssss is soooo goood never stop makeing this one

[boogy81oogy]

OMG:) thts soo good...u should post more

[101wisher]

ahhhh can plz make this into a story not lik a short story....plzzzz its soo goodddd dnt stop :)

[topfashionprincess]

deeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnngggggg­!!!!!

[Northfacegrl95]

OW OW! Joe is hitting on Demi!

PLEASE POST MORE!

we miss your stories

[xXJemiForEvaXx]

Oh wow Joe

[ILuvNiley4evaNalways]

I love this U HAVE to post more SOON

[Thelynrose]

OMG NEXT NEXT! IM GONNA DIE! :) This is awesome!

[monikitaelsalvador]

I love this ...

especially Joe being such a bad ass

[Padregirl2343252844]

joes got some ideas i see...

[CRFan95]

Awwwwwww Joe. :D 

[MusicLovesSteph]

post more

[XoSarzzoX]

I love this series !! Please post more :)

[uckerydul101]

that was..

AWESOME.!

LOVE I T!

POST MORE!

[WizardsRox101]

lol loved it :) please post next one!!

[indiansk8er12]

oooooh joe's getting dirtyyyy. post the next one soon!

[1233ilovecookies]

Holy shizznappers and she is uneffected by how he can just kill her on te spot damn she got balls lol and omg must be on cloud nine

[1nltfan]

demi must be loving the moment right now

[SunshineLove78]

is it wierd that i find this chapter cute??XD

[Nhoa3]

You know, I'm addicted to this story. That was hot, wonder how the next is going to be ... lol, hotter?

[xxxTakeABreathxxx]

AHHH!! That was amazing!!! :D 

[jonasbrothersfan462]

wow..O.O

love it!!:D:D

[RoockGiirL23]

more!

i loved it :D

[MrViktoriaaa123]

awesome!

[jonaswriterlover95]

wow talk about a creeper. though it is cute!

[therealmdmendes]

i totally love it post more please i can't wait!!

[shewawah13]

postmore XD

[Lildrummerdudet12]

THIS IS AWESOME!!

can't wait for more!!

XD

[jemiorpikislover]

this is go getting interesting ;)

mm i see jemi coming soon :)

[shoping1011]

Ah post more

[annisagirl11]

This is getting HOT!;)

[WWWXXXZZZ81]

this is getting interesting ;)