Neumy - So Fresh So Clean (Remix) (Week 20)

[Rsvideohub]

word up just need practice on your delivery, start rappin with other freestyle rappers. your lyrics and word play is nice as hell tho

[SuperDerekDixon]

gotta be sleepin ta be dreamin? cold man keep it up!!

[kmo162010]

Its Not Time For U two FLy THrew Shit ITs Time for U get A nEW hOBBIE

[Faithexample]

open up ur throat quit rappin through ur nose

[wobblestock]

@Faithexample

I have no idea wha that even means

[P0TM0NKEY]

@wobblestock means you sound nasaly, project yur voice more and not just being loud, like rap from depths of yur lungs.

[OliviAcisner0s]

I am hungry and that was yummy ps I hope you get signed 

[JiggabooGumBoh]

collab with me dude!!

[OLIRISH]

the flow aint bad yo, but your delivery is kinda whack. That high pitch thing you do really throws me off the vibe. I am in no way talkin shit man, I'm just lettin you know that if you toned it down a little bit and didnt flow into a computer mic it would sound a little more pleasing to the ear. Stay up and do your thang my man.

[failmuch]

nice sht...look at my attempted freestyle...tell me what i need to improve..

[Miaumiauize]

man i love your flow !;) i subscribed!

[Hjernded]

Good lyrics man! U wrote that?

[StevieG130]

you should do some ghost writing for artists cuz you have good lyrics but the voice aint nice

[gothixxx12]

@StevieG130

i dnt think thats wat he wants

[RaabBlog]

r u writing these?

[wobblestock]

@RaabBlog ...yep.

[MrMicwrecka]

@wobblestock good to know i thought my mind was blown with a freestyle, but still this runs deep coming from a music lover

[gothixxx12]

@RaabBlog

yes