nice sound, but it could have used a few more effects. it was as if the sound was repeating itself like a scratched record. that's not to say it was bad, it just could have been even better. don't stop doin' what you do....this is encouragement, not crtiticism. if we don't keep our own encouraged, who will??
Nice beat, true to the sound of the good days of R&B, not too much instrumental garbage to taint the raps. Good work.
But with every compliment must come criticism or we cannot advance:
The lyrics are boring and the subject matter is recycled. 'In the club' has been done and overdone. Get some depth or fresh perspective in your poetry and you've got my ear.
There is nothing wrong with the song, it sounds very up to date and mainstream. The only issue may be with the video itself. You can have an absolutely amazing song, but if the video is bad, the entire production will be in vain. I'm not saying that this is the case with your video, I'm just saying that there is room for improvement in it. might I suggest first that you take the date stamp off of each of your photos. Try shooting scenes in the daytime or somewhere that has more light.
Also, the part with the Bicycle being partly stolen, you nee to take the volume down on the secondary audio (The speaking part is what I'm referring to). Other than that, everything else is fine.
im still waiting 4 the first rapper in history to do his own prograMMING OR PLAYING THAT WILL BE THE DAY "DOCTOR SUESS RULES THE LAND OF NURSERY RHYMES
I'm just a white middle-class honky from a county called Cheshire which is where they grow all the money. I can't say I know what's what when it comes to modern black music. I'm not too fussed with the new soul I prefer Aretha, or Otis or Marvin, the obvious choices. Rapping I prefer NWA or Public Enemy. By proxy. I liked your tune. Better than a lot I hear. I would like to recommend an album from 1990. The Afros - Kickin' Afrolistics. A personal favourite.
Being French, I can tell you that you can sell this music in France for that but I do not listen to rap, I can tell you the competitors in the middle of the rap.
Hmmm, a song that glorifies a drug that ruins lives and kills people...wtf? Are you saying getting drunk is "the good life"?
No it ain't and we don't need people elevating it. If that's what you gotta do to strike a deal you signed the wrong contract.
I hope you make it, it's better than sitting in the gutter with a bottle of mad dog. But you never know what karma has in store for punks peddling poison.
the beat is good under the chords but for me the good life is found in my miserable fate cut down in kindergarten for being to loud surrounded by the white folks but not accepted this started in Miami but 50 years later i can see that have not a friend in this world but Allah who oddly enough is the best friend an outcast scavenger could have amen?
You don't need to really say "Hey" a thousand time in the beginning. It's decent, but the music sounds like it's from the 80's. Try something more modern and fresh.
Also, try to seperate the vocal tracks a bit more from each other, they sound a little phased together ;)
Spamming people's inboxes with your videos is going to win you a lot of friends, but will also piss a bunch of people off. Good luck with your record, but please stop spamming people.
grat style, and creative musical performance,the courus have power and feeling, and the vocalist grat, the constrast is realy better to the best hip hop or aphipraven,enjoy the sucess of your music.
Yeah cool video top rap too go with the beat can't say any bad even if I wanted....but I ain't a hater anyways peace bru keep it up oh n fuck the haters
Yes bruv this is what I'm talking about. Dope lyrics .... Let's get drunk jack d's is my thing thou. Top lyrics man good 1 keep it up. Check out some of mine one time I've put thumbs up for this ...... Coz it's sick
Yeah I liked it's cool just dint drink to much and lose sight of your goal
TheeAssViolator 9 hours ago
i liked it
hottgrahamcracker 11 hours ago
Sounds like Wale & Lil Wayne.
mskeishapac 12 hours ago
awesome thanks for sending this to me
123brynner 19 hours ago
really good!
gbeautyworld 1 day ago
Follow me on twitter @Desmond_Stancil
kid550213 1 day ago
follow me on twitter also @ Bee_Smoove
BeeSmooveProductionz 1 day ago in playlist Uploaded videos
nice work, keep it up. I want to hear more.
BeeSmooveProductionz 1 day ago in playlist Uploaded videos
@Jream_Tremblaii.. Follow Me.! i do promo's on twitter. get me 10 follows.. i get you alot of fans.!
JreamlyPerfect 2 days ago
yuh guyz good but not my typa beat. but keep doin ur thing bruh
GoDOvWaR100 3 days ago
i liked it.
mrroxaskeyblade 3 days ago
Really good, appreciate it
to0taLLtaE 3 days ago
sorry no me gusto el video
artistas6 4 days ago
insane man thanks for sending me this
brownboii941 1 week ago
This song is really good thanks for sending it to me <3 xxx
SuperLadygagaMad 1 week ago
i actually like it. :D
SKEETpony 1 week ago
you guys got some good flows definitely subscribing, please do the same!
TStriet23 1 week ago
This is a Nice party song!!! i can hear the whole club singin this song!
billions18 1 week ago
This is a nice song!!! Real Dope!!!
billions18 1 week ago
This has been flagged as spam show
this sum good shit
TheYaovi1997 1 week ago
Good shit bruh!
ezragotagun2 1 week ago
Sick shit yo I just subbed, come thru my channel I got rhymes for your speakers
iloverhymez 1 week ago
Good shit. Sub n Ill sub back
Zmoneyenterprises 1 week ago
/watch?v=_PZXqRVeOP8
IAMDAVIDROGERS 1 week ago
Nice song.
jordanpuckett 1 week ago
Nice You should Make Like a Official Video you Know With Lights And All That stuff It would Look Good
MaybachHD 1 week ago
This is pretty good, its got a good vibe :P I'm glad I live in JA so I have the ear for this :D
ADOGSMOTHER 1 week ago
dopee !!
senyo13 1 week ago
Dam good
azul1andazul2 2 weeks ago
wow that sounds mad G
tarboroproductions 2 weeks ago
sick
TheMAX18131 2 weeks ago
more or less!
d1m41k1993 2 weeks ago
sick!!
Flo1ren7ce 2 weeks ago
dope
Anytruth1111 2 weeks ago
the song is great!!! ;)
TheNoizyChild03 2 weeks ago
yeh boys ya are great I like this joint I'll somke wit ya
PlatinumHustlersInc 2 weeks ago
ooh yea this is the best song ever i like it
therandomchannelvids 2 weeks ago
Good vibe friend.
In Christ,
Mike
TheIggy457 2 weeks ago
going on my ipod shits got tht chillin/ swagg anthem song
thor8001 2 weeks ago in playlist Uploaded videos
nice music :-)
Larissawestside 2 weeks ago
i subbed
Killingzone99 2 weeks ago
nice sound, but it could have used a few more effects. it was as if the sound was repeating itself like a scratched record. that's not to say it was bad, it just could have been even better. don't stop doin' what you do....this is encouragement, not crtiticism. if we don't keep our own encouraged, who will??
nfj4life 2 weeks ago
Stopping by to show my support for one of YouTube's best!;)
sariemine 2 weeks ago
op
hotpinkgirl193 2 weeks ago
nice i think uhh :..-
hotpinkgirl193 2 weeks ago
I like the song!! it sound proper!.. Check out the new fire I got feat Torch of Maybach
jcreoledaboss 2 weeks ago
Nice beat, true to the sound of the good days of R&B, not too much instrumental garbage to taint the raps. Good work.
But with every compliment must come criticism or we cannot advance:
The lyrics are boring and the subject matter is recycled. 'In the club' has been done and overdone. Get some depth or fresh perspective in your poetry and you've got my ear.
o0xemas0o 2 weeks ago
There is nothing wrong with the song, it sounds very up to date and mainstream. The only issue may be with the video itself. You can have an absolutely amazing song, but if the video is bad, the entire production will be in vain. I'm not saying that this is the case with your video, I'm just saying that there is room for improvement in it. might I suggest first that you take the date stamp off of each of your photos. Try shooting scenes in the daytime or somewhere that has more light.
tatedarius1 2 weeks ago
@tatedarius1 Second part!
Also, the part with the Bicycle being partly stolen, you nee to take the volume down on the secondary audio (The speaking part is what I'm referring to). Other than that, everything else is fine.
tatedarius1 2 weeks ago
nice mood
jaed005 2 weeks ago
Thanks for the email to check this out. Nice sound! Sounds perfect when driving down the strip and feeling good.
Yesdnyl99 2 weeks ago
im still waiting 4 the first rapper in history to do his own prograMMING OR PLAYING THAT WILL BE THE DAY "DOCTOR SUESS RULES THE LAND OF NURSERY RHYMES
funghighlsd25records 2 weeks ago
I'm just a white middle-class honky from a county called Cheshire which is where they grow all the money. I can't say I know what's what when it comes to modern black music. I'm not too fussed with the new soul I prefer Aretha, or Otis or Marvin, the obvious choices. Rapping I prefer NWA or Public Enemy. By proxy. I liked your tune. Better than a lot I hear. I would like to recommend an album from 1990. The Afros - Kickin' Afrolistics. A personal favourite.
cottydonquixote 2 weeks ago
Being French, I can tell you that you can sell this music in France for that but I do not listen to rap, I can tell you the competitors in the middle of the rap.
Surviva0angel 2 weeks ago
i luv it....is this song in itunes or what? cause imma put it in my ipod :)
isabellemeg 2 weeks ago
its greatt:)
MissKaraGaga 2 weeks ago
i like it
BritneylSpearsVEVO 2 weeks ago
I loved the grooviness of it, and the vocals were great too. Very talented.
pinealgland01 2 weeks ago
good! And a little bit catchy
TheTop15MusicVideos 2 weeks ago
Cool :3
0Remmi0 2 weeks ago
not bad :P
TheEpicWeirdoGirl 2 weeks ago
Hmmm, a song that glorifies a drug that ruins lives and kills people...wtf? Are you saying getting drunk is "the good life"?
No it ain't and we don't need people elevating it. If that's what you gotta do to strike a deal you signed the wrong contract.
I hope you make it, it's better than sitting in the gutter with a bottle of mad dog. But you never know what karma has in store for punks peddling poison.
2dogarage 2 weeks ago
not bad!
cenrockon01 3 weeks ago
i don't like this type of music but i give a thumbs up for hard work
slayer94ism 3 weeks ago
like it man good shit
2Dropss 3 weeks ago
this is really catchy and nice great job :)
5bananas1 3 weeks ago
I like it! I subbed.
Smhawk100 3 weeks ago
Nice one !!!
DerekNorthChannel 3 weeks ago
This is awesome. You have potential dude :D
kayspace1 3 weeks ago
gud.
ravisinghbeats 3 weeks ago
I usually don't listen to that kind of music but I really enjoeyd it.. Good job :-)
fxaman 3 weeks ago
legit
BurnTheDemon 3 weeks ago
thanks for invite but it really is not my kind of music :) I am more into punk/ grunge/ rock/ metal. good luck anyway :)
MissFunkuh 3 weeks ago
Awesome guys! :D
Magnifikate 3 weeks ago
the beat is good under the chords but for me the good life is found in my miserable fate cut down in kindergarten for being to loud surrounded by the white folks but not accepted this started in Miami but 50 years later i can see that have not a friend in this world but Allah who oddly enough is the best friend an outcast scavenger could have amen?
lifeinyouisgod 3 weeks ago
:)
TheBAvlogs 3 weeks ago
I like ur sound
mssucks3462 3 weeks ago
cool :)
AveLibertas 3 weeks ago
I could use a margarita right now. The Super Bowl demands beer but w/ Madonna in the house I need a fucking margarita! Now! lol
Cool song. :>)
visceralguy 3 weeks ago
You guys are talented no doubt! This is great stuff, keep them coming. Subscribed!
VampMovie1 3 weeks ago
keep the game poppin and tha joints blazzin
gangsta real from Romania
true mothafucka 4 life
emanuelarad 3 weeks ago
I like y'all hustle. Keep up the good work :-)
Lizzy3218 4 weeks ago
it is good tho...
blastofftheshow 4 weeks ago
shit if these niggas are from miami they dont need to be on youtube they need to get wit the boy ross
blastofftheshow 4 weeks ago
This is really fucking catchy! Keep it up!
JusJosh90 4 weeks ago
not bad...
SHEaTVa 4 weeks ago
@theawesome thanks greatly appreciated fam
DiligentEnt 1 month ago
this is awesome B)
TheawesomLove1 1 month ago
uP______
ScratchOnScratch 1 month ago
@540 I got you homie and thank you for checking us out.
DiligentEnt 1 month ago
Nice man, make sure you check my channel out and see my music (:
540cameron 1 month ago
@jayboy thanks homie
DiligentEnt 1 month ago
@19 lol, yeah we do when we have to stay alert in the club, thanks for the listen homie.
DiligentEnt 1 month ago
i didnt know men liked margaritas!!!!!! lol but its alright
19cambria 1 month ago
im tee total so this song doesn't appeal to me at all,i appreciate your hustle,but the spamming isn't doing it
demz0121 1 month ago
You don't need to really say "Hey" a thousand time in the beginning. It's decent, but the music sounds like it's from the 80's. Try something more modern and fresh.
Also, try to seperate the vocal tracks a bit more from each other, they sound a little phased together ;)
But good idea!
JayBoy88 1 month ago
Sounds Really Good ;-D
GreenBoyDope 1 month ago
Yeah, yo good
MrKp1998 1 month ago
Spamming people's inboxes with your videos is going to win you a lot of friends, but will also piss a bunch of people off. Good luck with your record, but please stop spamming people.
D4ng3rD4n 1 month ago
You guys r hella fine ;)
tuptates 1 month ago
bom da hora
osneimachado 2 months ago
THIS SHIT POPPEN BRAH , BRAH !! WE GONNA BE DROPPEN NEW TRACKS AND BE TRYN TO GET WITH OTHER BAY ARTIST.. FOR INTERVEIWS AND MOVIE SHORTS ..
THE BAY EXCAHNGDE .. SEE DAT..
TheBayExchange 2 months ago
nice track bro....
damaxlman 2 months ago
Love it! and yes it needs to have some airplay!
bellabeasophia 3 months ago
They need to bump to this in the Clubs !
emogoth1666 3 months ago
a-a-a-a
hey - a - hey a a a a a
HitsNetOfficial 3 months ago
Nice bro
CharliemacK100 3 months ago
I FUCKS WITH IT
TheGwopboiz 3 months ago
i love it you guys jam
monkeysatch 3 months ago
so very awesome !!!!
Stroker1094 3 months ago
CHECK MY BEATS
NARFAM 3 months ago
awsome
KIdWithGreyHair 3 months ago
COOL
Baller4rmSD 3 months ago
im glad i clicked this...
bannanaization 3 months ago
Wow, I'm Brazilian, short various genres of music.
Perfect, great song, I saw a CD ... (Laughs. ..)
Success.
Josimar114 3 months ago
smooth lyrics bro....
GeeWhyMilitia 3 months ago
Thanks for sharing friend.
In Christ,
Mike
TheIggy457 3 months ago
Nice!!!
funnycurly22 3 months ago
Smooth and it Rocks! Thumbs Up!
CaptBadazz 3 months ago
VERY GOOD :)
robertocirotrm 3 months ago
yeh
xxlenaxxxx 3 months ago
cool nice song thax for sharing this
gigiortiz200211 3 months ago
cool
acarouselofantics 3 months ago
Great rapping dude, enjoyed this, thanks and peace
damondrydes 3 months ago
great video!
FloorplanJerkz 3 months ago
i like it :)
MOZON1000 3 months ago
Like!!!
Stroker1094 3 months ago
cool
lumyingluo 3 months ago
Nice flow
irishthug100 3 months ago
nice
keep it cute or on mute i got notin but love for ya baby
pierstonisbest 3 months ago
Nice
LeeCara13 3 months ago
grat style, and creative musical performance,the courus have power and feeling, and the vocalist grat, the constrast is realy better to the best hip hop or aphipraven,enjoy the sucess of your music.
sr jesus super star
jesussuperstar1 3 months ago
Well brother I think you rocked out big time very talented indeed I hope all your dreams become realised :-))=~~~~~one~~~~~love~~~~~
jazzaste123 3 months ago
hey bro i love this song, you got style !!! wish to collab with you , what ya think about that ??! :)
gswizz1 3 months ago
Thank you for your sharing.
mitsubishi777 3 months ago
L♥VE -- PE☮CE -- ♫♫USIC
Orlando2Vegas 3 months ago
Very nice video keep up the good work.
tillasmax 3 months ago
Good congartsººº
OZMOSIS
jaqaru 4 months ago
Nice i like it!!!!
IAMCieraPrestons 4 months ago
Yeah cool video top rap too go with the beat can't say any bad even if I wanted....but I ain't a hater anyways peace bru keep it up oh n fuck the haters
TheAshbarmar 4 months ago
dope
tonybonesLD 4 months ago
KEEP UP THE GOODWORK MUCH LUV FROM THE KING OF RAPSOUL
kingdroyalty1 4 months ago
Yes bruv this is what I'm talking about. Dope lyrics .... Let's get drunk jack d's is my thing thou. Top lyrics man good 1 keep it up. Check out some of mine one time I've put thumbs up for this ...... Coz it's sick
TheAshbarmar 4 months ago
This Shit is Tight
YooTubeBattleLeague 4 months ago
Great song and video!!
TheWCChronicles 4 months ago
Nice!!!
funnycurly22 4 months ago
1 love from pine bluff arkansas
a-state the last of the southern states
greenboyz baby!!
cheapskatedamack 4 months ago
Very nice!
tomaskpo80 4 months ago
liked this track x
dionnelightwood 4 months ago
Beat reminds me of Changes by Tupac
SonnyV23 4 months ago
cool song
djbigangus 4 months ago
Nice
niteterrors2 4 months ago
I thought as much I'm sure your video is amazing
valcroft69 4 months ago
Nice
Eddproductions21 4 months ago
GREAT SONG FAM #MUCHSUPPORT
thagoldenchildmusic 4 months ago
good song!!! and little in Russian Ну можно послушать пару раз песню ))
1982iscander 4 months ago
tuff video my g also check out my new official video called do my thing peace
TheRealMistaBroadway 4 months ago
Nice Flows
KUQORIN 4 months ago
Very nice!
videoclipsmiami 4 months ago
Not bad at all keep it up
13borisNYK 4 months ago
It's nice man
jman7605 4 months ago
Not bad.
DaddyB80 4 months ago
yo is that illa j in the video???
revnardintheplace 4 months ago
Fantastic song. Bravooooooooo. Thank you. I cordially greet.
Alicja
elczanka 4 months ago
very nice!
Sabrinasfun 4 months ago
cool im posting this on my facebook Sin city vip host
killamilla702 4 months ago
iLikee Ett NiCee Beat (:
emilycolunga 4 months ago
Yeah this is great.
hooliiisdewayne 4 months ago
Cool!!!
LustersHouse 4 months ago
VERY VERY NICE.
salvitagirl 4 months ago
Thank you
zottelmischel 4 months ago
Good vid; almost put me in the club with the vibe.
Really, nice work ++
dkyloe 4 months ago
Nice stuff ma dude keep it up! Grind Time !
whoelsebutthekidace 4 months ago
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edurubio2000 4 months ago
coons flappin' dey lips an jumpin round.
jamaljamal85 4 months ago
hey yeh .. got me
i hit like n thats cause its top sound n vid
daydreams4rock 4 months ago
Awesome video !!!!
Zulu
BALKINIZED 4 months ago
Nice Vid.
FeelGreatForever 4 months ago
Great! Saved, Thanks for sending.
arayrob 4 months ago