Haze - A film noir

[NevandOtis]

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[samfraserbaxter2]

siiiiiiccccckkk!!!!!! loved it

[ozz1138]

Great little flick, really bought into and everything till the end...the Episode 3 Vader NNNOOOOOO!!!...other than that, great work.

[aniretac7645]

I like the shots you made, especially the ones of the car, and the crickets at night were really great. Good film!

[Margizzle21]

omg that was amazing. nice accent, could hardly tell it was fake. ending made me sad, but it was good.

[spec10]

Great work. (And nice "Andrew Kramer" inspired title animation :D)

[Mercado95]

I really enjoyed watching this, as it got closer to the middle I figured out that she wasn't seeing Freddie in the way the narrator had thought......Pretty sad though.

[imme919]

Ima producer-- it would have been better if he would have shot himself at the end! XD

[and12727]

damn that was good. though i have to agree with everyone else, the noooo was a bit wrong, but i really liked it.

[QuinnyGoth]

Really nice tiwst

Pretty well executed idea

[FelicityOzzy]

this made me fucking cry, i expected that they were just seeing each other from the start. great ending though! even though its actually not the greatest of endings.

[bluecrystals1]

wow talented :) i enjoyed watching this

[CaixaDeSol]

omg The ending.... O.O

LMFAO What a twist

[LunaSomnium]

nicely done :)

[frenzyelement]

I can not understand，Im from China I know a little English 。

Who can speak in chinese and tech me English ?

[FranciscoL90]

I liked it

[oelergodt]

liked everything except the last "nooo" exclaimation... it somehow didn't feel as authentic as the rest.

but really great job! 4*

[junkee4]

loved it.... but i agree that the "Nooooo" part at the end didn't seem right

[Qiqidh]

yeah, the face expression is just not right. But i like the way the story develops, simple yet full of message. Made me stop, and think for a while. Thanks for this great video, celsyus. Keep up the good work, and wish you best of luck for the next video.

[somberlight]

known my ass, but yer stuff is good, i give you that.

for some reason im getting Max Payne -vibes from your stuff. and thats good thing. <3

[xiahkaren]

sad story...

it is the style i like most~~

come on~

[mbekTheDirector]

hola.. :) i'm independent filmMaker from indonesia.. :) thats a nice looks, and i know u are a talented filmmaker.. i like some jumpCut there, also ur pararelcutting.. but if i looked more.. noir film it;s not just bout looks.. also storytelling and emotional acting.. a lot of cinematic POV that u can't showing on it.. :) .. still interlaced not progressive mode.. but thats fine.. :) everyone learn here.. :) that's nice .. good works.. cheers.. :)

[neek247]

awesome, i liked.

[Dragonhood]

he looks like the joker

[hhhh1962]

Nice job.Love your accent :)

[OutlawPictures]

Very nice. Well done.

[SoulReaper876]

Holy Shit! i wrote the first comment before the end

[SoulReaper876]

You're infamously known on youtube? i liked the film but i've never heard of you before

[nitinopp]

e46 M3 FTMFW!!!!!!

[BrownChickenPro]

nice (it would be a great film Like a 60 min film) keep on the good work

[4HereNotThere]

Predictable plot. Overused. Everyone likes to copy the play Othello.

[wbrutus22]

wow!!!

[Wakeboarder1920]

wow that was awesome! -favorited-

[kiwifruitkl]

I added this in my favorites. It's a good video. I think the main character thinks that his girlfriend/wife is having a secret love affair, but really the girlfriend/wife is having a business affair with the main character's friend, so an agreement in business can be settled.

[pzero111]

I loved it!

[D0uchebagProductions]

whoa. loved it!

[illricky]

It was good, but the end kind of flopped. Like when the main actor kicked the door down seemed pretty soft. Should have had more emphasis. But regardless, amazing story, camera angles, juxtaposision.

[quiksix25]

It was very well-done, but the end could have been better. Maybe a better actor who could convey real emotion instead of a blank face when he recieved the text. It would have been a nice contrast to the dead-pan way he tells the story.

[jeanne2030]

I really liked it. It kept me hanging on to see what happened..

[santithecellist]

5 stars! awesome..

[bouda03]

trais beien

[jetleb]

Really good, just have a problem with main actor(his final expression NOO - such an amateur!)

[LoveShallThee]

yes very strong ending...interesting movie...

[xantherdaywstedx]

great ending lol

5 stars.

[joeneschumi]

good shit! if you're interested in some (constructive) criticism, here goes: too much introduction, but most of all too much voice-over. I love voice-overs, but you shouldn't use it too much, and especially not like 5 minutes non-stop. the voice was perhaps a little too calm at some moments, almost without any passion. And the last scream was not convincing. As for the rest, job well done!

[LoveShallThee]

nicely said

[editingroomfloor]

I would have to say i disagree with you to some extent. The use of voice-over works well in my opinion and the dull,monotone passionless voice goes well to set the key of the man we are presented with during the film.

However i certainly do agree with you about the fnal "Noooo". IMHO i would of ended the peice with the man pointing the gun up at himself before a cut to black. However the film Noir/Neo Noir elements of this ending are debatable

[jelly725]

you have a very calming soothing voice..

[Heidi17065]

that was DEFINATELY bestly!!

the ending HOLY SHIT VERY STRONG!

[oooloserfaceooo]

OMG! WTF?! F-ing text messages!

[haz697]

i know ur doing an english accent m8 which is very good, jus when u say vase, try and prounance varz :) lol

[ole12boy]

haha, late text!..loved it

[ecpeter]

Well Done wasn't absolutely crazy about the ending but that is my only complaint although minor, I loved the lighting...dialogue...cars :).  So when is the feature coming?

[thisxchickxcanxsing]

What does the text say? I couldn't read all of it

[primadonna14]

this was amazing!

[trex2929]

00:54 = Hot!!!

[manduhh15]

nice short! Frapps are cold though ;)!

[AstridSynn]

This was really good!

[bubblegumsuga]

love it.. interesting video :)

[a13x4]

Loved the film.

[tinkerbellfreak]

cool

[lobstfeld]

Nicely done.

[KLSNJSU]

this was great.

awesome job!

=]

[Kienn85]

loved it - great little movie - would like to see more - keep making them

[awesomeray]

whoa! the ending was awesome. didn't see that coming.

[cussingboy]

GREAT.

[katalina2007]

GREAT FILM! I hope you get an "A"!

[sweetlilangel4ever]

great job:)

[tjy135]

wow that was good.

I thought you had died or something

[Ninylicious]

Looks good!

It's been a long time since you posted here

[alacruz]

great job. good narration! and yes, the ending was a big surprise. :)

[Okastu]

Amazing. I Want to see more.

[afcavegirl2002]

I miss seeing your videos! Awesome film

[MLiPreti]

Great film. Love the ending.