My Pen!

[marsmetals]

This was the WORST reenactment of anything I've ever scene!....By the way, the dude's name is BARTON not BART. If you're gonna rip someone's idea off...at least give them respect and do it right! I hope you changed your major.

[kudlow39]

I don't know,,,I think it's kinda funny...good job man...

[shortsandsheep]

Pauses aren't long enough and he doesn't blink erratically enough to imitate Bruce ;P

[EJagss]

Was this for college cuz it sucked and the fact that you pathetically copied Canada's best comedy group is an insult. If you wanted to do an "homage" to the Kids then fuckin' get it right. That was shit. Oh ya and Scott Thompson should kick your ass while Bruce spits on you....And they'd both be naked!!!!!!!!!!! WH.

[infinity703]

wow, this sucks erect black cocks. but for a school project, its not bad. except you probably took credit for the concept for it when you played it for the class, didnt you you little ass sucker?

[vonbontee]

Damned Ted Turner and his colorizations

[Orpheusftw]

Jeez. People are harsh.

[vagaman28]

xxxgerald. it's a cruel word man. Good job.

[jardidge]

Good to see you got a guy to dress in drag to play "Martin's" boss

[Maphisto86]

How dare you try to act as pathetic and ludicrous as Bruce's character in that sketch!? Somehow you inadvertently wasted my time! :P

Nah, in all seriousness it was a alright imitation. Still I think the best sketches are original ones. Nice job anyway. : )

[NiceGuyKeath]

You guys put a lot of effort into this! Really good job recreating the sketch.

[RyanBurnett22]

this sucks

[KidAmnesiac12]

I hope you got an F on this.

If for english class you decided to write someone else's short story you'd get an F on account of plagirism.

[colemckelvie]

I agree with KidAmnesiac12, be original for fuck sake

[ID10TVIRUS]

BRAVO!! Very well done!! It was much better than Katz, I will watch it AGAIN & AGAIN . . .

[xxjonathanxtogoxx]

you suck,

you don't the voice as funny .

[pantseeker2]

my PEN!

good job ^_- <3

[locochica4788]

haha well done. very KITH-esque.

[HarpersFairy]

The contrarian in me wants to praise you just to piss off all the youtube haters, but I really can't bring myself to do it. The video was alright but the acting was so embarrassing I couldn't finish the clip.

That said, you're pretty cute :3

[stoop404]

this is horrible acting, and i love when the guy looked directly into the camera. whats with the nintendo music? It's a good job at a first time shoot, needs serious work, but good direction

[plastique45]

you fail at life... game over.

[whgpmusic]

horrible...

[Batmobile2]

lol good job (Y)

[trekkinguy]

i thought this was a pretty good copy, and good quality editing also, i'd like to see his version of "The daves I know" or whatever name he has the most friends of

[xiocore]

Get off Youtube.... and die.

[xxxgerald]

I guess this means you didn't like it...

[spacefaget]

"based on"? It's a direct copy...

This sucks ass.

[xxxgerald]

It was for a DV class assignment and it was what I was trying to do.

[Uzzeghi]

the beginning says "based on a sketch". This is not "based" on anything, this is a direct plagiarism of a group of comedians great work. Thief!

[BigBadassR]

Also, your pacing is too slow. You have to push the humor fast, this drags. I hope you dont mind the constructive criticism, Im sure you worked hard on this.

[BigBadassR]

The problem, as I see it xxxgerald, is that you arent able to come even close to the patheticness of the original k.i.t.h. comedian. Thats sort of a compliment I guess. You arent lame enough to compete. Looks like you shot it well though.

[morton360]

1 star. the only funny part was when the black guy was getting stabbed the shit out of.

[musicispower25]

pretty funny, good job with the reanactment

[VTRN1]

Fail.

[kiggajohn]

this sucks!

[katie1loves2usagi]

I can't believe the real sketch has less views than this unfunny shit..jeez...seriously people, let's watch the original one!

[lesmcluffalot]

Kewlios

[Reign0fPraine]

Very well executed and filmed. I can see a lot of effort was put into this, but it needs a lot more enthusiasm. Good job though.

[spambq]

Original video was by Kids In The Hall by trained professional comedians... DO NOT attempt this at home or at school!!!

[spambq]

Ok you did a good job on the filming and execution... good lighting and good quality video with consumer grade equipment... nobody will ever be able to exude Bruce's innocent stupidity though.

[spambq]

Will somebody please post the real video so we don't have to watch this unfunny jerk imitating Bruce?

[petrov32]

My Pen

04:12 From: towianisci

Views: 74,472

[icomposer3]

haha hillarious i like how the guy who took the pen kept on misunderstanding what he was saying and i like how in the end the guy with the pen had the thing on his head with his pen attatched to it haha

[kitrik23]

low rate, boring. the dude who borrowed the pen did a fine job thought...

[Cyl11011]

that looked like fun, next do "I've Lost My Indian Drum"

[murelia]

this is the worst crap ive ever seen! You cant do a new version of that sketch you just cant! And you all suck as actors. This was just embarricing to see..ueeeeee!

[dhspam]

Learn how to spell, before you critique someone... It just makes your point look stupid and invalid.

[trekkinguy]

Hey I thought it was great, it was almost identical to the original kids in the hall sketch, some people dont appreciate it for what it is and have to nitpick the smallest thing, ridicules. Dont worry it was awesome especially considering the fact there were no professional actors and probably not the same professional equipment that network television has!

[AnimeTalk]

you are charged with:epic fail

[jeriho]

barton's eyes at 2:29 look the wrong direction.

The dream sequence transition was awkward. i did not understand he was going into a memory.

your video great example of how properly composed and edited shots still fall flat without decent performances from the actors.

Finally, your video stands as a good juxtaposition to KITH; it clearly shows how they are masters of sketch comedy.

[rhelbren]

stop

[coleking]

it's not PIN...it's PEN....like TEN...U have to say it like that....PEN...rhymes w/ TEN..

...WHERE'S MY PEEEEEN?

But valiant effort!

[xxxgerald]

Good point, it does sound like he says "pin" instead of "pen" at certain times.

[tardy1200]

the credits should probably include the words "KIDS IN THE HALL".

[iceman1121988]

and when i bring up the fact that their imitating an act, i mean.... how can ur acting be so bad. you don't even have to make up your characters "act" your just doing what you've watched

[iceman1121988]

good effort, but seriously why do people insist on redoing skits from tv shows and absolutely destroying everything that is funny about them. like this could have been the worst acting ever, and all they were doings was imitating an act that has already been done before.

[xxxgerald]

I chose this because it is one of my favorites from KITH. I really didn't mean to destroy the humor. This was an assignment for a DV class to hopefully learn the basics of directing, shooting and editing on video.

[0pinkydude]

with a little horror music more often in it it would be so cool

[SouthSpartones]

wow this is stupid. Kids in the hall rocked this skit, you killed it.

[xxxgerald]

No doubt. Notice that I referred to this as an "attempt".

[JeffKellySophie]

NO ONE could ever even touch the KIDS.

[xxxgerald]

Except for maybe the "KIDS" wives or girlfriends :)

[zerglingseb]

Loved it. Nice job!

[Sickboyus]

kill yourself bro

[joemj413]

YOU RIPPED OFF KIDS IN THE HALL!

[stoogeswoman]

Uh ... yeah ... sorta the whole point ...

[StreelightCrosswalks]

WRONG! he took his tie off to get his pen. but i'll admit it was a nice try at a re-make. always good to practice.

[xxxgerald]

You're right! Good observation. He did remove his tie in the original, oops. Anyway, thanks for comments and good luck with your own filmmaking endeavors.

[torgosassistant]

BASED on?! This is exactly the same...maybe you should change that.

[ilovepetewentzwoot]

I like the original more obviously, But this was pretty funny haha :).

[lautann]

I love this clip thanks

[residentkiller19]

well done

[randomgirl7]

haha that was pretty awesome. It's pretty much the same as the original - but I liked the few little things you added.

[lostaddict12]

that was great, it was EXACTLY like the original!

[Numilo]

That was... welll yeah... The music was horrible, but the girl inte the ending looked good. Nice that you tried.

[Hardelin]

YOU SUCK!

that wasn't BASED on kids in the hall.

TOTAL RIPOFF!

[xxxgerald]

I wasn't trying to come off as this being my own idea. Obviously I tried to emulate the original because its one of my favorites from KITH. I did this as an exercise to see how close I could come to having the same effect. I was lucky to even pull it off since I had consumer-grade equipment and limited resources. I urge anyone to attempt it themselves, its not that easy.

[tetsuo669]

What is the point in doing a low tech version of a great sketch?!?!? The original was done by some very talented people, all you did was cheapen their art with your cheesy music and a piece of shit camera. It's like a really bad cover band singing your favorite song.

[xxxgerald]

I did it for a DV workshop class assignment to learn the basics and the equipment was what they provided. Kinda like if you're learning to play guitar, you start by learning your favorite songs. Get a grip!!

[leela145]

Good Bruce mannerisms. :)

[Killers54]

Good job man, that was awesome!