書道 蘭亭序 Ｎｏ．1 書聖 王羲之 ★★★★ 教秀 臨書

[aurorasachi]

まあまあですね、もっと力入れて、もっと早く、一気で出来上がっ­たほうがいいよ

[aurorasachi]

まあまあですね、もっと力入れて、もっと早く

[wckoek]

你是临欧阳询出身的吗？

要多露锋还有留意帖上露锋的角度，那个才是晋朝书法的元神；也许­你写大字露锋不好看，但是中楷还有帖意较多的字要有些出锋，圆笔­收。

欧阳询的字是碑意重的，方笔比较多，要多留意。

你有智永的真草千字文吗？

多看看他的楷书，不要看刻本的，而是墨本的，你就会明白王羲之南­派帖的不同。

[Kyoushhu]

我只不能理解方便的中文。你的评语困难,不能理解。对不起。认为­你想要或许教我书法的内部的深的事。

[wckoek]

Can you understand English better?

I noticed that you seemed to start from learning Ouyang Xun's form. Thats why you lacked the sharp point on each strokes.

Square strokes looks more concrete, and looks better on big letters, but those with sharp points and round finish strokes looked more fluid on paper scroll.

In Wei/Jin Dynasty of Wangxizhi, the northern people had square strokes because they write stele more, southern people write scroll more that they have more fluid writing.

[wckoek]

Wangxizhi belonged to the southern school, as with his decendant Zhiyong (智永), and also Yushinan and Chusuiliang. Their writing are daring in sharp points(露锋), but this give them more vibrant variation.

But unfortunately, most of their writing is now preserved on stele and stone carvings, so you don't see it clearly, I advice you to study writings on ink copy rather than stele stone carving.

[Kyoushhu]

Thank you for having you explain it based on a historic flow. I will apply what you pointed out in an exercise in future.

在历史的潮流的基础上,谢谢你说明。发表评语,并且谢谢。今后灵­活运用什么你指出了在练习。

[wckoek]

You are welcomed.

Another example of southern school of writing is some of their writings are 向背, for example 月 is written with )( on their outer shell. Northern are influenced more by 隶书.

You can also notice the angle of the sharp points of 蘭亭序, like how he go out from one stroke, and go into another stroke. Kind of complex to say, but it was fun to study a person's writing.

Your writing is very good, keep up the good work.

[raitocorleone]

你台湾人吧？

王羲之内容一般，有些浪费字数。

字是很不错，即使是二手货也不错

[raitocorleone]

香港跟台湾一样没文化内涵。大陆再差也有不装逼的。

他的文章为什么我不能评论？文采不错，一文留下很多成语。可惜缺­乏凌厉和气势。略显消极。

现存有很多版本。这不需要你来介绍吧。哈

这算不尊重把？

另外，这个视频不是到是写文章还是临摹哈

[raitocorleone]

我为什么要说他二手货，就是因为冯程素的勾摹

脑子不转一下。哎。

[Kyoushhu]

I think that I should write it by a writing brush if possible. You may write it on the blackboard of the sand. Like you, I hope that one loving calligraphy increases all over the world.

[ichjakob]

I´m learning with a blackboard of sand (I don´t know If you understand what I mean, English is not my mother lenguage)Do you think it is useful? or should I start from de beginnig with ink and paintbrush?

[frehleymayhem5]

はい!! i wish i could do that.

[andrewkpchin]

永和九年 Jap calligraphy No.1 [-44]

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[Kyoushhu]

Thank you for having you watch VTR. Furthermore, I write a work letting you cause your impression.

[SenseiStrange]

best shodoka on youtube!

[Kyoushhu]

Thank you for having you support my action. Furthermore, I make an effort and offer a better thing to the people. Still thanking you in advance.