Learn to Trust:A Patrick Story(ch1)

[spectacularboo21]

Whoa kool chapter

[flygirls64]

loved it

[shatinalaresha]

oooooo great job...lol i know i'm a few months late but i had to see the beginning

[pinkandpurplek1]

Love it

[taetaelovescarnell]

girl i love sayin osn and gnr u speak ma type of language me likey gnr

[myzippy2]

I loved it!!!

Im not sure i read it right because its blury and im blind

is patrick bein mean to my sister?

ima have to jump in there and teach himm a lesson and ima have 2 whoop jaila while im at it. I don't think im likin Kelly in this one

[tty434]

i gotta big ego!!!!!!!!!

haha luv it gurl!

[kellzgurl11]

i love it! sorry i'm so late i didn't notice this story

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

it's ok..

[taetaelovescarnell]

next ch can u do sumthin to it so that i can actually read it and enjoy it cause ma eye sight aint no where near good

[bepk18]

qood chapter cant

wait for the next chapter

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

thanks girl

[zanessacutie1000]

I LOVE IT!

[destinijoyabff]

luv da story itz great

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

thanks mah

[cocorib5babygirl]

great story but i mean dang y i gotta be the bad gurl lol with the bad boy lol but great job 5*

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

you won't be that bad.Just jealous

[Mandy4324324]

luved it good job

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

thanks

[lilvicm]

LOVED IT

5*

KEEP DOIN UR THANG

[Ulukau808]

wow I went out with 2 Breeding Brothers before Patrick and they are ok with doing that to each other???lol but oh heck no i know Patrick is not about to cheat on me..did he seriously say NEXT?? and Did Kelly rape me??omg..this story is so intense and sounds like its gonna be GREAT and im not just saying that cuhz im in it lol..but anyways I loved it sis 5*

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

Carnell is but Pat don't know about Kellz

[Ulukau808]

oh ok

[cherrypoppingirls]

luv it

[14minnie]

luv it!! :)

[angelasweet3]

Wow This Story Like It Gonna Be great

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

thanks girl

[Nellz1luva]

dang hop from one bro to another why dont ya

thats wrong of pat why doesnt he call her his gf an then treat her sweetly..did he jus say who's next HELL NAW!

kellz an jas are gonna some serious truble

i wonder wats gonna happen at din din

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

you are crazy mah.lol...

[Nellz1luva]

thanka u!

[CillaGirl94]

i love it

:D

[cRaZiGiRl2012]

thanks girl