very good but your voice is airy that you can fix with practice and just hold down the frets on the guitar better but again with practice that will be better you hgot talent
i luv the whole works.........guitar is amazing and voice is very good...it sounds like a studio audited it to make it sound better but really its all natural. great job man
You could be pretty damn awesome if you worked on a couple things. Work on your guitar playing-get rid of the twang/buzz of strings not held down properly and use your diaphragm instead of the whispery voice, you can sing quietly without sounding whispery/breathy.
Overall I'd say you're lyrics are really good and I like your voice and chord progression. You just need a little bit of work and you'll be excellent!
wow this is a really cute song...ur right...it kinda did cheer me up...but i really wanna see the song with my words in it...so hope it comes out soon...tell me when it does
Well since I don't play guitar as great as you do I'm not going to criticize you for it. That wouldn't be nice or fair would it? That would just be kind of rude acting like I know how or I'm better when I am not. since you are doing it for fun , it would me nice if people could be nice about your dreams or your skills. They don't have to be mean. They just are. You are pretty good by the way. I'm being honest about that. Know what I mean?
very good jose! i didn't know you played guitar.. i knew that you sing, but didn't know u played...very random how you posted a comment on my page and i know who you are too..hehe..i'll creep you out until you message me.
Hi there...well you asked me to check out your music and I did. it's actually quite good and could do well if produed...maybe add some more layers into it and you've got a single :P
thanks for the comment... i do like this song. i myself havent gotten to the point where i feel comfortable letting people watch my stuff... im still shy and have a bad case of stage fright...but im getting there. good job tho!
I think it's actually pretty good, you have definetely more talent than I do I think... singing and playing... GL with your music.. plus you go to Berkley so you're smart haha.... =)
Hi jhernandez16, you have a great tone and your song is at a great length. And, don't apologize for the lighting it looks good to me ^-^ Cheers! ~Mary
PS Do you like the band "Brad"? Your tone is similar to the lead singer's voice which is really pleasing and smooth.
Very nice man. I love how you can tweak your voice and then drop right back into smooth. Nice control you have. And the song is great, thanks for letting me know about it. I think it would be a nice addition to ModernOracles Original Music Database... Cheers.
Heyyyyyy, that's pretty good! You're an all rounder dude, you have the vocals, guitar, and you can write lyrics. Wicked job man! Keep practicing and get even better! ^^
dang! this is really good. great voice, great guitar playing, and great original song. the words are so deep. to me, you sounded like jason mraz in some parts. haha well good job. love the song! =)
I think you did a damn good job. Excellent composition of guitar and amazing voice. You have a lot of talent. I would hate to see it go to waste. I'm a musician myself, but I play a little different kind of music. I listen to all sorts though, and I must say, you are damn good. Keep it up. I dig it.
Oh. My! I want to start by saying... I love your voice. Then you are gorgeous. Then I want to say... I think I am in love. This is incredible. Why are you wasting your talent on YouTube? go to American idol baby! You are awesome!
Wow, you sing great
GeorgeOxido 2 years ago
WOW! you have a great voice! i could listen to you all day!!!!^^
XxCrazyxX456 2 years ago
this is nice. have you heard of Nick Drake? It kinda sounds like him
toomanythreads 3 years ago
I cant believe you just said it sounds like Drake.
astrotravelin 2 years ago
wow this is....... probly one of the best songs i have ever heard. DO A CONCERT! u should be a solo band with that kind of music!
COElementPunkSk8ter 3 years ago
hahaha. thanks!
jhernandez16 3 years ago
dude, ionno how you do it but i still really love this song, and you have a great voice with the guitar so keep up the good work!
stripedpanther94 3 years ago
I still love this song after even more than one year! That doesn't happen a lot with me:P
You should post some more :(
NO PRESSURE!XD
nikkkinakamitie 3 years ago
wow! thanks :)
jhernandez16 2 years ago
I have a feeling I heard you sing this before. Did I slam it? I like it more (this time around).
If not, then DEJA VU. LOL...!
gameboy11 3 years ago
You have such a beautiful voice!!!
SophoanTV 3 years ago 2
it sounds really good! but.. did you forget your lyrics now and then? :P
like your voice! nice :) x
claudiak90 3 years ago
I absolutely your song. you have a great voice and the guitar is amazing too. Bravo ^^
ZivXanthus 3 years ago
Great song. Good meaning. :)
Sunshine7694 3 years ago
pretty good..keep it up :)
louisjosephtripp 4 years ago
wow brillaint
goody2shoes200394 4 years ago
:). thank you
jhernandez16 4 years ago
wow, you're amazing .. I love this <3 if I could write songs like you. I sucks. But I have a very nice voice (:
ElinPihl94 4 years ago
gee thanks! :)
jhernandez16 4 years ago
very good but your voice is airy that you can fix with practice and just hold down the frets on the guitar better but again with practice that will be better you hgot talent
tigger4eva94 4 years ago
who's strangling the cat ohh yeah 007
buttfig 4 years ago
Wow!You are really good! Awsome song!
HSMfreak93 4 years ago
You're so good! I can't stop listening =]
aLynnax 4 years ago
WOW,ur AMAZINGGGGG!!
mezo113113 4 years ago 2
You're really good!
quiteqwerty 4 years ago
i loveee it :) your so ah-mazingg!
idTAPthat97 4 years ago
Whoa,you rock! I love the song!Amazing!!! *
JuliElleGloria 4 years ago
i luv the whole works.........guitar is amazing and voice is very good...it sounds like a studio audited it to make it sound better but really its all natural. great job man
jazzyhands07 4 years ago
You could be pretty damn awesome if you worked on a couple things. Work on your guitar playing-get rid of the twang/buzz of strings not held down properly and use your diaphragm instead of the whispery voice, you can sing quietly without sounding whispery/breathy.
Overall I'd say you're lyrics are really good and I like your voice and chord progression. You just need a little bit of work and you'll be excellent!
stifledbabsie 4 years ago
Very good.
Sassyrecombinantpass 4 years ago
Your voice is very soothing :) Nice song.
emguh 4 years ago 3
he dude, i write songs too. but i'm only 10. but still their pretty good. i jjst might post a vid about it.
Dramaqueen879 4 years ago
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how can u have a brain disease and have memories?
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Dramaqueen879 4 years ago
wow, a beautiful voice with a beautiful song.
love it:)
kawaiigurl66 4 years ago 2
Ohh! I love it!
You're one talented guy.
I love the lyrics! Good job! ;]
wollee 4 years ago 2
awesome song, good rhythm, lyrics and singing!
tally24th 4 years ago
Great song! good timing too
Donjosue 4 years ago
I understand its your compostition but take it down a notch. Its a bit overwhelming to my ears!
boodleboy 4 years ago
Great job!
Lovemykitten 4 years ago
That was really good!
bfftaylor 4 years ago
Great song, nice lyrics - keep up the good work ♪
KrisShred 4 years ago
thank you for the sweet comments, this is my new login, so feel free to subscribe to it as well, if you want to.
and great voice by the way! =) nice composition!!
AnandaTV 4 years ago
wow this is a really cute song...ur right...it kinda did cheer me up...but i really wanna see the song with my words in it...so hope it comes out soon...tell me when it does
ghettosamoan92 4 years ago
WoW...
I really like it. It's a great song and you sing great too.
Great Job Guy!
Kiaaaa 4 years ago
Well since I don't play guitar as great as you do I'm not going to criticize you for it. That wouldn't be nice or fair would it? That would just be kind of rude acting like I know how or I'm better when I am not. since you are doing it for fun , it would me nice if people could be nice about your dreams or your skills. They don't have to be mean. They just are. You are pretty good by the way. I'm being honest about that. Know what I mean?
rockstuff345 4 years ago
And you told me "I" was singing pitchy?
rockstuff345 4 years ago
wow nice :]]
CviewBabe423 4 years ago
very good jose! i didn't know you played guitar.. i knew that you sing, but didn't know u played...very random how you posted a comment on my page and i know who you are too..hehe..i'll creep you out until you message me.
geetargurl 4 years ago
Sounds Great!! 5/5 Stars.
crazy377 4 years ago
not bad =) i like it.
omgWTFn00b 4 years ago
hey good job! i like it!!:)you did good!!you rock boi! lol
ashley9110 4 years ago
you have a nice voice :) and i like this song. check this guy out, you might learn some stuff ;) like i did
watch?v=KBjYjGlISno
m0nNickneim 4 years ago
i like it it sounds good keep it up you rock!!!
{Jess}
hatenotlove123 4 years ago
It's really cool ! :) I hope I will compose like u :) Good luck
MagdaLos 4 years ago
nice guitar and vocals dude im definatly suscribing keep up the good work
rockermanguy 4 years ago
Hi there...well you asked me to check out your music and I did. it's actually quite good and could do well if produed...maybe add some more layers into it and you've got a single :P
<3 HappyG
HappyGrulz 4 years ago
that was pretty good
dq913 4 years ago
that was really good!
taylorryland8 4 years ago
thats accutally prety good!
This is another song you did that has been done already? or did you wirte it? its really good!
poisonedHIMbamfan 4 years ago
Yup. I wrote it.
jhernandez16 4 years ago
That was good for an original! Keep it up boy.
Evuhhs 4 years ago
Is it just me, or does your voice sound better on your original songs? You should make a studio cut of this song! :)
gwithadream 4 years ago
thanks for the comment... i do like this song. i myself havent gotten to the point where i feel comfortable letting people watch my stuff... im still shy and have a bad case of stage fright...but im getting there. good job tho!
sweetaimers21 4 years ago
GREAT except i would of used a little vibrato on the long notes, lets everyone know u have control of ur voice :) im giving this 5 stars
masterfighter999 4 years ago
really nice song, great voice, dude!
CasualDaveDotCom 4 years ago
I think it's actually pretty good, you have definetely more talent than I do I think... singing and playing... GL with your music.. plus you go to Berkley so you're smart haha.... =)
peaces man
jeffreydeguia 4 years ago
not bad man
samuelshepard 4 years ago
ur rly good! keep singin =) much love
dezaray08 4 years ago
wow...you are amzing. your voice gives me goosebumps. i dont have any videos up yet, but i will soon. check em out!!
kindranichole 4 years ago
that was great song bro. j...!!and the most awesome there is u wrote that song....really great...keep it up..!God Bless...!!
cindyspider26 4 years ago
i love your style
padalekiss 4 years ago
woww.. thiss is really greatt! you have an amazing voice! really enjoyed this.
sarahdylanmusic 4 years ago
Pretty good, man.
BeforeMonday 4 years ago
your vocals are beautiful :)
nikkigrg 4 years ago
=] Megsie loves you, you adorable love monkey <3
Beautiful song sigh I can't get enough lol.
xoxMegsiexox 4 years ago
i LOVE YOUR VOiCE!
iTSMESCOOTER 4 years ago
Pretty cool man, your voice is pretty good.
SlowStrider 4 years ago
made me cry. :D
AnimeMiscible 4 years ago
Hi jhernandez16, you have a great tone and your song is at a great length. And, don't apologize for the lighting it looks good to me ^-^ Cheers! ~Mary
PS Do you like the band "Brad"? Your tone is similar to the lead singer's voice which is really pleasing and smooth.
marywinmusic 4 years ago
Very nice!!!
bestiaccia 4 years ago
Hi!! Is a very good song!! I like it so mush!!God bless you and thanks of your comment!
nornornor333333 4 years ago
yeah time is a collection of memories...
nice work...voice and guitaring are really good!! keep posting...
axedhead123 4 years ago
Very nice man. I love how you can tweak your voice and then drop right back into smooth. Nice control you have. And the song is great, thanks for letting me know about it. I think it would be a nice addition to ModernOracles Original Music Database... Cheers.
Isodig 4 years ago
Heyyyyyy, that's pretty good! You're an all rounder dude, you have the vocals, guitar, and you can write lyrics. Wicked job man! Keep practicing and get even better! ^^
windstennotsukai 4 years ago
love this song!!! icould totally have this in my mp3 player to sing along to!!
you need to be discovered
and you're a great song-writer!! you are simply amazing.
i'm speechless(even thoguh it doesnt seem like it:P)
KrushLuck 4 years ago
not bad! I like it!!
clarr2892 4 years ago
keep it up!
JohnOliverY 4 years ago
Really nice job ... you have a pure voice that doesn't need to be tampered with. Keep it up :)
flirt1486 4 years ago
Hi!:) You have such a beautiful voice! Great song!!:)
God bless u!!:):*
Pri.
Priloomis 4 years ago
Congrats. This is a beautiful original
Thanks
dabiribd 4 years ago
that's great man. Nice lyrics, awesome voice and good guitar accompaniment.
ontrashakotra 4 years ago
well i'm not a musician but
if i may say
i really like your voice :)
keep it up J!
chipilu 4 years ago
A beautifully written song that I really want on my Ipod. LOL.
Rookie15 4 years ago
pretty good but may I suggest better lighting for your videos. get some lamps or something so you won't look like you're hiding in the shadows
creativeTYPE32 4 years ago
you're right. i noticed that too
jhernandez16 4 years ago
dang! this is really good. great voice, great guitar playing, and great original song. the words are so deep. to me, you sounded like jason mraz in some parts. haha well good job. love the song! =)
reallyrandom14 4 years ago
this is wonderful =)
absolutjessica 4 years ago
Wow this is good! No, don't waste yourself by going on American Idol.
SpamTogwell 4 years ago
Really great man, well done! :D Love your voice and you have a sweet melody there too! Best of luck with your songwriting! :D
philscotland 4 years ago
WOW! THAT WAS REALLY GOOD. BOTH THE GUiTAR AND YOUR VOiCE SOUND AMAZiNG!!
<3 SCOOTER
iTSMESCOOTER 4 years ago
I think you did a damn good job. Excellent composition of guitar and amazing voice. You have a lot of talent. I would hate to see it go to waste. I'm a musician myself, but I play a little different kind of music. I listen to all sorts though, and I must say, you are damn good. Keep it up. I dig it.
Vin
vampiricwonder555 4 years ago
Oh. My! I want to start by saying... I love your voice. Then you are gorgeous. Then I want to say... I think I am in love. This is incredible. Why are you wasting your talent on YouTube? go to American idol baby! You are awesome!
CStoddard18 4 years ago