Two Breaths Walking 「二息歩行」 《English Fandub》

[SwRRt3]

I like your voice, your breaths are kind of obvious in some parts, but that's all I can really think of. ^-^

[TegomasuFan]

All you need is a little fixing your pitch. ( and quite a lot of places ) You got a pretty voice! This song seems to be straining your voice a little since you're going flat on a lot of areas. Don't fret and you might want to change your vowels with some of the lyrics since these don't seem to flow as nice. Honestly, at first I didn't realize you were singing English ^^; haha. But nice job :3

[0PandaManda0]

I like it, pretty good really seeing as how difficult the song actually is. Needs some adjustments with the wording in a few areas and some parts were your voice seems to fall a little flat or too sharp ( Or airy like?) Not sure how to explain that exactly lol. But nice job keep up the good work! Would love to hear a do-over. :3

[soujofan]

you sound a bit sharp or flat in some spots, but over all, i like it :D good job. love the lyrics

[cicada300]

you sound very nervous when you're singing and the lyrics need some adjusting since they don't quite flow with the song and tends to sound a bit awkward

[Zer0deVirus]

The beginning made me skeptical because I don't like hearing full songs in that distortion but I am definitely glad I heard the whole thing! It is very good, It fits well with the beat and will you post a download link?

[ReicheruCharin]

@Zer0deVirus

Thank you! ;u;

I am embarrassed and flattered that you would want a download..!

Link to the MP3 is now added in the video description. <3

[Zer0deVirus]

@ReicheruCharin Some added effects and a bit of tweaking here and there would make the song better but it still is good enough to make me want to put it on my iPod ^_^ Wow, I just checked out your profile and are you really from Australia? I talk to people from there on Skype and they have accents but I can't really hear an accent in this song. Anyways, Keep up the good work!

[ReicheruCharin]

@Zer0deVirus

Hehe.. I kinda feel like redoing it now, just to make it that bit better! Thanks <:

Yeah, I'm Australian. When I talk normally my accent is there, but in singing it kinda disappears xD

[Zer0deVirus]

@ReicheruCharin I would gladly listen to the redone version but only do it if you want to. If you need someone to help with criticism then just message me ok? ^_^ Also that accent thing is rather funny :D

[Yokolite94]

This is really good! I love this song and I'm glad to hear the English!

[ReicheruCharin]

@Yokolite94

Thanks! <3

[daSesshyfanclub]

You have a good voice and the lyrics are wonderful! but you need a better software or something that wont make your voice quiet and much more clear :)

[VuVHO]

this was very great ^-^~ voice was really nice too~ lol

[ReicheruCharin]

@VuVHO Thank you!

[OlderCiaxsjes]

Very nicely done~

[ReicheruCharin]

@OlderCiaxsjes Thanks! <3

[RenaHeart]

wow this is pretty good ^-^ I like it!

[ReicheruCharin]

Thank you! <3

[tecneon]

my critic is that you have an awsome voice period :3

[ReicheruCharin]

Thank you! ;u;