Worse is comparative meaning something can be worse than something else in comparison where as 'worst' is superlative meaning something cannot be as worse than something which is worst.
In a race of 10 cars, if you finished as #5, you'd be worse than #1,2,3,4 yet #6,7,8,9,10 would have it worst than you.
Id give the text some colour and multiply it over the texture you have in the background to make it look like its part of the texture. Bright white sans serif font does not go too well with "grungy" textures.
Introduce some design that is more relevant to the source material, either a colour scheme, type of background or even a particular font.
Its a good start though mate. Keep at it every day.
this was boring. So I'll tell you how to make it better. It needs more variation. Right now you have a lot of the words popping to the middle of the screen with the same weight and size text. Switch it up! Use some bold, make someBIG and some small. Introduce some color. Also some of your movement is a bit floaty. Gotta pin it down and keep it sharp. Keep up the work though you'll get there!
A thin script font like Zapfino wouldn't have worked at all. A simple bold sans serif like Helvetica Neue black would work best. But that's just my opinion.
Then what would the good sir want instead of Arial? One take what one can find, Arial is standard on most of the world's computers and is therefore obtainable and easily relatable. Every font has its purpose and for an untrained eye wheter you chose Helvetica or Arial does not matter the slightest. To build a rant on the sole factor that the typeface was poorly chosen and therefore "embarassing" says more about your characther than the video itself.
it's bad food, worse weather btw. but good job though :)
LeePritch5 2 months ago
A nice stylized font ITALICIZED would work good, maybe BOLD for emphasis as needed.
ITALICS implies movement, motion and action.
zippyman818 9 months ago
uahuahauhauahuahauahuahuah
Z3t487 11 months ago
nothing special about this
NasibahAlhussain 1 year ago
they forgot bad teeth as well
HazeNJuice 1 year ago
im but why is every1 badmouthing this what did you expect honastly?
ToxicBrainFilms 1 year ago
Worse is comparative meaning something can be worse than something else in comparison where as 'worst' is superlative meaning something cannot be as worse than something which is worst.
In a race of 10 cars, if you finished as #5, you'd be worse than #1,2,3,4 yet #6,7,8,9,10 would have it worst than you.
linkinpark9sc 1 year ago
nice one ...
MrTBSC 1 year ago
typography was a little bland, try working on your design skills before delving into after effects, good start though
brefsone 2 years ago
i agree. the font and the size of the characters stay the same the whole time. the words were animated, but uniform.
samrusoff 1 year ago
help me ..How to Make SOmething Like This
sweetnonni 2 years ago
short but sweeet i like it
dmbox26 2 years ago 3
Id give the text some colour and multiply it over the texture you have in the background to make it look like its part of the texture. Bright white sans serif font does not go too well with "grungy" textures.
Introduce some design that is more relevant to the source material, either a colour scheme, type of background or even a particular font.
Its a good start though mate. Keep at it every day.
ameba2k 2 years ago
needs some more variation in your font
howli 2 years ago
this was boring. So I'll tell you how to make it better. It needs more variation. Right now you have a lot of the words popping to the middle of the screen with the same weight and size text. Switch it up! Use some bold, make someBIG and some small. Introduce some color. Also some of your movement is a bit floaty. Gotta pin it down and keep it sharp. Keep up the work though you'll get there!
CASEMASTERFLEX 2 years ago 13
how did you do that
PurFur123 2 years ago
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Fuck London
CharmingIceX 2 years ago
This is how my phone ring! lol great mouvie ^^
Thadeejay 2 years ago
i got this str0ng desire in making typography but i cant bcuz i dnt know how....pls make a tutorial of typography pls!!!
dianehular 2 years ago
That blew. Also, it's "karats."
Nice, tardo.
FukctehTube 2 years ago
....? Nice?....
Gpalmer16 2 years ago
wicked film!! and wicked animation hats f to ya bud wish i could do tht lol!
eddiecz 3 years ago
what movie?
watev4 3 years ago
Snatch. A good movie, lol.
PilotCube 3 years ago 2
the font could've been stronger, good movie cut though
REELHUNTERSdotcom 3 years ago 2
mary fuckin popers LOL
pinkhotgirl 3 years ago
You don't know who Mary Poppins is, do you?
ParabolaTool 2 years ago
of course I do... lol the nanny with the umbrella lol
pinkhotgirl 2 years ago 3
TheToppings -agreed about the font
imamayba 3 years ago
AWESOME !!!
faskowesti 3 years ago
lmao.
crisco7241 3 years ago
Should have used Zapfino or Papyrus
flavomatic 3 years ago
A thin script font like Zapfino wouldn't have worked at all. A simple bold sans serif like Helvetica Neue black would work best. But that's just my opinion.
PlanktonBouy 3 years ago
Uhh, is that Arial? Yuk! (very embarrassing)
flavomatic 3 years ago 13
Then what would the good sir want instead of Arial? One take what one can find, Arial is standard on most of the world's computers and is therefore obtainable and easily relatable. Every font has its purpose and for an untrained eye wheter you chose Helvetica or Arial does not matter the slightest. To build a rant on the sole factor that the typeface was poorly chosen and therefore "embarassing" says more about your characther than the video itself.
ddenns 1 year ago
greate job dude.
merihtarsus 3 years ago 2
Good, but the typography I've seen moves around all over the place.
It seemed a little stationary, but that's my only gripe.
BlackNoir 3 years ago
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this is terrible!
benicetomytube 3 years ago
Me thinks it's "Bad tea, worse weather"
I'm just being picky. You did well =]
APXLV 3 years ago 2
It's not, they were right.
Good job, the font didn't do much for it though.
TheToppings 3 years ago
Not bad, but i think in the storyboard, the first one means "landon". because he didn't understand what he says.
oahupipe 3 years ago
fair enough thats London, but I still LOVE that city.
mexashe 3 years ago 2
Typeface selection could be better. It's also "Bad food, worse weather" not worst.
fluxweed 3 years ago 10
thanks for the feedback. it was my first attempt at something like that and i was just going off the audio so it was a little unclear.
domneillvfx 3 years ago 2
Fair enough. Still a very strong effort. Keep it up!
fluxweed 3 years ago
@fluxweed
it IS "worst weather" man ;)
MachinistakaxERo 1 year ago
lol perfect dude
caspianx 4 years ago