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  • it's bad food, worse weather btw. but good job though :)

  • A nice stylized font ITALICIZED would work good, maybe BOLD for emphasis as needed.

    ITALICS implies movement, motion and action.

  • uahuahauhauahuahauahuahuah

  • nothing special about this

  • they forgot bad teeth as well

  • im but why is every1 badmouthing this what did you expect honastly?

  • Worse is comparative meaning something can be worse than something else in comparison where as 'worst' is superlative meaning something cannot be as worse than something which is worst.

    In a race of 10 cars, if you finished as #5, you'd be worse than #1,2,3,4 yet #6,7,8,9,10 would have it worst than you.

  • nice one ...

  • typography was a little bland, try working on your design skills before delving into after effects, good start though

  • i agree. the font and the size of the characters stay the same the whole time. the words were animated, but uniform.

  • help me ..How to Make SOmething Like This

  • short but sweeet i like it

  • Id give the text some colour and multiply it over the texture you have in the background to make it look like its part of the texture. Bright white sans serif font does not go too well with "grungy" textures.

    Introduce some design that is more relevant to the source material, either a colour scheme, type of background or even a particular font.

    Its a good start though mate. Keep at it every day.

  • needs some more variation in your font

  • this was boring. So I'll tell you how to make it better. It needs more variation. Right now you have a lot of the words popping to the middle of the screen with the same weight and size text. Switch it up! Use some bold, make someBIG and some small. Introduce some color. Also some of your movement is a bit floaty. Gotta pin it down and keep it sharp. Keep up the work though you'll get there!

  • how did you do that

  • This is how my phone ring! lol great mouvie ^^

  • i got this str0ng desire in making typography but i cant bcuz i dnt know how....pls make a tutorial of typography pls!!!

  • That blew. Also, it's "karats."

    Nice, tardo.

  • ....? Nice?....

  • wicked film!! and wicked animation hats f to ya bud wish i could do tht lol!

  • what movie?

  • Snatch. A good movie, lol.

  • the font could've been stronger, good movie cut though

  • mary fuckin popers LOL

  • You don't know who Mary Poppins is, do you?

  • of course I do... lol the nanny with the umbrella lol

  • TheToppings -agreed about the font

  • AWESOME !!!

  • lmao.

  • Should have used Zapfino or Papyrus

  • A thin script font like Zapfino wouldn't have worked at all. A simple bold sans serif like Helvetica Neue black would work best. But that's just my opinion.

  • Uhh, is that Arial? Yuk! (very embarrassing)

  • Then what would the good sir want instead of Arial? One take what one can find, Arial is standard on most of the world's computers and is therefore obtainable and easily relatable. Every font has its purpose and for an untrained eye wheter you chose Helvetica or Arial does not matter the slightest. To build a rant on the sole factor that the typeface was poorly chosen and therefore "embarassing" says more about your characther than the video itself.

  • greate job dude.

  • Good, but the typography I've seen moves around all over the place.

    It seemed a little stationary, but that's my only gripe.

  • Me thinks it's "Bad tea, worse weather"

    I'm just being picky. You did well =]

  • It's not, they were right.

    Good job, the font didn't do much for it though.

  • Not bad, but i think in the storyboard, the first one means "landon". because he didn't understand what he says.

  • fair enough thats London, but I still LOVE that city.

  • Typeface selection could be better. It's also "Bad food, worse weather" not worst.

  • thanks for the feedback. it was my first attempt at something like that and i was just going off the audio so it was a little unclear.

  • Fair enough. Still a very strong effort. Keep it up!

  • @fluxweed

    it IS "worst weather" man ;)

  • lol perfect dude

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