Jay Jeer - (a new version of) Word Song starring Syd Barrett

[mobile513]

You did a great job with these. I love this one in particular, I thought they should have done something like this on Barrett. I find most their overdubs awful on that, and songs like this one were much better than what wound up on it.

As for critique, I agree that the dubs are too loud. I'd also throw some delay in there, on Syd's guitar, if possible, and on your dubs at the end. Make it more "freak out".

[mobile513]

@mobile513

Also, I forgot to say how I love how your version emphasizes the building tension and has this nice scattered sound. Also, at about 1:47 there's a sound that kinda reminds me of an orchestrial hit, like a violin I think. Wouldn't that be neat if it had a little orchestra touch right before the riff after the verses?

It's always been a dream of mine to remix his solo albums.

[AndreXstav]

Very Good!!

[66MadcapLaughs]

I like the original better. You did a nice job though.

[originalzag]

Not bad. Not bad at all, I think you reached something "familiar" sounds in here. Well done, J-G !

[Juupp]

Yes ! This is very trippy with Syd-spirit.

Nice work

Juupp

"please hold onto the steel rail"

[christophersidwell]

Over-powering the original I feel - re-I.Q.