Pretty good fight. There are alot of different kinds of fight choreography out there appreciated by different people so I see why some why some would like it and some wouldn't but this deserves at least a few more likes. It does remind me of bourne. Good job. What martial arts do you study?
did you have to work out really hard for this? It sure looks like it the way you guys are taking falls like that. Did you use stunt doubles or was that all you guys? Just curious cause this is really well-done!! Keep up the good work!!
dude!! That looked totally realistic and yet freakin awesome!!!! This definitely looks like something that should be in a movie!! Why don't you MAKE a movie? This scene would be awesome in it!! Again, really cool!!
@IGNsucks Haha you're not into that like "Slap me in the face" kinda stuff, are ya? :p I kid. This was my first fight scene to direct. I'd go back in and speed parts up now that I know how, but then I'd have to retool the music and all that, and I just don't feel like it. I think it's better this goes down in youtube posterity as is.
this is extremely well done! great job! and the people who think this sucks obviously have no lives and cant tell what is good and what is crap. because this is good!
@borissaid123 Thank you very much, I do appreciate that. I wouldn't worry though... I'm wanting to do this professionally, and you'll always have people who get very irritated when shit isn't exactly to specifications.
Sometimes Troll's forget they belong under bridges.
@Sethmyrrh HAHA!!! I agree completely, but then I'd have to play with the music, and I decided to just go with it. Plus I wanted the blood to show, which it really kinda doesn't. Oh well, we did our best. Thanks for the comment!
Very cool - I can't wait to see what you do with more time, more cameras, and an actual budget! I'd love to see a dirty-fast-brutal kali/escrima/silat fight, with close quarters and cool editing.
that was sweet... but u shoulda made alot of different angles and made it look really fast and raw like the bourne fights in the movies... ive done it before it looks awesome
It was a nice piece. The only things I'd do differently were things that can be done with just a bit more effort. Like use a microphone to record folly for the hits. You did have some but the music just over powered it too much.
Everything else I could point out are small things I notice as a viewer. Like the camera tripod leaning on the wall at the end. And the mysterious vanishing feet in the stall.
Haha!! Yeah, I knew nothing about mics or audio when I made this. I used a film camera, and when I captured it didn't take sound with it, so I just added it all in. I know a lot more now though. Thanks for the comment. I'm working the choreography for my next one and want to start filming in Fall. Haha the foot and tripod are classic, completely a "No time, roll with it" moment.
NUAICE! for only having 4 hrs, $0 budget, untrained actors and improvisation because of a time crunch this was totally well made, no sarcasm... you seem to have utilized what you had
Fightwise... ah... erm... uhm... Seriously... get other person to do it next time.
Camerawise, a very very good job. Good use of music, good pace, good sound synching, appropiate ambient light, good choice of camera positions... if I were your teacher, I'd give you an straight A.
1) Ah...erm...uhm... Where's your fight scene? Seriously. Get another person to critique for you.
2) And thank you, I was very proud of the camera work and direction. Good times had by all.
And yes, I know that as a filmmaker I have to be able to take harsh criticism, but I can still back my work up. I am very proud of this and any negative comments without reason are pretty much null and void. Plus, read the description.
This scene is good. Of course they are amateur but what? Some of people writing bad things about it are really dumb themselves!
It's a great scene. Difficult to do I know. Great montage, great camera's moves - everything. Direction of all these mooves. Does anyone think about it before negative comment?
fuck you bitch ass ass hole he did not even die it so gay like you i will get someone to beat you up you fuck you dick face I'm nine years old brennan schmidt
No wonder nobody likes Germany...well bruv, I dunno about that, seen enough of punjabs in Berlin a few weeks back I thought there must be a fierce cricket match happening somewhere. But nice video though, no joke, keep at it.
Nothing wrong with the suit dude winning - he was the cooler guy with cooler moves. And the other dude produced a knife first.... Superbly choreographed scene - looking forward to seeing more.
Yeah. But don't worry, we made sure to urinate everywhere before we even tried to film this. I mean, c'mon... Why the Hell would you want to film a fight scene unless you were drenched in piss?
Thank you for the compliments, folks. To address some things:
No, I don't do requests, so I won't be doing James Bond vs. Jason Bourne. 5 new fights will be posted in December.
I won because I rule.
It was not meant to be perfect, just cheap and fast. I did the sound and stage direction myself. The execution is off because we filmed this in 4 hours with an actor who was untrained. Despite that, Rey was a total bad ass in this fight.
That was some good stuff.The stage direction could have been a little better,perhaps the execution too.The mood was there,great use of Kali/Krav maga style self defence manouvers.Could have used a decent sound technician,but you did all this without spending a penny?Good man,you have some great imagination and directorial vision goin buddy!
at 2:17 to 2:22 it looks like hes taking a crap
bryanthepoke 8 months ago
nice work
pyroinc 10 months ago
cat fight
TheLuke494 10 months ago
Pretty good fight. There are alot of different kinds of fight choreography out there appreciated by different people so I see why some why some would like it and some wouldn't but this deserves at least a few more likes. It does remind me of bourne. Good job. What martial arts do you study?
colterknebel 1 year ago
There's a guy in the loo! 00:37!
MrJoshuaYoYo 1 year ago
pause at 3:10 I ROFL'ed
S0ulE4terYumi 1 year ago
He does look like Ted Mosby lol
trellified 1 year ago
lmao! 0:37 feet in the stall..he must of freaked when he heard you slam into it XD
QuickAtTheKeys 1 year ago
@QuickAtTheKeys Actually I think that was our friend Brian! :p
Liptakular 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
did you have to work out really hard for this? It sure looks like it the way you guys are taking falls like that. Did you use stunt doubles or was that all you guys? Just curious cause this is really well-done!! Keep up the good work!!
abcdefg1234567ist 1 year ago
@abcdefg1234567ist
I agree!! Did you have to do a bunch of physical training to toughen out for this?? If so, I really admire that!!
a101889 1 year ago
@abcdefg1234567ist All of it was us! I was trained in Stage Combat and professional wrestling.
Liptakular 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
dude!! That looked totally realistic and yet freakin awesome!!!! This definitely looks like something that should be in a movie!! Why don't you MAKE a movie? This scene would be awesome in it!! Again, really cool!!
abcdefg1234567ist 1 year ago
@abcdefg1234567ist I made one called Farworld, and I have a couple trailers for it too! I will be releasing the movie VERY soon!
Liptakular 1 month ago
Totally gay
amitnewyork 1 year ago
done with no money and in about 4 hours? This is GREAT.
xXDnAProductionsXx 1 year ago
this diserves to be in the bourne movies.
LEEZ0NE 1 year ago
the guy with the white pants looks like Ted Mosby from how i met your mother. and seriously dude half the time it looks like they're fucking.
IGNsucks 1 year ago
@IGNsucks Haha you're not into that like "Slap me in the face" kinda stuff, are ya? :p I kid. This was my first fight scene to direct. I'd go back in and speed parts up now that I know how, but then I'd have to retool the music and all that, and I just don't feel like it. I think it's better this goes down in youtube posterity as is.
Liptakular 1 year ago
Liptakular? This is so awesome :D
ericthuis 1 year ago
@ericthuis Thank you! Much appreciated.
Liptakular 1 year ago
if u are an amature
Thepivotgun 1 year ago
@b22frozenfire Soon I'll post the video of me butt fucking the cameraman. That'll make you laugh, worst acting ever, even for porno standards.
Liptakular 1 year ago
wow the actors look like theyr trying to be AS SAFE AS POSSIBLE while slipping on bananas and making dramatic faces on camera
Thepivotgun 1 year ago
@Thepivotgun Yeah but the most impressive part is that you don't even see the bananas. Tricky shit, mi amigo.
Liptakular 1 year ago
Hey, That fight was pretty cool. I don't care what people say. Gr8 Work & keep it up. (-:
HalfCracker4life 1 year ago
@HalfCracker4life Thanks man, and believe me I will. I will do every person on this comment board proud.
Liptakular 1 year ago
this is extremely well done! great job! and the people who think this sucks obviously have no lives and cant tell what is good and what is crap. because this is good!
borissaid123 1 year ago
@borissaid123 Thank you very much, I do appreciate that. I wouldn't worry though... I'm wanting to do this professionally, and you'll always have people who get very irritated when shit isn't exactly to specifications.
Sometimes Troll's forget they belong under bridges.
Liptakular 1 year ago
sucks!!
blackstone316 1 year ago
great job. there are some good techniques
lilflamer10 1 year ago
It wasnt bad. The knife to the back scene could have been chopped to 1/5 the time, it was kinda weird. Nice effort.
Sethmyrrh 1 year ago
@Sethmyrrh HAHA!!! I agree completely, but then I'd have to play with the music, and I decided to just go with it. Plus I wanted the blood to show, which it really kinda doesn't. Oh well, we did our best. Thanks for the comment!
Liptakular 1 year ago
Worst fight scene in the history of fight scenes.
GabiN64 1 year ago
@GabiN64 You've obviously never seen Mortal Kombat: Annihilation. Or Max Magician and the Legend of the Ring.
Liptakular 1 year ago
Very cool - I can't wait to see what you do with more time, more cameras, and an actual budget! I'd love to see a dirty-fast-brutal kali/escrima/silat fight, with close quarters and cool editing.
amrakanavrin 1 year ago 2
gay
XTdarkgainTX 1 year ago
Yer mom.
Liptakular 1 year ago
@Liptakular wa? yes need your mama now
XTdarkgainTX 1 year ago
raaaa im gonna cut you!!!
Sasuke7848 1 year ago
not only the material, the actors are bad..
badxboy111 1 year ago
Funny thing considering both actors are classically trained, highly lauded thespians.
Liptakular 1 year ago 4
whats music at 0:35 ?????? isnt it of matrix?
dabuzzard1 1 year ago
good fake fighting
hotair3113 1 year ago
that was sweet... but u shoulda made alot of different angles and made it look really fast and raw like the bourne fights in the movies... ive done it before it looks awesome
bucketsofpickles 2 years ago
This is pretty classy! I could take or leave the music though :P
hewhosayszonk 2 years ago
You need a better matrial arts background to make this look better
ossie19681 2 years ago
Yeah, I've been trying to get ahold of Jackie Chan or Jet Li, but they won't return my calls. I guess I'm not worthy enough to do film then, huh?
Liptakular 2 years ago
Nicely done sir.
Chreography was good.
I'd have used different angles for the shots. But than again thats just my personal taste more than anything related to your ability.
Eyclonus 2 years ago
It was a nice piece. The only things I'd do differently were things that can be done with just a bit more effort. Like use a microphone to record folly for the hits. You did have some but the music just over powered it too much.
Everything else I could point out are small things I notice as a viewer. Like the camera tripod leaning on the wall at the end. And the mysterious vanishing feet in the stall.
Otherwise good effort and hope you keep it up.
gundammrw 2 years ago
Haha!! Yeah, I knew nothing about mics or audio when I made this. I used a film camera, and when I captured it didn't take sound with it, so I just added it all in. I know a lot more now though. Thanks for the comment. I'm working the choreography for my next one and want to start filming in Fall. Haha the foot and tripod are classic, completely a "No time, roll with it" moment.
Liptakular 2 years ago
1:02 looks like u guys are having sex LOL good fight but :D
ITGOEZ 2 years ago
Hehe... Rey is a sexy beast!
Liptakular 2 years ago
I was thinking the same thing...
KuanDeedee 2 years ago
Spectacularly good - brilliantly choreographed, acted, scored. Hope to see more from you soon.
ildamiano 2 years ago
u guys are good, keep trying and u might be a good chreographer on day, may be in a hollywood action movie.
hazara14 2 years ago
very well done
TORCHWOOD006 2 years ago
& i completely expected Rey's eyes to open on the end on cue with an insense orchestral gliss.
athievingbird 2 years ago
badass, John! I'm really proud of you, haha. if you ever need a badass girl to fight for you, i TOTALLY will.
athievingbird 2 years ago
NUAICE! for only having 4 hrs, $0 budget, untrained actors and improvisation because of a time crunch this was totally well made, no sarcasm... you seem to have utilized what you had
thedexterbros 2 years ago
Wow. I was impressed, but of course I have limited fight scene experience. Did one in college for a play, and that is the extent of my experience.
backstreetpixie 3 years ago
Fightwise... ah... erm... uhm... Seriously... get other person to do it next time.
Camerawise, a very very good job. Good use of music, good pace, good sound synching, appropiate ambient light, good choice of camera positions... if I were your teacher, I'd give you an straight A.
Kueiyanwag 3 years ago
1) Ah...erm...uhm... Where's your fight scene? Seriously. Get another person to critique for you.
2) And thank you, I was very proud of the camera work and direction. Good times had by all.
And yes, I know that as a filmmaker I have to be able to take harsh criticism, but I can still back my work up. I am very proud of this and any negative comments without reason are pretty much null and void. Plus, read the description.
Liptakular 3 years ago
Nice job.
slimshodi 3 years ago
r u cleaning the bathroom?
eWinEminX 3 years ago
Not bad at all. Good Krav Maga, just like Bourne =D
redsx824 3 years ago
Good use of Krav MAGA there. Not bad at all.
ASAMOAH24 3 years ago
2:53 great!
This scene is good. Of course they are amateur but what? Some of people writing bad things about it are really dumb themselves!
It's a great scene. Difficult to do I know. Great montage, great camera's moves - everything. Direction of all these mooves. Does anyone think about it before negative comment?
Bunchpoland 3 years ago
fuck you bitch ass ass hole he did not even die it so gay like you i will get someone to beat you up you fuck you dick face I'm nine years old brennan schmidt
numb1103 3 years ago
Uh, kid, this is a rated R movie. You have to be accompanied by a parent to get in. 9 year old's opinions don't matter.
Liptakular 3 years ago
yo sorry that was my lil brother
numb1103 3 years ago
GREAT sequence, I like it!
Bunchpoland 3 years ago
I love how people come to this video and expect Hollywood. Keep 'em coming anyway, good or bad.
Liptakular 3 years ago
Haha yeah they are probably annoyed because in Hollywood in a toilet fight all the tiles break on the walls and the punches sounds louder.
I think good effort on the fight and I think it worked realy well :D
JamieKearsey 3 years ago
Lol, no style at all, no reason for half the moves to work... pretty poor, bad angle changing too. But great for a homage I guess...
timiexperience 3 years ago
fuck off
fredomlette 3 years ago
need learn to fight guys... right now! take some lessons or go to the street and you will find out how to really fight
rufos9 3 years ago
wow, way to mess up the suits! was it worth it?
what martial arts/fighting styles did u train in b4 u made this?
5batspriwo 3 years ago
The Bollywood Ultimatum.
denbou78 3 years ago
No wonder nobody likes Germany...well bruv, I dunno about that, seen enough of punjabs in Berlin a few weeks back I thought there must be a fierce cricket match happening somewhere. But nice video though, no joke, keep at it.
SebastianEngland 3 years ago
Haha badest fight i have ever seen..
tordern22 3 years ago
lol funny
devil1983 3 years ago
Nothing wrong with the suit dude winning - he was the cooler guy with cooler moves. And the other dude produced a knife first.... Superbly choreographed scene - looking forward to seeing more.
ildamiano 3 years ago
the fight coreography is great. good job
backinblack222 3 years ago
Hey this was a fantastic fight scene really good job
MattRooney06 3 years ago
Is it fun to roll in a bathroom floor??
Halvil0 3 years ago
Yeah. But don't worry, we made sure to urinate everywhere before we even tried to film this. I mean, c'mon... Why the Hell would you want to film a fight scene unless you were drenched in piss?
Liptakular 3 years ago
man i liked this answer, very creative, no wonder why the video was good. keep it up
canis222 3 years ago
good job man :)
Tandaradei86 3 years ago
Thank you for the compliments, folks. To address some things:
No, I don't do requests, so I won't be doing James Bond vs. Jason Bourne. 5 new fights will be posted in December.
I won because I rule.
It was not meant to be perfect, just cheap and fast. I did the sound and stage direction myself. The execution is off because we filmed this in 4 hours with an actor who was untrained. Despite that, Rey was a total bad ass in this fight.
Keep the comments coming!
Liptakular 3 years ago
That was some good stuff.The stage direction could have been a little better,perhaps the execution too.The mood was there,great use of Kali/Krav maga style self defence manouvers.Could have used a decent sound technician,but you did all this without spending a penny?Good man,you have some great imagination and directorial vision goin buddy!
9075401b 3 years ago
Y does the Suited guy (Smith-like) Win????
Fawk that lol :P
Kwestdaroc4 3 years ago
ha this is funny!
FAMEHOUND 3 years ago
That was pretty cool. Please do James Bond vs. Jason Bourne.
thecanniblestyx 3 years ago
Wow that is really good!
Great edits and camera angles! I'm very impressed. I can see you going far in the field of film.
DrunkenBum0 3 years ago
good job
emstrippin 3 years ago