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From: MovieMarine94
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  • WHOAH WHOAH WHOAH! The Allies need to win! It should have been an ending where the German gets shot by reinforcements or a heroic ending like the guy winning the fight and shooting him with the pistol etc.

  • You made the number one error when it comes to military shorts. None of your characters behave anything like they would in real life. There's no fear, no desperation, and no sense of chaos. Why did the film open with a lone man? Why do your actors look calmly at a live grenade before fleeing only-somewhat quickly? Why does one man show no reaction to the death of a comrade and no reaction to ending a life? And the biggest thing... men DO NOT simply run through open fields!!!!!!!!!

  • those are medal of honor allied assault gun sounds :D

  • cool but looks a bit too comic like ^^ I hope you can improvve that

  • How Did You Make The Weapons

    I Mean, I know you made them out of wood but what are the steps

  • Wow, nice progress, very good entertainment value, especially for the price of admission.

    Seriously, this was cool, love the camera angles, and there's better music, script and directions to match the story compared to past releases. You created the mood well and kind of a surprise ending than the usual. Your blast and firing effects are clever.

    I look forward to seeing your progress and I feel confident they will continue to provide entertainment value to us.

  • with sony vegas when you get a muzzle flash add light rays to it and it makes it look alot more realistic but make sure you dont add it to the whole video, just the muzzle

  • Mate this is awesome, story, camera angles and editing is great. All you really need is a special effects programme and your sorting, by now you proberly have one :P Id recommend Adobe After Effects over Sony Vegas anyday though!

  • awesome!

    

  • great movie very profesional looking and check myn out i subscribe and added mabey u could sub back =D

  • at 0:45 when he shoots the german you should've had the sound and muzzle flash when he fired, then when you see the german get hit and die you should've had a bullet hit sound

  • @MovieNarine94 Detonation Films has free muzzle flashes that aren't just pictures. They look a little more realistic (thats what i use)

  • that is fantastic!!! :D:D:D You have really improved on these films :) I really don't want to advertise on such a great production in fear of spoiling it, But My friend and I are soon gonna start working on our own WW2 film, a long film, and basically, it will be our first film on our new channel, and I'd love to get feedback from you, here's the channel name if you'd like to take a look, MontreuxFilms Bare in mind that the film wont be out for a while yet though :) Thankyou :)

  • pretty good but could have used some better acting @ 0:52

  • cool grenade

  • you have a future in War Films, man

    great job!

  • ending from valkyrie i like it

  • Stepping in the puddle is was over used.

  • sweet

  • great vid

  • did u make this???

  • @baberaider18 of course i did! why would u say something like that???

  • @MovieMarine94 lol idk that wasnt me my cousin went on my account! but nice video 5/5

  • Very well done, one dialogue mistake though: BARs use magazines not clips. Not a huge deal and a very easy mistake to make. LIKE

  • Dude Great film. If you have sony vegas which I think you told me that you did a while back you should go onto google find a muzzle flash picture that has a black background then put it onto your editor and find sony croma keyer which will take the black away if you click on the droper think. And then you can blur the muzzle flashes and stuff like that.

  • @ArmenianLegion thanks! yeah i have sony vegas, thats what i did with those muzzle flashes but they seem too cartoon like. I'll try and imrove them, thanks for the tip!

  • @MovieMarine94 try lowering the opacity on the muzzle flash and than adding the glow effect to the muzzle flash it might help.

  • Very good. I liked the blood effects.And I am not trying to be mean, It's just constructive criticism, but I think the muzzle flashes need to be a little bit yellow and a bit more transparent and they would be perfect, and blood effects every time somebody dies would be a plus.I want to make war movies but lack the money.

    Well, keep making movies. A full-length film, where we get to meet the characters,would be great.

  • @runningbroproduction thanks! yeah i agree with you, the muzzle flashes look way too fake. thanks for the constructive criticism, it helps :)

  • Great Job!

  • @mastermike95 thank you :)

  • excellent job!

  • Well done, clearly a component of a longer film that draws us into the fight and forces us to care that these american losses were heroic.

    Please keep filming, you guys are amazing !!

  • @Motorman800 wow! thanks man! i didn't really think it was that good lol

  • where do you get those German helmets?? are they the real replicas?

  • @NicR94 i got em at an army navy store, there just replicas but there still made out of steel

  • @MovieMarine94 thats awsome? for how much?

  • @NicR94 £100

  • @MovieMarine94 jesus... thats about $70 or $80. yeah i have no more money lol

  • dang good

    make another one

  • I think it's quite good =)

    Keep it up!

  • @xxMyyxO thanks!

  • cool

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