nice autotune effect at the end of your verse...sounds like its the real song.
If this is a freeverse and you made this up on the spot, you are the best rapper in existence. If you wrote this in about a minute or two, you are still the best rapper. Nice job!
FLESH IMP LION CITY REPPPP. expand vocabulary, develop flow, change up the rhythm move faster and keep us guessing. give sg a notable musical act keep working and all that good shit. peaceandloveee
not all rap needs to be fast (ie drake, great rapper n he doesn't rap very fast) but honestly you are rapping a little slow, a little speed can really re-define the song, otherwise its really good
its iight... i think it would be better if it was a little faster. its like youre rappin in slow mo, and youre draggin out the words. its still hott though. trust, im not hatin lol, cuz i cant rap to save my life lol. i rap about dumb stuff. lol. but yea, speed up the tempo, i think it'll sound more decent
to be honsest i cant tell if it was good....i sound ignorant saying that but the lyrics were average i guess some punchlines were whack some were ok and ur flow sounded good but im kinda thinking its cuz the beat is fire....idk whatever
i search on: how to find shitty things like a fucking ipod nano
BECUASE I CANT FIND THE FUCKING THING!
grymmatarmar 1 year ago
what mic you use ?
memomemomemog 1 year ago
this is hot hat mic you use??
memomemomemog 1 year ago
nice autotune effect at the end of your verse...sounds like its the real song.
If this is a freeverse and you made this up on the spot, you are the best rapper in existence. If you wrote this in about a minute or two, you are still the best rapper. Nice job!
Blademuzic 1 year ago
Yeah man. You might want to try speeding up a little. Increase the tempo. But you're a work of art dude. Keep it up!
Burn2402 2 years ago
nicee :)
doriii08 2 years ago
hahaa...
uptown by drake's mixtape?
"it's okay"x6
"u can tell ur frens dat im on" x6
haha.. dope lyrics.:D
riohaikal 2 years ago
FLESH IMP LION CITY REPPPP. expand vocabulary, develop flow, change up the rhythm move faster and keep us guessing. give sg a notable musical act keep working and all that good shit. peaceandloveee
eeksan 2 years ago
not all rap needs to be fast (ie drake, great rapper n he doesn't rap very fast) but honestly you are rapping a little slow, a little speed can really re-define the song, otherwise its really good
EMSqueen88 2 years ago
Good Shit my nigga, Lovin' this joint. I'ma bout to post some new shit. Soo, Lookout.
Hectik718 2 years ago
its good,
needs to be a little faster though.
JVProductions06 2 years ago
The song is pretty rad but you yourself could definately use some more swag dude.
megathugmaster3000 2 years ago 3
Woah! Its good! 5 stars xD
SupaMunkie 2 years ago
Cool! Gave you 5 stars on this!
thetrickchick 2 years ago
it's ight, needs to be faster like everyone said.
p00n3dy0urnutz 2 years ago
yea if it wuz fasta it wud b better but itz gud man.
SupaHBac 2 years ago
its iight... i think it would be better if it was a little faster. its like youre rappin in slow mo, and youre draggin out the words. its still hott though. trust, im not hatin lol, cuz i cant rap to save my life lol. i rap about dumb stuff. lol. but yea, speed up the tempo, i think it'll sound more decent
MissDiara93 2 years ago
ayy dhat ShXx iZz t0ugh i Cee yhu boii
sub6005 2 years ago
good shxt ^-^ 5*
xoxlilxoxAnyaxox 2 years ago
Not bad, not bad.
Sangfroidation 2 years ago
to be honsest i cant tell if it was good....i sound ignorant saying that but the lyrics were average i guess some punchlines were whack some were ok and ur flow sounded good but im kinda thinking its cuz the beat is fire....idk whatever
MrCrcket 2 years ago
good.
allah12311 2 years ago
Ketchup like tomatoes was lame...lol....But Yo this was a hot remix man...you good 4real..
ZanyDaChico 2 years ago 2
cool mane 5 STARS ...stay up
hollowbones13 2 years ago
tht was totally sickk dude....
keep it upp cuz thiz iz my kinda musicc
Crazy2TheeMax 2 years ago
that was really good.like seriously.
pinkatizee 2 years ago
lilmoe365 you should shut up lil bitch no one were talking to you
darkstar8260 2 years ago 2
D@T WUz GooD N i dONt s@Y d@T aLOt
MzBunny98 2 years ago 2
its pretty good :)
sk8rcandi15 2 years ago
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darkstar8260 2 years ago
your pretty stupid to say that
lilmoe365 2 years ago
nobody is better than lilwayne
sk8rcandi15 2 years ago 2
your good kepp writing
HOTTOPIC32 2 years ago 2
R.E.S.P.E.C.T and lot of peace for all the hommies.
matsurispring 2 years ago 3
dat was pretty good...call me NORTH KOREA!!! lol nice
bigballa22100 2 years ago 2
you good keep it up
tyrell425325 2 years ago 6
dham this is gud.....
tenzin200 2 years ago 2
good shit yo, for real
i got some beats you should check em out if you get a chance sometime
peace man
PsychoLogical101 2 years ago 3
nice!
owlwink 2 years ago 2
pretty gewd
ladyxnyce 2 years ago 3
I likey a lotttt ! Lmao
xSimplyxAsian 2 years ago 3
yur fuckin hella good shigga shay
keep going man!
SakunBby 2 years ago 2
damn shit u good
i was suprised
Magz303 2 years ago 2
damn you nice lil dude
BHDFRGRHRF 2 years ago 2
Your Like Hella Hot(:
And Super Good!!<3
BL0NDIESK8ECHIK 2 years ago
omg you are superr awesome !
i love you!:DD
NurFarahin183 2 years ago
going on my itouch.
KoolFlow99 2 years ago 2
Bwhaha, Korea! FTW x]
ballintha808 2 years ago 3
u got some clean ass lyricsss!
raiderraider84 2 years ago 5
Thanks man! :)
ShiGGaShay 2 years ago
iloveyou<3
Sarahhww 2 years ago 4
its ok
Simbuilder5 2 years ago 5
awesome 5 stars
OigenKGB 2 years ago 6
yay! something new to listen to while traveling around :) 5 stars
stephenshuai 2 years ago 5
Dude .. your going places. ;)
Enjoy your fame.
Dr3v0 2 years ago 3
Thanks alot bro!
But I'm not famous though (:
ShiGGaShay 2 years ago
Dude chase the dream , you will eventually catch it.
I'm sure of it (:
Dr3v0 2 years ago 5
cool...
fujisakura8906 2 years ago 3
yeah man cool sup shigga shay whats up
terickfic 2 years ago 2
SICK!
"Lil rappers needa ketchup like tomatoes"
U're Crazy man. Big Ups!
MadJokerA 2 years ago
Thank you my man! :)
ShiGGaShay 2 years ago
siickkk (:
WeezahLisaa 2 years ago 2
lololo nice
Draytonvalley 2 years ago
I love the beat you rapped on!! Hot rap!! I love the ending!!
LeslieMoniqueTV 2 years ago
'Causing waves on the internet like a fuckin perm..'
genius. something a chick can totally relate to!!! hahaha! keep it coming, you. (:
jannahnurul 2 years ago
Hahah, thanks jannah! I'm glad you can relate to it =]
ShiGGaShay 2 years ago
YOU'RE AWESOME. 5 stars no doubt.
ETSandKYLA 2 years ago 3
I LIKE THE LAST PART MAN. HAHHAHAHA! JS
janeeljw 2 years ago 3
YOU THE BEST!
mistahell101 2 years ago
Shigga shay u ROCK!
DarylLaiTV 2 years ago 2
Lol Daryl....
Anyway nice 1 shigga shay... XD
IvAn4eVa 2 years ago