For your very first performance I´d say it was okay. But I had the feeling that a lot of this stuff was too unrealistic to be true and funny, a little truth (for instance working with stereotypes) is the essence of comedy in my opinion. And you´re too good looking to be a comedian (It´s not supposed to be a compliment). If you look at most of the successfull comedians, they´re either funny, but still attractive looking, or just very "ordinary" or unattractive, but of course, win us with charme.
Yeah, I think it was good. The material's ok, just the delivery needs some work - better pacing etc. but I bet that was because you were nervous anyway, so overall; Very good job :)
don't smile and laugh at your own jokes so much, and speed up delivery for jokes that have foreshadowing...don't slow it down. i.e. "he pops the question..."
Overall not bad for a first time. The eating a condom part of your joke was awkward though. I think you could make it funnier. Also, wear more low cut shirts. Sex sells ;-)
that was funny, wow -- really your first performance. i am "just barely" thinking about trying stand up. what if you would have worked the gestures for the butt massage a bit more? sick funny story though. ugh. no comment on the fellah.
Hey Yasmin...just wanted to say you did an excellent job for your first standup !! I was dying about that anal expression part...because my wife and I recently had to learn about that as well. Keep up the good work!! Have a pleasant day..Kev/lastshadowband Indianapolis.
dirty jokes can be good and most of this hit the mark. I'd work on your close. although it paid off with the crowd, I'm not sure leaving the story hanging will work very often. Of course that could have been a red light wrap up, and if so, that was pretty solid.
Nice job Yasmin! I’ve been doing stand up for 6 months now. It’s a lot of fun! You did great for your first time. Where did you perform this? New York? Did you take a stand up comedy class? As far as I know you are the first former Playboy model also doing stand up. You’ve created a niche for yourself. I hope to see more stand up videos in the future! Keep up the good work! :-)
Great job for a first stand up. I would have frozen solid. Used the fun-sacs to great effecf. Best line: on dating plastic surgeons: "I've finally found a man who loves me for what I can BECOME!" Keep pluggin' Don
For your very first performance I´d say it was okay. But I had the feeling that a lot of this stuff was too unrealistic to be true and funny, a little truth (for instance working with stereotypes) is the essence of comedy in my opinion. And you´re too good looking to be a comedian (It´s not supposed to be a compliment). If you look at most of the successfull comedians, they´re either funny, but still attractive looking, or just very "ordinary" or unattractive, but of course, win us with charme.
SirLunchAL0t 5 days ago
Yeah, I think it was good. The material's ok, just the delivery needs some work - better pacing etc. but I bet that was because you were nervous anyway, so overall; Very good job :)
sarkasmi83 6 days ago
don't smile and laugh at your own jokes so much, and speed up delivery for jokes that have foreshadowing...don't slow it down. i.e. "he pops the question..."
imnotdavidxnsx 1 week ago
"pretty attractive women thinking they're funny."
imnotdavidxnsx 1 week ago
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crikey! she is a little piece of eye candy!
thebull444 2 weeks ago
wow, she is a little piece of eye candy!
thebull444 2 weeks ago
This was very funny, cute and I wish you good luck in your future tries!
bsgtrekfan88 2 weeks ago
Overall not bad for a first time. The eating a condom part of your joke was awkward though. I think you could make it funnier. Also, wear more low cut shirts. Sex sells ;-)
Fibonacci2nthpower 2 weeks ago
whoa.... wtf. awesome!! lol LMFAO!
GO GIRL!
Metalmama1213 3 weeks ago
They don't make boobs big enough to make this at all funny.
jerseytarzan2 4 weeks ago
Christ loves all
psimon12345 1 month ago
was the title supposed to say, pretty woman is not funny?
kearney1234 1 month ago
More cleavage and perhaps they will like you more darling!
cozener1 1 month ago
that was funny, wow -- really your first performance. i am "just barely" thinking about trying stand up. what if you would have worked the gestures for the butt massage a bit more? sick funny story though. ugh. no comment on the fellah.
dainismichel 1 month ago
i like small titties.
Niggs3000 1 month ago
Hey Yasmin...just wanted to say you did an excellent job for your first standup !! I was dying about that anal expression part...because my wife and I recently had to learn about that as well. Keep up the good work!! Have a pleasant day..Kev/lastshadowband Indianapolis.
LastShadowBand 2 months ago
good show less cleave.
dawud728 2 months ago
dirty jokes can be good and most of this hit the mark. I'd work on your close. although it paid off with the crowd, I'm not sure leaving the story hanging will work very often. Of course that could have been a red light wrap up, and if so, that was pretty solid.
halcyonyear 2 months ago in playlist Favorite videos
Nice job Yasmin! I’ve been doing stand up for 6 months now. It’s a lot of fun! You did great for your first time. Where did you perform this? New York? Did you take a stand up comedy class? As far as I know you are the first former Playboy model also doing stand up. You’ve created a niche for yourself. I hope to see more stand up videos in the future! Keep up the good work! :-)
PeruvianPianist 3 months ago in playlist Stand-Up Comedy
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pretty funny good luck
TheGMAT16 3 months ago
U r so dirty
XxCnGamingxX 4 months ago
lies, this was not your first time!! but funny stuff, thank god u didnt go straight to all sexual jokes
MakefunNotwar 4 months ago
Haha! Very good, I've recently started doing stand up (though British comedy is a tad different to the American humour). Thoroughly enjoyed it. :)
EREproductions 4 months ago
"I learned my lesson, I don't use protection" AWESOME!!
MrAtmea 5 months ago
Thank you! I was nervous so I was talking way too fast!
JustJazzy3 5 months ago
@JustJazzy3 I really respect this.
PrivateAckbar 2 months ago
Awesome YY! Wish I had been there. You'd have me rolling in the aisle! :D
tdesiato1 5 months ago
Great job for a first stand up. I would have frozen solid. Used the fun-sacs to great effecf. Best line: on dating plastic surgeons: "I've finally found a man who loves me for what I can BECOME!" Keep pluggin' Don
polybi5 5 months ago
Nice=)
donsparc 5 months ago
Yasmin, you were awesome! :D :D :D
merovingianchaos 5 months ago