@RockLeechatroomxBlaz haha thanks, it's about him getting back in the team and it's about him trying to find out what happened to his missing girlfriend.
very nice animations, btw, only gripe with it is some of the subtitles you put on the episode, some cannot be seen so well, I also work with Sony Vegas and I would advice you to put another color for the outside of the letter so it can be more noticable and a tiny bit bigger, I'll be watching your other stuff soon and see how it goes. Nice work man :)
:O For some reason I didn't know you uploaded this until now! Ahh, apologies for the delay in watching =P This was really awesome! Really kept my attention the entire time. The screenplay is very well done, congrats! Now I'm gonna go watch episode 2 :D
Nice. Your improvement is obvious, this game out pretty good. Too short though, that's my only real complaint. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
@nikedrummer33 Thanks man, glad you see it. It'll take me months to complete a full 30 minutes. lol. Animation is tough lol. I pretty sure you know about that. I'm liking your "Shattered Heaven" cartoon too. sick man. and I plan on taking this far my friend.
in nice though a bit short but something about the sound sometimes the sound of music is higher thn he people who r talking so just adjust the sound so the music doenst over power actors voices
@MysticStarChannel I'm not the best at messing with sounds and voices. lol. so yeah I know i have many flaws with that. but my main focus is animation and art.
@coolitstony Thanks and I agree. Quality > quantity. I've improved from BeastHeart, to my character Nexus in the group project Untold Dreams, to doing this. So I guess I gets better as time goes by. lol
this turned out better than i expected. The animation and art style are getting better. The plot is something to look forward to. Can't wait for the next episode. Good job!
@enocaw2 I'm trying to make my animations look like my pencil and paper work (which is way better). So i add details here and there to try that. If you're a fan of plots, than i think this might be a great story for you. :D hopefully.
Awesome! You can totally see all the effort you put in this! It's amazing! The animation is great, detailed backgrounds, voices could use a little work, but It was great! Wish it would be a little longer!
@innersakurawithin Thanks, yeah we're not the best when it comes to voices but we try to get the job done. but I put a lot of time and effort into this. In my opinion quality is better than quantity. Also, Animation is time consuming. It takes a long time to create something small.
Nice! You drew the barkeeper fantastically. Your character designs are getting more complex and interesting, too. Be careful with grammar, though. "How have the bar been" should be "How has the bar been?" The animation where Alvin flips over the thug was VERY nicely done. I'm excited for episode 2 :D
@MisdermeanerJ -I've been working on my character designs... I'm glad you noticed my minor detail. :)
Glad you liked the way Alvin flipped that guy. lol
And about the grammar, I always seem to notice my small mistakes after I render the video and upload it. But it's alright I guess, nothing too major. Thanks again!
X) u can already tell his a bad ass h'm is this about him getting back in the team or is there a bigger picture
RockLeechatroomxBlaz 2 weeks ago
@RockLeechatroomxBlaz haha thanks, it's about him getting back in the team and it's about him trying to find out what happened to his missing girlfriend.
UntoldDreamsAnime 2 weeks ago
very nice animations, btw, only gripe with it is some of the subtitles you put on the episode, some cannot be seen so well, I also work with Sony Vegas and I would advice you to put another color for the outside of the letter so it can be more noticable and a tiny bit bigger, I'll be watching your other stuff soon and see how it goes. Nice work man :)
AlbotoAbeko 1 month ago
@AlbotoAbeko Yeah I might have to put a black shadow around to subtitles. I might have done that already in my other episodes.
but thanks for the support, really hope you enjoy my other work :D
-Elijah
UntoldDreamsAnime 1 month ago
Sadlly animating isn't my life but I try hard to put detail and movement into it.......
ActionGirlist 4 months ago
@ActionGirlist I understand, as long as you try. that's the important part.
UntoldDreamsAnime 4 months ago
:O For some reason I didn't know you uploaded this until now! Ahh, apologies for the delay in watching =P This was really awesome! Really kept my attention the entire time. The screenplay is very well done, congrats! Now I'm gonna go watch episode 2 :D
PowersWithin 6 months ago
for an original series on youtube...VERY well done! I can honestly say I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes. great work..
KowisAnimation 6 months ago
@KowisAnimation Thanks man, I will be uploading Episode 2 today or tomorrow. :D
UntoldDreamsAnime 6 months ago
Very Nice ! You should check out my animations !
Simstyle12 7 months ago
@Simstyle12 Thank you, I'll check them out! :P
UntoldDreamsAnime 4 months ago
I kinda like it, very sweet and I like the character design!
I'll defenitely watch out for your future animations! :)
XxMusicThoughtsxX 7 months ago
@XxMusicThoughtsxX Thanks alout, I have episode 2 & 3 up now. You should watch them if you enjoyed this. :D
UntoldDreamsAnime 4 months ago
wow this is really good^^<--still don't know why you subscribe to me also the boss sounds like Mr.T
1kokokala10 8 months ago
@1kokokala10 I had to suscribed to you "fool". lol Kingpin does sound like Mr.T
UntoldDreamsAnime 4 months ago
cool cant wait for part 2 : D
MegaKentaman 8 months ago
@MegaKentaman It'll be out :D. just got to give me a little time.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
This badAzz man good job on how it started.. I cant wait to see more
DevNerdyWordymiddy 8 months ago
@DevNerdyWordymiddy Thanks alot man haha... Glad you liked it.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
Nice. Your improvement is obvious, this game out pretty good. Too short though, that's my only real complaint. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
nikedrummer33 8 months ago
@nikedrummer33 Thanks man, glad you see it. It'll take me months to complete a full 30 minutes. lol. Animation is tough lol. I pretty sure you know about that. I'm liking your "Shattered Heaven" cartoon too. sick man. and I plan on taking this far my friend.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
Wow nice,
check out some of my animations
daballa0001 8 months ago
@daballa0001 Thanks, I'll check. you out.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
@AlexGoodwinmusic Thanks man, I'm glad you notice the little things I threw in there to give it that 'real' feeling.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
in nice though a bit short but something about the sound sometimes the sound of music is higher thn he people who r talking so just adjust the sound so the music doenst over power actors voices
MysticStarChannel 8 months ago
@MysticStarChannel I'm not the best at messing with sounds and voices. lol. so yeah I know i have many flaws with that. but my main focus is animation and art.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
that was alright dude, your art has improved since beast heart, just remmeber take your time and quality > quantity. goodwork!
coolitstony 8 months ago
@coolitstony Thanks and I agree. Quality > quantity. I've improved from BeastHeart, to my character Nexus in the group project Untold Dreams, to doing this. So I guess I gets better as time goes by. lol
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
this turned out better than i expected. The animation and art style are getting better. The plot is something to look forward to. Can't wait for the next episode. Good job!
enocaw2 8 months ago
@enocaw2 I'm trying to make my animations look like my pencil and paper work (which is way better). So i add details here and there to try that. If you're a fan of plots, than i think this might be a great story for you. :D hopefully.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
Awesome! You can totally see all the effort you put in this! It's amazing! The animation is great, detailed backgrounds, voices could use a little work, but It was great! Wish it would be a little longer!
innersakurawithin 8 months ago
@innersakurawithin Thanks, yeah we're not the best when it comes to voices but we try to get the job done. but I put a lot of time and effort into this. In my opinion quality is better than quantity. Also, Animation is time consuming. It takes a long time to create something small.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
@UntoldDreamsAnime I agree, Quality is much better than quantity. You did great!
innersakurawithin 8 months ago
is ok so keep working on it.
KyutiHuni 8 months ago
@KyutiHuni Trust me, I will
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
Wow.. Awesome o.o i love it!!
PxManga 8 months ago
@PxManga Thanks my friend. I hope you enjoy what I have coming up. :D
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
Nice! You drew the barkeeper fantastically. Your character designs are getting more complex and interesting, too. Be careful with grammar, though. "How have the bar been" should be "How has the bar been?" The animation where Alvin flips over the thug was VERY nicely done. I'm excited for episode 2 :D
MisdermeanerJ 8 months ago
@MisdermeanerJ -I've been working on my character designs... I'm glad you noticed my minor detail. :)
Glad you liked the way Alvin flipped that guy. lol
And about the grammar, I always seem to notice my small mistakes after I render the video and upload it. But it's alright I guess, nothing too major. Thanks again!
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
lol..drinks on him
setokabia 8 months ago
@setokabia -haha lol... yup
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
this was awesome can't for the next episode
sdot210 8 months ago
@sdot210 -Glad you like it... The next episode will be better.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
That was really awesome. :P You did a good job.
PilotObvious 8 months ago
@PilotObvious -Thanks a lot, I really tried. :D
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
I love it <3 it makes me want to know what's going to happen the next episode :DD
1Megabirds 8 months ago
@1Megabirds -Thanks!! The next episode is one of my personal favorites. I love every moment of it, and I really hope you will like it also.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago
Awesome! I love the new ending! :D
TheEmoHamster 8 months ago
@TheEmoHamster -Thank you, I worked on it a little bit. Mostly focusing on transparencies.
UntoldDreamsAnime 8 months ago