Good video. You have to be careful with vertically orineted text, the one bit where there was a vertical word with an end piece of another that was a larger size messed with the shot, it threw me off a bit. Stylistically too, you need to choose it and lock it down(The Smiley!). Without a stylistic direction, the video is a bit lost.. And font is always a big part, you should play with layers and glows a bit.
@aarontrack4u love your critiques, and that jerry maguire vid was legit. good to note that i did this entire thing in final cut for a final that was due the next morning, ha.
Good video. You have to be careful with vertically orineted text, the one bit where there was a vertical word with an end piece of another that was a larger size messed with the shot, it threw me off a bit. Stylistically too, you need to choose it and lock it down(The Smiley!). Without a stylistic direction, the video is a bit lost.. And font is always a big part, you should play with layers and glows a bit.
This is a great example:
watch?v=Xrjb0MHNH1c
aarontrack4u 6 months ago
@aarontrack4u love your critiques, and that jerry maguire vid was legit. good to note that i did this entire thing in final cut for a final that was due the next morning, ha.
phishing4cheese 6 months ago
First comment :-). I liked this xD
brianstorm0 10 months ago