Afraid to be Alone (poem)

[murveu1]

you shud work at hot topic

[omgwtfnewb]

I find it both sad and interesting how many idiots on the internet think your awful poetry is really good.

[josparkes]

Very talented poet.

I like to write too.

Jo Sparkes

Norfolk

[nitehawk57]

GREAT POEM!!! and read so perfectly!!! My voice sounds so weird when I read my poems. Rating you with five stars. Also, your picture goes perfectly with it. Adding to my poetry playlist.

[arti1974]

All your poems are so beautiful . Please post more. I will be waiting and thanks for sharing. You are very talented girl. Keep it up!!!! Take care..

[DukeRightious]

I really got into this!

[missmalevolent]

That poem was so beautiful to me!

[fourtwenty420]

Thank you! I am truly glad you enjoyed it. =)

[josparkes]

Just read your poem, great stuff indeed !

It takes words and thoughts to make a whole

And surge forth through to touch the soul.

I like to write, but I've never read one out, yours was very well done, and was very atmospheric !

Jo Sparkes

Norfolk

29/10/2008

[Redfrettchen]

This one's my favorite. The cyclic structure, the increase of speed, the created tension, and then the sudden stop, it's really perfect. One loses the breath, forgets each line when the next one arrives, feeling like only one second passes by in slow motion.

[fourtwenty420]

Wow. Thank you for your extremely kind words! Such nice comments.. you make me smile. I am so glad that you liked my poem. =)

[lisasimpson]

I like your manner of speaking, it suits poetry reading very well!

[fourtwenty420]

Thanks. I actually wasn't sure how it would turn out on the recording.. I am much better at reading my poems to an audience I can see and interact with. =)

[iamnotapoet]

Wonderful poem.... and great visuals to boot. Keep posting them.

--- Eric ZORK Alan [ National Slam Poet ]

[fourtwenty420]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I am working on another couple of my poems, so hopefully I will be able to post them soon.  =)

[iamnotapoet]

Looking forward to them. And make sure you check out the National Poetry Slam in Austin in August if you are around there. It will be a poetic blast.

-- Eric ZORK Alan [ National Slam Poet ]

[theIronVox]

I am all alone, reading this poem. Is that poetic or coincidence? Great poem. =)

[fourtwenty420]

Hmm that is a tough one...  Well, thanks I am glad you liked it! =)

[cheeseandbread]

yay you finally have a video!! can't wait to see your beautiful face!

[fourtwenty420]

Well thanks for watching my "video". I still don't know when I will have a camera though.. =)

[AericWinter]

Powerful and beautiful in a helpless kind of way. I liked the final image. It would have been nice to have a hard copy of the poem as well, because poems are meant to be read along as well as aloud. 5 *

[fourtwenty420]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I was thinking about adding the words in the discription, maybe now I will. =)

[AericWinter]

Well done, 420. (=

[TransplantedAussie]

Awesomely beautiful!! Thanks!

[fourtwenty420]

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it. =)

[TransplantedAussie]

I didn't just like it cutie, I LOVED it!! :-)