Yo, you got some dope lyrics! But what I'm about to tell you is not to discourage you and it's definitely not me tryna diss you, I'm tellin you this cuz you've got potential and I can definitely see and hear it. You have to learn how to stay on beat when you're rhyming cuz most of your songs/verses have the BEST lyrics, but you're off beat and/or the line isn't flowing with the music. I promise you if you work on that, you'll go even farther. Just wanted to let you know.
@Onenyce thanks snow, preciate the comment and the feedback! I'm always trynna improve myself as a rapper, so I'll take your comment and work on my flow! I try out different flows, and I know yall might not hear that :P haha, but preciate the honesty, and that did not discourage me at all. In fact, it just motivated me to better my flow!
you got to sort out your sound no offence it dont sound good cuz it sound like you tryin to smash all the words at one time im not gonna lie and tell yo it sound good cuz it dont . and stop sayin swagg. NoOb :P
du kunne ha spart deg for "Swag" delen as :P
schwæg! schwæg! schwæg!
lilermi 4 months ago
dope as hell i love it :)
ollienolliegirl 5 months ago
Bra lil bro:) begynner å ta av nå^^
slimmoma 5 months ago
heftig vid ;)
MKOBrotherhoodPS3 6 months ago
Yo good tune there man!! Hey can I ask ya a question. Do you live in currin termon and is Ryan Bradley Your cuz,,
andypandx21 6 months ago
@andypandx21 eh no? I live in Norway and who the heck is Ryan Bradley??
yallknownasuth 6 months ago
nice bro #Swag
MCRanMusic 7 months ago
Yo, you got some dope lyrics! But what I'm about to tell you is not to discourage you and it's definitely not me tryna diss you, I'm tellin you this cuz you've got potential and I can definitely see and hear it. You have to learn how to stay on beat when you're rhyming cuz most of your songs/verses have the BEST lyrics, but you're off beat and/or the line isn't flowing with the music. I promise you if you work on that, you'll go even farther. Just wanted to let you know.
Onenyce 7 months ago
@Onenyce thanks snow, preciate the comment and the feedback! I'm always trynna improve myself as a rapper, so I'll take your comment and work on my flow! I try out different flows, and I know yall might not hear that :P haha, but preciate the honesty, and that did not discourage me at all. In fact, it just motivated me to better my flow!
thanks again snow!
yallknownasuth 7 months ago
you've got wayyy better since your first vid bro :D
ThePIcKleee 7 months ago
@ThePIcKleee thanks bro! preciate that! share the video if you really really liked it! :)
yallknownasuth 7 months ago
Great Job Termon x
saweraelskersundus 7 months ago
you got to sort out your sound no offence it dont sound good cuz it sound like you tryin to smash all the words at one time im not gonna lie and tell yo it sound good cuz it dont . and stop sayin swagg. NoOb :P
TheKidTricks1 7 months ago
@TheKidTricks1 haha, thanks for being honest atleast. and I only said swagg as a joke, dont take that shit seriously
yallknownasuth 7 months ago
@yallknownasuth Ya keep doin yo thing thow check out @BruceLamagne1ne 's channel
TheKidTricks1 6 months ago
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TheKidTricks1 6 months ago
dude your pro. def got swag ;) keep it up. i <3 your vids ! :)
SuperLiyaD 7 months ago
@SuperLiyaD thank you :)
yallknownasuth 7 months ago
Nice! :]
FLAgbg 7 months ago
#leggo
CAMCOOZERECORDS 7 months ago