Micah B No Tomorrow Remix Contest Entry MoonSoonMenu

[BagonafStudios]

This was good although there are a few things which I would like to point out, if that's alright. Some of the words were mumbled so you need to work a bit on your articulation and make sure that every syllable is coming out nice and clear. Also, your voice was ever so slightly weak. Project a little bit more. Other than that, great job. :D Keep up the good work.

[moonsoonmenu]

@BagonafStudios Thanks, appreciate the feedback, I'll surely work on these things.

[PsionicStavros]

Not bad at all man, tryna get your projection a bit better

check mine if you have a sec

[moonsoonmenu]

@PsionicStavros Thanks :D posted my feedback.

[nastyboyzey]

hey homie thanx fpr stopping by my vid so of course I had to come thru! ...I would just suggest u practice the fast rap a little more before u post ur final entry for next time because evn with the lyrics its hard to unserstand but besides that one detail u had many high points n u rhymes r good! Keep pushing it homie n I hope to see u in other contest!

[moonsoonmenu]

@nastyboyzey Much appreciated bro, you see another contest tell me and I'll do the same.

[grexyMusic]

nice :)

check mine out

[nuEraProtaj831]

nicee man checkz miines out!!

[moonsoonmenu]

@nuEraProtaj831 thanks man

[comedicmusician]

Your rhymes and flow are pretty nice but one suggestion is you gotta learn to articulate your words more when you speed it up like that. Good shit though.

[moonsoonmenu]

@comedicmusician yea thanks man, since I decided to do it all in one take breath control was something I had to develop and am still developing, without that I couldn't say the words as easily or as you put articulately. I can easily spit any other verse in this contest though...so you know ; )...also I think the vocals need to be turned up a little bit and equalized, but I'm still learning production.

[comedicmusician]

@moonsoonmenu Yeah I feel you man, it takes time to learn all the in and outs of it