Kindness of others short film full version 10 minutes

[Zegorn]

I am not sure if it was intended by the editor, however, I personally feel as though this entire video could have looked much better with color correction and crushing the blacks.

Not focusing on that, I enjoyed it!

[jonvideo]

Good tip, Perhaps I will back and do that. Thanks for the tip.

[NSUHBCU]

Thank you ........

[SylverBac]

Absolutely Out Standing...Great Concept and Fascinating Delivery... Our World would

be a Wonderful Place If her mind set caught on...Thank You... :)(:

[jonvideo]

I just saw your post, Thanks so much for the nice words.

[jmikejapan]

Nicely done!

I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Keep me posted!

[faunt1000]

NICE WORK BRO! Great message,bring back messages not hollywood effects. great job!

[codemonkeybrains]

Great job! And I hope all is well with your health.  Some of it's pretty funny, and the two black dudes and Master Yondi are awesome. May I ask why you went with the cam mic instead of the shotty, since you had one?

[jonvideo]

Thanks for the nice words. I wanted to be able to show people that a movie can be made, with just a camcorder and without extra gear. Mics, lights reflectors. Looking back I should have used a shotgun mic throughout. But I was curious if I could do it too. I will tell the guys you enjoyed their work. I see them every few days still since they live or work closeby - Thanks again - John

[codemonkeybrains]

@jonvideo NP. Keep doin' it and don't let the haters keep you down. PEACE.

[eventlessspy]

yeah ive seen it. Its nice that u r sharing your knowledge with us.

[eventlessspy]

One day in slum was shot in poor quality old sony handycam . and it is my first film. but its not all about camera qualities . its how much story u conveyed and how it struck the audience. how audience felt. thats the base. camera qualities and effects are second. i learned that from film makers. u have gr8 skills than me. but these are the things that i noticed that i think i should tell u.

[eventlessspy]

See im not discouraging you. U have skills . But the movie could have been directed a lot better. Not cinematography. Direction. and also Acting of that old guy is very poor. He has a serious role in this film.

[jonvideo]

I did not get actors, I got friends of mine. As a director I got more out of these non professionals than anyone could have. Were your guys actors, they did a good job. More than a few people have commented that The old guy was their favorite character. Have you seen our 61 techniques video make from this type in 61 moviemaking techniques on youtube and let meknow wht you think.

[eventlessspy]

movie sucks

[jonvideo]

Yes, for some people it does, I would put you in that catagory and I respect your opinion. I am doing another movie in the next year and would love your opinion on what improvements on my new movie I should make. I  am always into new ideas. Thanks in advance for your feedback - John.

[jonvideo]

I think people should check out your film "One day in the slum" On your channel.  That is a good short film. I am always looking for other filmmakers that can help our productions out. Keep up the great work. Any ideas you have for us are welcome.

[MissJemimaPuddleduck]

Just when I was thinking of becoming a hobo. :D

[MissJemimaPuddleduck]

XD



[andr0ll]

we alll live in a yellow submarine!!!

[uppuluribharath]

ah , did you use any extra instruments like mike to get voice recorded ?

[jonvideo]

Only on Master Yondi, he was very quite so I used an off camera shotgun mic pointed at him. The other dialog was all with the on camera mic. Using a wide angle lens allowed us to get closer and this way the mic was closer too.

[superrobotmunkyman]

fuck that i lived in a car for a year ..give me the fuckn cash

[edgatoron]

best part: Regie.

[jonvideo]

He adds so much to the movie, and he is the real deal, Every in town loves him. Sweet guy.

[MRLawDC]

I watch lots of short films and I have to say that I think this guy has potential, because he does the most important thing; tells a good story. With the advent of all these inexpensive cameras, that produce such beautiful images, there are tons of crappy short films. A real filmmaker tells a story that makes you think, and better yet feel something. As a fellow filmmaker I would just like to say GOOD WORK to all the cast and crew members!

[jonvideo]

Wow that is a great comment. Thanks so much. Can I see on of your films? Sounds like you do a nice job too. - John

[Ahmadmgdy]

Mr Yondi, or the main actor said some words which are really wise. I am amazed by how much these words affected me. Other than this, the shots are great, some techniques I will consider using in my new vids. I loved the transition techniques when she had the paper in hand and the next scene is Mr Yondi. I loved how inspiring this video is. Thanks a lot. Ahmad

[jonvideo]

Thanks so much Ahmad, Id love to see some of your films sometime too, - John

[fartboy2411]

Wise words Master Yondi

[jonvideo]

Thanks, Ill tell the actor,  Jim, who wrote them and lives by them.

[haz4510]

Not bad but the shots are not aesthetically pleasing to look at.

[jonvideo]

I looked at your channel & saw your videos "A life in the Day" and the go cart movie , and I must admit your shots are aesthetically pleasing. You have a good eye. I too used the same shots you did. I used the action toward the camera shot. The horizon shot, The low angle shot, The action moving out of the frame shot, the multi layer focus shot and more. See my 61 techniques video that is basiclaly a directors cut of the movie. In 1996 and 98 I produced two videos called(see next post)

[jonvideo]

Advanced Camera Broadcast techniques vol. one and two , that were two videos that covered over 100 of the most popular shots in famous moives, Speilburg , Hitchcock, Zemicks etc. I compiled these shots in over 160 minutes on the training videos. They are still for sale at elitevideo website over 5000 sold. These are some of the shots I used in Kindness of Others. I am always open to new shots if you have some ideas, please share them, I love to learn new stuff. Specifics welcome.

[hristijank2]

more effects like fade in and smoove movements cluld make it more professional movie, anyway i love it :D

[jonvideo]

I could have used some fade ins im sure, I did not want to do too many movements of the camera because I wanted to get a "documentary feel" even though I have a steadicam. I also wanted to limit my tripod shooting to prove I could do a short film run and gun style- mostly with on camera mic and handheld.

[TazakaLOL]

@jonvideo So whats the song at 3:05

[akazombie]

Haha... "Hand me that flat-head... no.., the screw driver." Ahhh... the little things.

[jonvideo]

Glad you noticed that, It is the little sbutle things that revel the situation and characters that make a movie.

[kelirecords]

It sounds like Ghanian Jazz, I guess.

[jonvideo]

Some people have asked about the song at the 3 minute mark. It is a public domain recording from the 1930s that the BBC library has. Its been over a year since I made the movie, so let me go back and find it and I will post the name here in the next week or so. I really enjoy it.

[joshuavarnedore]

<3

[van1994]

what did you use for recording sound? an external mic, the camera's mic or did you use dubbing?

[BrettHartel]

@jonvideo I dont understand why you would go for an amateur angle? Isn't the whole point of a passion to better yourself at what you do for your own personal growth.

[jonvideo]

Good question- I have been dong seminars since 1991, and always

at the post seminar Q and A session, the focus goes to

gear. Many times, I tell them that its not about the gear and what they are

wanting can be done with what they have, and they look at me like

"easy for your to say, you have the good gear". So I wanted to

prove to all(and me) , that what I was saying was true. And now I

can show them too. Then I can get their minds back on what counts

most. Story, framing etc.

[BrettHartel]

@jonvideo I see. That makes a lot more sense. This is the first video I have seen of yours and I watched a few others. The one you did about making a background with the cardboard, paint, and shower curtain was just exceptional! I bought a Canon XH A1s and have been learning to use it (slowly, as its a hobby I just started) and you have tons of great ideas. You should be very proud of your work. Not only are you talented in your whole processes but you have helped me also.

[Born2BeYourBaby]

I really liked this short. I have seen some awful attempts and even a fancy cam and lighting Cannes winner which in my view sucked! Made no sense and I didn't care much to interpret its hidden modernist symbolism. This is interesting all the way through, you wanna see what will happen next and the main actress is good. Nicely done, nice little message. Good stuff.

[bjarni1995]

somewhat like Minecraft :D

[jonvideo]

In what way? I'm curious.

[bjarni1995]

@jonvideo if you know minecraft the game. you are left alone with only your clothes and you have to survive the night ;)

[lawrencefollower]

What makes this video come across an amateur is the sound quality (far off outside, and too hollow inside), the lighting and the acting....sorry, but although this has a few funny seconds, it doesn't draw that much interest. Hope you can get something better with practice!

[jonvideo]

Lawrence , Yes, We wanted -amateur angle , we wanted to show people that you can do a film without a fancy mics -pro actors- steadicam etc. (I own an mke6/66 seinheiser a $700 mic but chose not to use it.) As for drawing that much interest. It has gotten close to 5 thousand hits in 8 months. You cousins film (very nicely done I might add- perhaps better techniques than I have ) has recieved 250 hits in 2 years. It is all about the message and the delievery.

[lawrencefollower]

@jonvideo It's a decent effort. Don't get me wrong. It just could be better because you show so much potential. I should have made that clearer. Sorry I didn't. As to my cousin's short, it was a family flick for family -- never meant for anyone else, ergo 250 hits; but fully rewarding family hits no less. Remember your audience.

[silverond]

Do you have a piece of work I could see of yours? I'm always looking for ideas, it would also help me to see where you are coming from. In 1992 I produced Advanced Broadcast Camera Techniques on VHS. It was a big seller, and had enough sales for a part 2 follow up video. I may do a new HD version, so i'm always open for ideas. Also what did you mean when you say remember your audience? Perhaps I didn't do it enough. Did you see the 61 techniques video I did on Youtube. Let me know.

[silverond]

I forgot to ask, How did you find out about the Kindness of others movie?

What we normally do for sound and production , not perfect but we are pretty run and gun can be found by typing in 7 secrets of real estate photography on

you tube.

[enlightenradio]

@jonvideo Hey Sir, what song is it? 3:05. thanks

[YHEEDMEDIAGROUP]

lol. Theres no crying @ d detail shop.

[speedomike747]

Could've used some music :)

[microdasher]

hahhahahahhahahaa love the twilight bit!!!! COMPLETELY OVERRATED!!

[jonvideo]

Thanks, The comment is a bit dated now, (a year later) but I'm glad someone enjoyed that line.

[spongah]

I really like the buddhistness of this! this was the best bad movie I've seen.. or worst good movie... depending on how yo look at it :D

[nirvanaaent]

Any short film that can hold my undivided attention for 10 minutes is brilliant - this one did - cool stuff

[jonvideo]

Thanks so much. It is nice to hear that from someone. Most people don't realize what it takes in movie making to keep people wanting to watch the next scene. Glad you enjoyed it.

[jijumurugan]

nice work , but why u r using auto exposer for shooting .

[jonvideo]

We wanted to see if we could do a movie with a consumer camcorder just the on camera mic and minimal controls. The manual exposure on this camera was very choppy in terms of steps up or down. Perhaps we should have spent more time with it though.

[robblac]

i feel sick..

[jonvideo]

I hope you feel better soon.

[FIXOVISION]

thanks, some techniques I could use

[jonvideo]

Thanks ,  I appreciate it.

[gaansi77]

great work. some edit points though required some slides, may be start few frames after, on the footage. She gets down from the bus without a bag and walks with one.

[ArlanBerglas]

Master Yandi Passing It Forward

[ArlanBerglas]

The Pass It Forward Movement likes your video!

[jonvideo]

Thanks for passing if forward!

[mararom]

Great tips. Really helpful, thank you for posting.

[picaccu83]

I appreciate u guys tried... But, this is not well-made and good B type film, either.

[jonvideo]

You are right, I could have don't better with the sound, picture and story, I just was under a timeline and had some health issues so I couldn't do all I wanted to. I would say it's more like a C type short film. I just wanted a message to get across and use some of the techniques I teach, and have some fun.

[Biostech2008]

@jonvideo I thought it was great, and i like the message in it. It's true, before the recession i had a job and my own place, financialy i was below the poverty level. But i had what i needed, or could get what i needed. Just having that, i felt wealthier than i actually was.

[EMOsonic1]

i wish i was that good at video editing,

[jonvideo]

Thanks, Its just about only using what you need really and cutting out the rest. The other thing that helps is different video angles , so when you cut stuff together, you get a variation from shot to shot.

[EMOsonic1]

true, they expect masterpieces out of me in college, i think they over estimate my abilities and also suppress it.

[silverond]

Thanks, It's really easy to do.

I'd be happy to tell you what we did to make the editing look good. Just ask me a specific. Did you watch the other video 61 tips? Where we show what we did, some relating to editing?

[EMOsonic1]

i did but i zoned in and out, sadly i have a very short attention span, but yeah i did watch it

[r1969c]

JC, Great video. Great story. Well done.

[arkansasrocks]

I really enjoyed your movie.  Great job!

[jonvideo]

Thanks Stephanie, I'm glad you got a chance to watch it. Coming from you it means alot. Keep up the great work with Arkansas Rocks!

[vtutson]

What fun! I loved those singing boys! Thanks for sharing this. I see you had a busy fall!! Glad all is well. xoxo Val

[jonvideo]

Thanks for the feedback Val , In the longer version the boys have more of a part, in a couple of months I plan on posting the 18 minute version on youtube also. .

[mrhulot101]

Hi John,

Your movie had a very playful and fun vibe. Enjoyed the humor the most.Humor is very hard to do and is under rated.Your signs "will eat for food' made me laugh. Small details like "I am baned from the library" add nice color to story. I wonder if voice over was overdone, most movies show and don't tell too much. Kind of preachy at end. Actors were all enjoyable, good videography, you film in Miami Beach you can get help from me anytime.

you did real good,will watch again.

Robb

[steadishots]

Thanks Robb, I made up "banned from the library" because I wanted to show that her roommate is pretty irresponsible. I though it was funny because who gets banned from a library? and why would you? I thought I was the only one who finds it funny, so thanks!

The voice over was overdone- It is really a 16-22 movie shoehorned to 10 minutes for a Arkansas film festival shorts event in January and that is one way I explained away fast, what I wanted to show.

[steadishots]

I think the longer version will come across less preachy because there are some funny parts that "Yandi" has which lets her and the audience know that he is retired from the "guru" stuff because of the fakeness of it and she needs to see him as just a real person.

Here is an example that was cut-

Molly- Is the tea overflowing because you want to show me that I have to clear my mind before I can be receptive to new information and have clarity?"

Yandi- No, I have lousy eyesite.

Thanks again

[jivebrain]

Love the fog scene. You can't do that with dry ice! There are a lot of other nice scenes, too. This is a film everyone needs to see - especially this time of the year when materialism abounds. Great job!

[nick431]

Wow great film with a good message. Quick pace, constantly moving, and every shot is interesting. Watch out this is the future of filmmaking. Take it from me, I work for NBC Television.

Look for cameo of the director in background at 9:12!

[steadishots]

Thanks for the nice, kind words, What NBC show do you work for.

[nick431]

I work on 'House'.  It airs on FOX, but it's produced by NBC Universal.

[jonvideo]

yes, Id love to put you in the next one, also I subscribed to your channel, what kind of character would you like to play bad guy good guy ? drummer?

[tamaman7777]

whatever you think, you are the genius! just a bit part and help out behind the scenes.

[tamaman7777]

Awesome job John but it doesn't surprise me at all. Can I be in the next one? : )