Those Who Wait (Original Poetry)

[64now]

very cool! I dig!

[cleavergurl29]

very nice video my friends its hepls,,your brilliant keep it up thumbs up for this one!

[TheLoonwolf]

Those who wait for that future date when the hand of fate will satiate and fill their plate, and abolish the hate, make an enemy a mate and somehow create that finer state where the way is straight and everything is great, are just taking the bait until it's much too late. These I berate!

[AbeniSisterSnake]

Wow-Who Wait. Free Will. Future History Ripe for Making. Shift of Higher Of Power. Unite. Creating-Resonating. Evarporating-Celebrating Debating-Frustrating. POWER POEM. Delightfully Delivered. Passionately Performed. Words Wisdom.

[VicRoseMusic]

you're talking to me man

[pauldavidbeard]

@VicRoseMusic Thanks for the comment brother. This one speaks to you does it?

[kizthewhiz]

Thanks for dedicating the poem to us world-changers Paul. Big ups. I'm just writing my Creative Writing portfolio of poetry for my Masters. You've inspired me to maybe film myself performing them on You Tube as you have done. I'm scared! But...you did it, so why can't I?

Kiz

[pauldavidbeard]

@kizthewhiz Hello!

For writing me this comment it is clear to me that you are one of the stars of the universe... I am only spec myself but one day I will get there. I would be thrilled to be mentioned any time or where as an inspiration to others... Big up to world changers everywhere!

~ paul

[KristinSpradling]

You are a great soul :-D

[karenlovesyahweh]

Nice.. :) peace.

[FireFarmOfficial]

Great stuff man! Nice one:)

[hojofan]

Hello Paul....You definitely have quite a talent. Your way with words is amazing!  Peace2U, Alex

[bennytyp89]

so cool !

[zebakoli]

AMAZINGGG! I love poetry! Keep it up Paully! :P <3

[teymusic]

thanks for sharing!

Tey

[TomCoteMusic]

loved it!

[triviewscom]

ALWAYS :)

[RebelLionBeatz]

I like your message!!

[iprawiro]

Waiting is good ;_))

[pauldavidbeard]

@iprawiro :) Thanks for commenting. But waiting for what?

[whereisthemessiah]

awesome poem! how did you do that thing at the beginning?

[pauldavidbeard]

@whereisthemessiah Thank you so MUCH man..!!! You know I don't really remember but its more than 5 effects :)

[Rebelyous1]

dang man das quite good

[northernrob99]

Interesting Words my friend. powerful poetry with true meaning. Thanks for Sharing :) Rob

[heikosunfire]

nice one, bro!

[moorea2010]

Congrats Paul...very well done...i really like and you are very talented...please keep up with your good work and thanks for sharing...

hugs

M@risol

[TheAngelwings123]

LOVED YOU POEMS VERY GOOD.

EXCEPTIONAL.

[HeyokaLoki]

Fantastic. "The more we learn and the more knowledge we gain, the more sure we become that we know nothing." The elders teach that this is all a choice, everyday, everything, we are making it up as we go. Its about time I would say, we choose this day, to bring a new way... star light in the childrens eyes burn not so bright when bombs fly, when hunger brings nothing but flies.. Its up to you and I to realize this is all by choice and give it voice,that we choose a better way this day. Namaste

[lunasolgirls]

Oh yes!!! we love it!! Please post more:)

Love and light,

Jacque and April

[TheLetsbegin]

Accurate, spot on, resonate to right, truth recognised by you and more than a few.

Play on words? No! simply stating the truth. Most only see negativity which in turn destroys the essence of what`s real. Problem being we all wait to some degree, hoping to catch the important call! Unity is upon us I feel it strong, but watch out there because the weak will find a million reason`s why and only run on fear. Fear is controlling but will never win the almighty battle, fear is man made and lost.

[80mthomas]

Paul this is some 'next level' poetry - yes, your words are definitely resonating, you're right, arguing and debating the problem just creates a lot hot air with nothing tangible to show for it :)

[pauldavidbeard]

@80mthomas HEY!!! You think so? Ah wow, haha! I am bowled over, my humble thanks to you... your work is quite intriguing and encouraging to me also!

[80mthomas]

@pauldavidbeard serious it's fresh mate!

[itsShelbiLouise]

I think this is my favorite (: I absolutely love both your poems and your accent.

[pauldavidbeard]

@itsShelbiLouise I'm pleased you liked it and made you smile... there is a lot to be positive about, ...after all! :)

[HandsofAngels]

It seems we share a common interest....creative inspiration!

[mrjohnny6383]

Great poems writing and reading takes time, and gets the mind thinking.

Today everything is hurry up, and speed is best,

[VibezBournemouth]

This is exceptional. Good vibez :-)

[SeventhDayAudio]

A well thought out and put together poem.

[dante02206]

Awesome. Your poem is beautiful and inspirational! Very nice.

[DinhaGirl07]

I loved your poetry is amazing my friend !!!

[pauldavidbeard]

@DinhaGirl07 My warm thanks to you for sparing some time and sharing some thoughts from your mind, your very kind. :)

[xBURNINGFIGHTx]

Yes it is........ Resonating (with me).

[ChannelThePoetry]

yup very good and lots of food for thought!

[rockerforever10]

WOW!!! very very very good!! this one poem puts all my poems i ever written and trust me ive written alot! to shame!! and the affects r awesome!!! :) keep it up! :)

[SeeJoyRun]

Great Paul. Thank you so much!!

[perez69wateva]

Grea poem.. !

[kathleencartwright]

Very inspiring....great presentation!! Love your accent too :)

[svetlana44cute]

Definitely GOOD!

[EllyMcCormack]

Very good poem. There is a strange flow to your poetry. The body language and the whole delivery was very hypnotic. Well I thought so!

[herderberg12]

hello Paul, welcome on our page! nice to meet You and Your poetry...really great performance, too...is it sign language or kind of pantomime?

[TheMistAnchorite]

are you the one who talks here ? really good video indeed, finally somethin originl, i was getting tired of videos with nothing original in them on youtube ! thanks for uploadng this, and keep on the good work

[CaptBadazz]

A beautiful piece delivered brilliantly! Excellent!

[debbiecakezify]

awww i actually find this so sweet!! <3333333333 dude ur good u kno? i like how u move ur hands n stuff & i loved teh line tht says 'mond sharper than the knife' well, i love it, it's realistic & there is an ugly cultural fear haha, u right!

[AppleBunny7]

Great poem! *-*

We loved it!!~~

[KalkiKalyani]

"A closed mind is like a closed book; just a block of wood"

[BeautyGeo]

Great :))) well done

[dragonflywhisperer1]

I love this, and I am living in free will. Beautiful. I subbed to you because I love your poems.

[pauldavidbeard]

@curi0us11 Ty. And yes it is actually. :)

[BabyCanaryYelllin]

@pauldavidbeard Ooohnice music and YES your poem DOES 'resonate' with me. WE WIN

[MrDrawingguy]

well done!... :)

[xMiracleGirlx]

I love this ♥ and your accent/voice (:

[768Kayshan]

Wonderful!!!

[SimplyOverDone]

you have an accent :)... i love your voice!! your poetry is really good

[connordaniel23]

This is brilliant....always appreciate a good wordsmith : )

[911tourettes]

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful message! :-)

[Davina2010x]

Peaceful Revolution :) Very well done Paul! Much Love, Peace and Light my friend.

[pauldavidbeard]

@Davina2010x Hey Davina :)

I am honoured by your comment, thanks for having a look. Well we ARE going to get one soon, its all up to us how it goes down. peace love and light to you Davi, your friend ~ paul

[Poems4Truth]

~most excellent!

[dooshsayswhat]

You have a way with words. I liked it.

[EagleSentry]

Nice one Paul, intelligent & very Positive Words. Words have Power :)

[pauldavidbeard]

@EagleSentry Thanks Yan,

I am thrilled that you liked it my friend. And yes I think the vibration of sound, or words, can have limitless power :)

[AttackMyFriends]

awwww...for me!?

you shouldn't have! lmao xD

[pigpal2]

yes i do indeed believe that good things happen to those who wait :)

[pauldavidbeard]

@cornelia3evans Hey Cornelia,

Oh yeah... you are quite observant, well...I am a man of my word. Or perhaps of many words? But maybe you knew that already, ~ peace. Hope you're well today?

[victoriamorricone]

this is very nice. i like it, really! :)

[pauldavidbeard]

@victoriamorricone Lovely of you to say so Victoria, ~ paul

[PhilosopherFresh]

faved this 0ne, you are very talented!!!

[PhilosopherFresh]

Very nice work man, insightful and strong.

[no2facism]

Love the poetry. 

[Manikhayya]

BEAUTIFUL.....REALLY KOOL!

[euripideesshreds]

This is terrific ! I am so impressed... The delivery is almost better than the lyrics ! This needs to go viral . A greay poet, a heroic poet for the times... Faved ~ Subbed

[pauldavidbeard]

@euripideesshreds You are most kind. Well it hasn't done bad so far... I think sharing this has done a lot of good this week maybe. I shall hope to stay in touch and share thoughts again? ~peace

[scottishbadboytracks]

Sweet flow mate

[jakluk4]

GAH! BRAVOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! favd and FEATURED! i love this!!!!! i must add you to my recommended channel list on my channel! :D

[pauldavidbeard]

@jakluk4 Wow... what unbelievable compliment! I had to read that a few times to be sure. Which verses caught your ear... just out of interest? ~ peace, paul

[jakluk4]

@pauldavidbeard i loved it all, but 1:30 onward got me most.....yes. yes. YES! we are all one my friend. we are the reality we create. in the now. in this moment. thats all there is, and we decide. the shift of consciousness. its happening, i know more and more of us are feeling it. we are living in amazing times my friend. metta and oneness. :)

[ShiftingReality]

Just love your poem Paul, how you recite and hand gestures. A pleasure to listen to for the 4th time. <3 AC

[pauldavidbeard]

@ShiftingReality haha. I wasn't sure if I'd over done the gestures... but wow 4 times? *virtual bow* Stay in touch if you like? :)

[suprflawd]

woah! that's a trip! thanks. peace love & respect <3

[pauldavidbeard]

@suprflawd hey! It was? Hope it sent you to an awesome place, and that you might come back? peace ~ paul

[MrBuckwilliam]

10 Q  :)

[pauldavidbeard]

@MrBuckwilliam hey thanks, but what is 10 Q ? :)

[F33DTH3F1R3F1LM5]

Awesome video brother!! =) ***** Nice Work!!

[DJCallidus]

Yes Paul. Resonating with me brother. Encorage you to watch the "The Code by Carl Munck". Its long and full of maths but rather revealing also. Got some tunes in the pipeline though I suffer from perfectionisim so as soon as I get over myself they'll be up. Peace Dude

[pauldavidbeard]

@DJCallidus Hey man, Ok. I will give it a try next time I got some time. Yeah inform when they are up will look forward to that, very grateful for all the support you've shown me. Perfectionism is both a gift and a curse I think... :- ) peace

[MsMyooo]

Good things never comes to those who wait , even if they waiting for years ..

it comes to those who are not ask for it ^_^

[pauldavidbeard]

@MsMyooo ...Good things come to those who are not afraid to ask for it? Yes...? Hm, I think I might even agree with you there... :)

[MsMyooo]

WOoOoOW AMAZING ... you’re GREAT ^_^

[AquarielCharm]

Truly one of the best poems I ever. Way to go Paul! <3 AC

[pauldavidbeard]

@AquarielCharm Pleased to meet you and that is quite the compliment. Peace be with you ~ paul

[jiggle17]

great work Paul, the lyrics sat deep with me... i think it was the pausing between your words that made it so enjoyable for me!

[EX0MATRlXTV]

~featured :)

[worldinsideaworld]

hi Paul...that was excellent ...a message in rhyme that carry´s a lot of weight...great!!

[SuperMike6984]

I think good things come to tose who wait.

At the moment I'm waiting for a answer from someone.

I have to wait a week and have 3 days left to know the answer.

I do hope it is good news though.

Keep getting a bad vib.

But I think most good things come more than bad.

[pauldavidbeard]

@SuperMike6984 Really... I'm not so sure. I think it's a nice theory but perhaps I was aiming at debunking that myth here... anyway glad it made you think and my humble thanks for commenting on my little vid. peace, prosperity and of course poetry ~ paul

;)

[Marienuc88]

Very very nice my friend! :)

[nonafetcu]

beautyful

[jackscholze]

Smashing and splendid, a bushel of grok and optimism too, a galactic bit of light. thanks

[Tinmysta]

Nice work man... Keep the poems flowin

[LoPaulaVe]

Wonderful poem, everything that comes from you is wonderful.

[TheSpartacat]

Awesome! It's resonating, Paul :-D Loving your work!!! x



[pauldavidbeard]

@TheSpartacat Hey You! Aw you are very kind. Took 9 tries to get "right" think maybe was worth it now :) x

[TheSpartacat]

@pauldavidbeard

:-) Y'know I'm glad to hear it took 9 tries... i was sitting here thinking *how does he manage to do that so well? I'd be taking 15 goes at it*

lol

Appreciate you taking the courage to share your work, its excellent!

[StarveTheSystem]

Faved :))))

[MsPalinaLaska]

I really felt the message behind your poem.VYou're doing great work! I feel like you could speak up to a lot of people with your words! Keep it up :)

[pauldavidbeard]

@MsPalinaLaska You could? sounds like a good sign to me. hmm dunno, its early days yet. Thrilled that you took the time to comment though, all the best to you :)

[ajhumour]

nice outro effect

[tydodge]

Sweet.

[EX0MATRlXTV]

~nice one Paul!

[SEXOMATRIXTV]

@EX0MATRlXTV What s up primitive ,when you learn to be respectful , blocked!

[MissAlmostFlawless]

OMG I love it. <3 Your poetry is amazing! I am totally with you. :) Great work.

[pauldavidbeard]

@MissAlmostFlawless I always like to hear ppls reactions... very nice of you to write that.

Thanks Ms Flawless =)

[zezt]

Really love this

[EnhanceTheTruth]

Loved the part about the third eye. :) Simply astonishing poetry, keep at it.

As for the question, I believe it's conditional. If you wait too long you're missing many opportunities. Likewise, it's dangerous to jump into everything without regarding caution. There's a time when its right to wait and a time when its right to act.

Great video man. The vanishing at the end was a great touch! :)

[pauldavidbeard]

@KiDoWingLillian You are very kind, your words mean a lot to me :) And you are quite welcome my friend

[dundee520]

nice 1 pal, keep up the good work , best regards

[bimba00100]

congratulations you are very good

[pauldavidbeard]

@bimba00100 thank you :)

[professionalDQ]

Aww this was lovely <3

I love how you're able to disappear into the wall at the end. Wish I could do stuff like that..

<3 xxx

[pauldavidbeard]

@professionalDQ What a lovely comment, thanks for the encouragement Beth, I think you can do it too if you put your mind to it, haha! x

[KASPLARFO]

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