Wow! Amazing! Im kinda scared now but this poem really opens your eyes.
Young people realize life waits for no one. Live everyday like its your last. Dont miss the oppurtunity to say I love you to the people who mean the most to you. You never know when your timer is gonna off. Live with no regrets.
The best poem I've heard in my life or at least the one that touched me the most...give God praise and let Him be your Savior now!! One day it will be too late for excuses...
five heart beats away from four breaths away from three seconds away from two late to keep a stary bullet.. from hitting his lungs. looks like life just took one... so true. thank god for this lady an her talent.
THIS IZ THA WAKE-UP CALL 4 US AS A GENERATION.....I WANNA THANK U JACKIE 4 ALLOWING GOD ALMIGHTY 2 USE U.......B/C U TRUELY HAV THA ANOINTING ON U......SO THANX 4 GOIN' THRU & OVERCOMMIN WT U WENT THRU 4 THA COST OV URE ANOINTING
This poem was the pure truth many of us see death so far out not knowing dat its right around da corner;der4 we must be ready and live our day like its r last...
Wow, one of the pastors at my church posted this on facebook and I'm so glad he did! What a powerful message that strikes fear that we all need to hear.
This poem really touched me. I just lost my Mother 3 days ago and before that I lost my aunt a year and a half before. Death is like a stray bullet meaning that death has no name it hits whoever it wants without any notice.
wow...you can't even watch this video and say you wish someone else was watching it, it's for them, because its for YOU too! No matter who you are its for you...wow
Man it is funny how death is nothing but a change of address. Most Christians need to stop fronting like they believe Jesus is coming back. All ways so concerned with the things that Christ said, "take no thoughts for". If we really believe in the words of Christ and follow his teachings, then the best moments of our life should begin when it ends.......
Please let us readdress our focus on Christ. Cause he is coming for those who look like Love.
This is a very powerful poem. Came over this when looking up a death metal video. So I was suprised at the ending. Without the religious bit at the end, I would say this poem would have had a much greater effect on me. Why do we have to follow religion to live a good life? If I want to not berlieve in God, but still live a good life, is that a sin? If I don't want to believe in the Bible, does this mean that I'm gonna be, as you put it, the "goose" in God's game of duck duck goose?
@bagheaddenham true Christianity is not the bad perception you may have of it. You can still live a good life by society's or your standards but you will die one day. Jesus offers eternal life to any who wants it and he fulfills people in ways the things in this world can't. May God bless you
@ADAJ3 I accept that living a bad life is a bad thing, but I think that as soon as you start trying to attach religion onto everything good, its not a selfless thing anymore. People are only gonna do good deeds to get into heaven.
I am not a religious person. I don't say belief is bad, and anyone who believes in something strongly should be commended for their beliefs. But if I said I'm atheist but live by the rules, will I go to hell (or not to Heaven) if I don't believe?
@bagheaddenham it's not God's game of duck duck Goose its deaths... The price has already been payed for our souls...our acknowledgement of that is what is sought from us... Its all good leading a good life but believe it or not., we wouldn't have life if it wasn't 4 God,its like U had a child and your child grew up became independent and said,i don't have to have a relationship with my mum...but im still a good person... it would hurt you right? Could you imagine how God feels. & still he waits
Only the good die young is a LIE from hell to make people think that in order to live long they have to be bad. Many people die everyday however when a "good" person dies it stays in your mind longer because of the shock factor.
this is the most powerful thing i've heard in a while.. mostlikely one of the most important things i've ever heard. i'm gonna share this with a lot of people. thank you.
she a bad girl, she need to be on tv somewhere! she make u really go deep into yaself for real and think about how u living ya life and what u should change.
jackieeee this is sooo wow!!! i had my friend who was struggling with homosexulity watch your last poem she really was touched she even started tearing up just keep doing wat u r doing for God he truely speaks through you!!! oh and welcome to the natural hair community!!hehe
this gasssss... praise GOD.. im too on this 1.. gurl GOD just used u too wake people game up... im still stuck... may GOD continue to use you as an evangelist with poetry...love it...WAKE UP PEOPLE!!!!!!
Awesome job, Jackie! We should not boast in sin or about tomorrow as if we know for sure whether or not we will be here. We are not immortal, but instead are all subject to death. We have to repent & live life for Christ so we can be assured of having eternal life.
James 4:14-15 Yet you do not know what your life will be like tomorrow. You are just a vapor that appears for a little while and then vanishes away. Instead you ought to say, “If the Lord wills, we will live and do this or that.”
Mind-Blowing!!! Repent and turn from your sins and ask Jesus into your heart while you still can breathe!!! All sin in this world is not worth burning in Hell for eternity!~
Amen. 10 out of 10 die, get right with your Maker today - repent and trust in Jesus Christ the risen Savior and Lord. Jesus, who is fully God and fully sinless man, died in your place on the cross, He took the punishment you deserve for your sin against God, and rose on the third day so you be forgiven and have eternal life. Repent (turn from sin) and trust in Jesus alone while you still have life.
Powerful message.
TheAmbivalency 3 weeks ago 9
her metaphors and similes are crazy!
BallinCougar15 1 month ago 24
Wow....
Tobiwankanobie 4 months ago 5
Wow! Amazing! Im kinda scared now but this poem really opens your eyes.
Young people realize life waits for no one. Live everyday like its your last. Dont miss the oppurtunity to say I love you to the people who mean the most to you. You never know when your timer is gonna off. Live with no regrets.
NeishaRenaii 5 months ago 20
This poem have open eyes so much..Pray God will continue to bless the P4CM ministry...
islandcurves 6 months ago 16
This is the best poem from the entire ministry. This is completely haunting. I will remember this for the rest of my life.
takitheterrible 6 months ago 12
She killed it!
Solnyne 6 months ago 2
Death may have a maters, but I have a doctorate in (R.I.P)
robotsamuraiTOM1500 7 months ago
The best poem I've heard in my life or at least the one that touched me the most...give God praise and let Him be your Savior now!! One day it will be too late for excuses...
FoxxyKillah 7 months ago 9
My goodness. Death definitely pointed it's finger at this poem because she committed homocide on that joint!
MicBluTheMoufpeace 8 months ago 7
Well done! Thank God for Jesus, the life :)
DestinyDiadem 8 months ago
Her words are more scarier than any scary film,
EditorInTheMaking 8 months ago 269
Deep stuff
LOVEisMEESH 9 months ago
WOW
carrietawadros 9 months ago
wow!!! just wow!!!! DEEP....
lorraineappiahdanqua 9 months ago
"yur iqnorance is commintinq yur suicide." <3 #amazinq
mariahargo177 9 months ago 9
five heart beats away from four breaths away from three seconds away from two late to keep a stary bullet.. from hitting his lungs. looks like life just took one... so true. thank god for this lady an her talent.
17tupacforlife 9 months ago
a truly talented, God filled young woman!!! this is mayb the 10th time i am watchin this...it is POWERFUL!!!! Bless the Lord!!
RhonetteBuntyn 10 months ago 3
CAN I DOWNLOAD THIS ?!
Mannnnnnn This Is So Deep !
Amen . .
MiszxLuckyCharmszx 10 months ago
She is truely blessed to have such a way with words! This poem was amazing, beginning to end. WOW!
daniela8908 11 months ago 9
MY GOD! WOW!
MichelleNomsa 11 months ago 3
I LOVE HER!!!!
jkelly2727 1 year ago 6
Need to come to detroit and visit one of our open mic's love this poem!
temekacarmel 1 year ago 4
nice
nanajub90 1 year ago
THIS IZ THA WAKE-UP CALL 4 US AS A GENERATION.....I WANNA THANK U JACKIE 4 ALLOWING GOD ALMIGHTY 2 USE U.......B/C U TRUELY HAV THA ANOINTING ON U......SO THANX 4 GOIN' THRU & OVERCOMMIN WT U WENT THRU 4 THA COST OV URE ANOINTING
SIRQUEEZEY 1 year ago 3
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JhustNikki 1 year ago
all i can say is that was DEEP, and i loved it
MandiiiBeauty 1 year ago 7
this is passst hard ..keep on it sista//keep talkin truth
PoetriiseStanzafyah 1 year ago
This poem was the pure truth many of us see death so far out not knowing dat its right around da corner;der4 we must be ready and live our day like its r last...
lexiiboo26 1 year ago 3
death has no power over me becuase the blood of christ has won!!!!!
JulianwithJ 1 year ago 6
She is speaking nothing but the truth she is a wise 21 year old!
MrsMissDenise 1 year ago 2
I AM INSPIRED !!!!!!!!
jesuskopp 1 year ago
huh.. weird. this is exactly what I tell my mom when she tells me not to eat so many potato chips.
JohnnyStreets 1 year ago
Jackie, God has blessed you so much. This is what our youth needs to hear.
naiveaddictionz 1 year ago 3
I loved this . it was powerful and brilliant ! just amazing .
xSarahIsLegitx 1 year ago
Beautiful..that's all I can really say. I pray that people will be moved by this and will not take life as a game any longer.
krod8787 1 year ago
THIS IS POWERFUL IT HIT HOME HARD!!!!!!!!!!
MzSmilezQue 1 year ago 3
WOW this thang right here is deep! and altho a subject many dont wanna face its good she went in on this...
ESHA111190 1 year ago 4
im not even into poetry, but that was hot
Bestbeatstore 1 year ago
:)
ColZapp 1 year ago
Wow, one of the pastors at my church posted this on facebook and I'm so glad he did! What a powerful message that strikes fear that we all need to hear.
TbredGrits91 1 year ago
That's right! Run and tell that!! forreal
kisakye92 1 year ago
That's right! Run and tell that!! forreal
kisakye92 1 year ago
SH** I BETTER CONVERT JUST INCASE-EEEZ!!!! AAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAA
cutthroatgentlemen 1 year ago
YES!!!!!!!!!! TELL THAT!!!!!!
SonnieNPumps 1 year ago
Yo...this whole thing was epedimic! Woah..is all I could say!
complextheexec 1 year ago
hey i was wondering if i can get the lyrics to this i would like to share what you said from this peom to my youth if thats ok thanks! =]
ILYRJ18 1 year ago
All I can say is wow! That was phenomenal! Everyone should gear this. I'm glad I know u lord.
mzchinadoll82 1 year ago
I dot wanna play duck duck no mo!lol
bigjtracks 1 year ago
*snap snap snap* that was powerful! Love her!
WhEnHeSiNgS 1 year ago 2
"Don't be surprised when your profile picture is tagged to the front of your obituary cuz that'll be your final facebook" --CRAZY
brunette1234 1 year ago 2
"The clock inside your chest is ticking......and only God knows what time it is".....Whoa!
KarnessTurner 1 year ago 9
This is one Powerful Spoken Word! Blessed.. Truly blessed!
trinijojo1993 1 year ago
WoW..... got a little teary eyed!! #DEEP
keep up the good work!
Amen!!
Princessdymn 1 year ago
bestttt ever.
naomiig1993 1 year ago
main point: Everyone dies
cutevegtarian 1 year ago
Diz is soo true..I cnt stop playin it
.. Love diz poem
MISSsasha96 1 year ago
innnnnTENSE
Bubbleyumizchewi17 1 year ago
This poem really touched me. I just lost my Mother 3 days ago and before that I lost my aunt a year and a half before. Death is like a stray bullet meaning that death has no name it hits whoever it wants without any notice.
MikeSte2000 1 year ago
She goes in
adekz89 1 year ago
@tyden85 Lol
GODZKRE8TION 1 year ago
Sister Jackie,AMEN
GODZKRE8TION 1 year ago
omg...that was so depp and does make me think....i do believe in God but wow...i aint been doin what i should.....
QUEENG12345 1 year ago
Damn Girl.
ayerocket 1 year ago
wow. speechless
naomiig1993 1 year ago
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
charms622 1 year ago
This is amazing!!X
EBZZ101 1 year ago
That was so intense, I was genuinely left with chills. She came too hard with this. Wow.
ShyzStahh 1 year ago
PHENOMENAL!!!!!!!!!!!
FutureRae 1 year ago
i got really scared watching this, i need to repent and turn completely to Christ and surrender to his will
dimplespoo 1 year ago
That was immense.
Gebeewee 1 year ago
Just live life
TheHllywd 1 year ago
She hit this hard. I have to say, the best poem Ive heard in a while
shawtythug65 1 year ago 94
@shawtythug65 yes mam yu said it
QUEENG12345 1 year ago
wow...you can't even watch this video and say you wish someone else was watching it, it's for them, because its for YOU too! No matter who you are its for you...wow
monissica 1 year ago
The two people that disliked this video must have accidentally hit it because this video is amazing ! :)
BGirlSkirtao 1 year ago
wow love this peom, its powerful. Keep it up man
Martin8391 1 year ago
TRUTH.
CHRiSTJUNKi3 1 year ago
I have goosebumps on my entire body!!!
BGirlSkirtao 1 year ago
My whole body has goosebumps.
BGirlSkirtao 1 year ago
That was so powerful.
Amen.
mNmz013 1 year ago
Wow
WonderfullyMade01 1 year ago
WoW...that was really deep...life is really short...this was good...makes you think about life and God
famousstone 1 year ago
Wonderful as always...FYI: Love the new look miss lady!
FloeticHarmoni 1 year ago
one word: RAW
babybrat925 1 year ago
Your ignorance committing your suicide!!! Ignorance is not bliss.
BjornJ242 1 year ago
Love it!
marccc18 1 year ago
That was amazing I am in shock. I do spoken word and that just encouraged me and inspired me to go harder with my poems. Be encouraged woman of GOD!
TheBaptismMovement 1 year ago
oh man this poem is POWERFUL...makes you want to repent with the quickness!!
sesay123 1 year ago
Spit that!!!!
SpokenWordOfTruth 1 year ago
Man it is funny how death is nothing but a change of address. Most Christians need to stop fronting like they believe Jesus is coming back. All ways so concerned with the things that Christ said, "take no thoughts for". If we really believe in the words of Christ and follow his teachings, then the best moments of our life should begin when it ends.......
Please let us readdress our focus on Christ. Cause he is coming for those who look like Love.
ThyWillBeDone001 1 year ago
Im not even 2 minutes into the video and i've got goosebumps!
southernbell789 1 year ago 5
this is powerful.
beastyman116 1 year ago
This is a very powerful poem. Came over this when looking up a death metal video. So I was suprised at the ending. Without the religious bit at the end, I would say this poem would have had a much greater effect on me. Why do we have to follow religion to live a good life? If I want to not berlieve in God, but still live a good life, is that a sin? If I don't want to believe in the Bible, does this mean that I'm gonna be, as you put it, the "goose" in God's game of duck duck goose?
bagheaddenham 1 year ago
@bagheaddenham true Christianity is not the bad perception you may have of it. You can still live a good life by society's or your standards but you will die one day. Jesus offers eternal life to any who wants it and he fulfills people in ways the things in this world can't. May God bless you
ADAJ3 1 year ago 77
@ADAJ3 Amen....
GODZKRE8TION 1 year ago
@ADAJ3 I accept that living a bad life is a bad thing, but I think that as soon as you start trying to attach religion onto everything good, its not a selfless thing anymore. People are only gonna do good deeds to get into heaven.
I am not a religious person. I don't say belief is bad, and anyone who believes in something strongly should be commended for their beliefs. But if I said I'm atheist but live by the rules, will I go to hell (or not to Heaven) if I don't believe?
bagheaddenham 1 year ago
@bagheaddenham I also think you have to consider what is good. Whose standard of good are you following, because we all have a different standard.
lelakristal 1 year ago
@bagheaddenham it's not God's game of duck duck Goose its deaths... The price has already been payed for our souls...our acknowledgement of that is what is sought from us... Its all good leading a good life but believe it or not., we wouldn't have life if it wasn't 4 God,its like U had a child and your child grew up became independent and said,i don't have to have a relationship with my mum...but im still a good person... it would hurt you right? Could you imagine how God feels. & still he waits
LilMissHonest 1 year ago 3
WOW, THIS IS A REAL AS IT GETS. KEEP BLESSING PPL WITH YOUR WORDS SISTER
npwme 1 year ago 2
death is playing duck, duck goose, with us ... dang!! astonishing!!
kdotwatts 1 year ago 3
thass deep! makes you think about things.........
elayne300 1 year ago 3
That was amazing!
[[&allthatjazz]]
Woo88 1 year ago
WOW!!!! this was sooo powerful....life is short
HaraJukeybarbee 1 year ago
Outstanding. Powerful. Did you write this? If so, keep writing! A lot!
weavermom3 1 year ago
Wowww! That was powerful!
We must be ready at all times..
Glory to God <3
MAdANyS 1 year ago
:o My mouth is wide open. :D AMEN.
ItsaWhitpookaThang 1 year ago
Only the good die young is a LIE from hell to make people think that in order to live long they have to be bad. Many people die everyday however when a "good" person dies it stays in your mind longer because of the shock factor.
girliegurl228 1 year ago 2
Awesome! The Tree behind her looks like a man with his head down!
LPICM 1 year ago 3
got chills just watching this
BbyBellah 1 year ago
O my I'm left speechless.... This is so tru it's crazy I couldn't blink til she was finished, death really doesn't care everyone has a time
romanticsoulchild 1 year ago
amazing...
pianoangel9 1 year ago
Wow this really speaks to me, I didn't think I was going to be this affected by it
nayeka 1 year ago
This is so ironic that I came across this...I've been thinking bout my funeral for the past month now...
Plaisir09 1 year ago
Yoo thats.... WOW!!! soo true.!
aaronique33 1 year ago
That's some good stuff there... *two snaps in the air* to JESUS CHRIST!
creativebydesign76 1 year ago
so tru.. "DEATH IS A JEALOUS FELLOW" wow so tru....
ocook510 1 year ago
wow, that left me speechless
peacehopeluvv 1 year ago
I feel what your saying in this poem i loved it
youngsexxii 1 year ago
love this do true..
Phrahii 1 year ago
love this
hafital09 1 year ago
W O W !!!!
msrock2 1 year ago
One of the Realest poets...you tell them girl!
LilMissHonest 1 year ago
This is amazing! Glory to GOD!
KingdomBoundKids 1 year ago
this is the most powerful thing i've heard in a while.. mostlikely one of the most important things i've ever heard. i'm gonna share this with a lot of people. thank you.
whygeorgia10 1 year ago
wow...
SrDigital89 1 year ago
she a bad girl, she need to be on tv somewhere! she make u really go deep into yaself for real and think about how u living ya life and what u should change.
charnae22ron 1 year ago
"death is a jealous fellow. when you fail to think about him the more he remembers who you are..." BOOM!
KDN888 1 year ago 3
wwwoooooooooooooooow!!
jteddy15 1 year ago
I love it keep it up i love her she made me so happy(: <3 :D
ericndunga 1 year ago
She is so blessed !! :D
TheRedemtionz 1 year ago
boom!
ItsLittleNicky 1 year ago
BEST POEM I HAVE HEARD IN MY LIFE!
LOVE IT!
LadySmilez25 1 year ago
jackieeee this is sooo wow!!! i had my friend who was struggling with homosexulity watch your last poem she really was touched she even started tearing up just keep doing wat u r doing for God he truely speaks through you!!! oh and welcome to the natural hair community!!hehe
FathersFigah 1 year ago
hhmm!!! omjjjjjjjj
FathersFigah 1 year ago
Wow
TheSashie17 1 year ago
Today's a good day to die! Galatians 2:20
Twenty24Media 1 year ago
This Scares The Shit Out Of Me But Its A Reality Check For Everyone !!
Miyah313 1 year ago
WOWWWW!
iDevenir 1 year ago
You don't miss death by a second! When God says it's time.. Poof!! -3
laughsaremeds 1 year ago
really good stuff...kinda sad tho, but i think that was the point...like a wake up call lol
differentFOCUS 1 year ago
whoa.
ChahMingWon1 1 year ago
Deeeeeeep. & so very true. Get right now, or get left. Never know when it's too late.
crzytasha 1 year ago
WOW... that was VERY POWERFUL and such a sobering topic to think about. More people need to know this.
dmckin4054 1 year ago
this gasssss... praise GOD.. im too on this 1.. gurl GOD just used u too wake people game up... im still stuck... may GOD continue to use you as an evangelist with poetry...love it...WAKE UP PEOPLE!!!!!!
ocook510 1 year ago 2
Awesome job, Jackie! We should not boast in sin or about tomorrow as if we know for sure whether or not we will be here. We are not immortal, but instead are all subject to death. We have to repent & live life for Christ so we can be assured of having eternal life.
James 4:14-15 Yet you do not know what your life will be like tomorrow. You are just a vapor that appears for a little while and then vanishes away. Instead you ought to say, “If the Lord wills, we will live and do this or that.”
iTran5par3nt 1 year ago
this was really powerful and alot of people need to hear this
okachoe 1 year ago
DOPE.
cjanaew 1 year ago
wow... words to consider. Christ is the choice.
CeeLeeToo 1 year ago
Mind-Blowing!!! Repent and turn from your sins and ask Jesus into your heart while you still can breathe!!! All sin in this world is not worth burning in Hell for eternity!~
to God be the glory...Loved it Jackie!!
MrJohnnyBeGoode 1 year ago
Yessssss!
matthew11and25 1 year ago
Woooooww!!
IamMellisonant 1 year ago
1 of the Best Poem Ive Eva heard...eva
krackmankrackman 1 year ago
wow and wow again
9dayrow 1 year ago
Amen. 10 out of 10 die, get right with your Maker today - repent and trust in Jesus Christ the risen Savior and Lord. Jesus, who is fully God and fully sinless man, died in your place on the cross, He took the punishment you deserve for your sin against God, and rose on the third day so you be forgiven and have eternal life. Repent (turn from sin) and trust in Jesus alone while you still have life.
qptqpt 1 year ago 37
WHAT!!!!!! WOWWWWWW.....a def wake up call! whew! Praise God for this!
tallnsweet198 1 year ago
MAGNIFICENT
princemeel777 1 year ago
*snap* *snap* *snap* *snap* your fingers
natamil 1 year ago
speechlees...#thatisall
Uniquefunlove91 1 year ago
WOW THAT WAS HOT
starlikegluethis 1 year ago
wow
LanceCHRISTstrong 1 year ago
wow amazing video
bhoney89 1 year ago
Awesome!!! Keep speaking the truth. The world needs to hear it!!
nettaj282 1 year ago
Preach!
Shawtay787 1 year ago
Snaps...
Tiggamax 1 year ago
yo, if people can't SEE after watching this...
TheMizzGAmanic 1 year ago
Powerful and deep poem sista!
747REDFELLA1 1 year ago
wow i'm speachless...
zoe77able 1 year ago
Wow
ReliableLojic 1 year ago
AMAZING!
TheLMfaOSHO 1 year ago
the "good" usually dont go to heaven..get right now with god..before its too late..shes powerful..i love it!
TheUNKNOWNReal 1 year ago
WOWZERS!!!!!!!!!!
rajecks 1 year ago
yikes!!! that was ova deep!!
ragoangel123 1 year ago
Luv it!!
phillmaster85 1 year ago
wow, very convicting and thought provoking!
LyanneJordan 1 year ago