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  • Powerful message.

  • her metaphors and similes are crazy!

  • Wow....

  • Wow! Amazing! Im kinda scared now but this poem really opens your eyes.

    Young people realize life waits for no one. Live everyday like its your last. Dont miss the oppurtunity to say I love you to the people who mean the most to you. You never know when your timer is gonna off. Live with no regrets.

  • This poem have open eyes so much..Pray God will continue to bless the P4CM ministry...

  • This is the best poem from the entire ministry. This is completely haunting. I will remember this for the rest of my life.

  • She killed it!

  • Death may have a maters, but I have a doctorate in (R.I.P)

  • The best poem I've heard in my life or at least the one that touched me the most...give God praise and let Him be your Savior now!! One day it will be too late for excuses...

  • My goodness. Death definitely pointed it's finger at this poem because she committed homocide on that joint!

  • Well done! Thank God for Jesus, the life :)

  • Her words are more scarier than any scary film,

  • Deep stuff

  • WOW

  • wow!!! just wow!!!! DEEP....

  • "yur iqnorance is commintinq yur suicide." <3 #amazinq

  • five heart beats away from four breaths away from three seconds away from two late to keep a stary bullet.. from hitting his lungs. looks like life just took one... so true. thank god for this lady an her talent.

  • a truly talented, God filled young woman!!! this is mayb the 10th time i am watchin this...it is POWERFUL!!!! Bless the Lord!!

  • CAN I DOWNLOAD THIS ?!

    Mannnnnnn This Is So Deep !

    Amen . .

  • She is truely blessed to have such a way with words! This poem was amazing, beginning to end. WOW!

  • MY GOD! WOW!

  • I LOVE HER!!!!

  • Need to come to detroit and visit one of our open mic's love this poem!

  • nice

  • THIS IZ THA WAKE-UP CALL 4 US AS A GENERATION.....I WANNA THANK U JACKIE 4 ALLOWING GOD ALMIGHTY 2 USE U.......B/C U TRUELY HAV THA ANOINTING ON U......SO THANX 4 GOIN' THRU & OVERCOMMIN WT U WENT THRU 4 THA COST OV URE ANOINTING

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  • all i can say is that was DEEP, and i loved it

  • this is passst hard ..keep on it sista//keep talkin truth

  • This poem was the pure truth many of us see death so far out not knowing dat its right around da corner;der4 we must be ready and live our day like its r last...

  • death has no power over me becuase the blood of christ has won!!!!!

  • She is speaking nothing but the truth she is a wise 21 year old!

  • I AM INSPIRED !!!!!!!!

  • huh.. weird. this is exactly what I tell my mom when she tells me not to eat so many potato chips.

  • Jackie, God has blessed you so much. This is what our youth needs to hear.

  • I loved this . it was powerful and brilliant ! just amazing .

  • Beautiful..that's all I can really say. I pray that people will be moved by this and will not take life as a game any longer.

  • THIS IS POWERFUL IT HIT HOME HARD!!!!!!!!!!

  • WOW this thang right here is deep! and altho a subject many dont wanna face its good she went in on this...

  • im not even into poetry, but that was hot

  • :)

  • Wow, one of the pastors at my church posted this on facebook and I'm so glad he did! What a powerful message that strikes fear that we all need to hear.

  • That's right! Run and tell that!! forreal

  • That's right! Run and tell that!! forreal

  • SH** I BETTER CONVERT JUST INCASE-EEEZ!!!! AAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAA

  • YES!!!!!!!!!! TELL THAT!!!!!!

  • Yo...this whole thing was epedimic! Woah..is all I could say!

  • hey i was wondering if i can get the lyrics to this i would like to share what you said from this peom to my youth if thats ok thanks! =]

  • All I can say is wow! That was phenomenal! Everyone should gear this. I'm glad I know u lord.

  • I dot wanna play duck duck no mo!lol

  • *snap snap snap* that was powerful! Love her!

  • "Don't be surprised when your profile picture is tagged to the front of your obituary cuz that'll be your final facebook" --CRAZY

  • "The clock inside your chest is ticking......and only God knows what time it is".....Whoa!

  • This is one Powerful Spoken Word! Blessed.. Truly blessed!

  • WoW..... got a little teary eyed!! #DEEP

    keep up the good work!

    Amen!!

  • bestttt ever.

  • main point: Everyone dies

  • Diz is soo true..I cnt stop playin it

    .. Love diz poem

  • innnnnTENSE

  • This poem really touched me. I just lost my Mother 3 days ago and before that I lost my aunt a year and a half before. Death is like a stray bullet meaning that death has no name it hits whoever it wants without any notice.

  • She goes in

  • @tyden85 Lol

  • Sister Jackie,AMEN

  • omg...that was so depp and does make me think....i do believe in God but wow...i aint been doin what i should.....

  • Damn Girl.

  • wow. speechless

  • amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • This is amazing!!X

  • That was so intense, I was genuinely left with chills. She came too hard with this. Wow.

  • PHENOMENAL!!!!!!!!!!!

  • i got really scared watching this, i need to repent and turn completely to Christ and surrender to his will

  • That was immense.

  • Just live life

  • She hit this hard. I have to say, the best poem Ive heard in a while

  • @shawtythug65 yes mam yu said it

  • wow...you can't even watch this video and say you wish someone else was watching it, it's for them, because its for YOU too! No matter who you are its for you...wow

  • The two people that disliked this video must have accidentally hit it because this video is amazing ! :)

  • wow love this peom, its powerful. Keep it up man

  • TRUTH.

  • I have goosebumps on my entire body!!!

  • My whole body has goosebumps.

  • That was so powerful.

    Amen.

  • Wow

  • WoW...that was really deep...life is really short...this was good...makes you think about life and God

  • Wonderful as always...FYI: Love the new look miss lady!

  • one word: RAW

  • Your ignorance committing your suicide!!! Ignorance is not bliss.

  • Love it!

  • That was amazing I am in shock. I do spoken word and that just encouraged me and inspired me to go harder with my poems. Be encouraged woman of GOD!

  • oh man this poem is POWERFUL...makes you want to repent with the quickness!!

  • Spit that!!!!

  • Man it is funny how death is nothing but a change of address. Most Christians need to stop fronting like they believe Jesus is coming back. All ways so concerned with the things that Christ said, "take no thoughts for". If we really believe in the words of Christ and follow his teachings, then the best moments of our life should begin when it ends.......

    Please let us readdress our focus on Christ. Cause he is coming for those who look like Love.

  • Im not even 2 minutes into the video and i've got goosebumps!

  • this is powerful.

  • This is a very powerful poem. Came over this when looking up a death metal video. So I was suprised at the ending. Without the religious bit at the end, I would say this poem would have had a much greater effect on me. Why do we have to follow religion to live a good life? If I want to not berlieve in God, but still live a good life, is that a sin? If I don't want to believe in the Bible, does this mean that I'm gonna be, as you put it, the "goose" in God's game of duck duck goose?

  • @bagheaddenham true Christianity is not the bad perception you may have of it. You can still live a good life by society's or your standards but you will die one day. Jesus offers eternal life to any who wants it and he fulfills people in ways the things in this world can't. May God bless you

  • @ADAJ3 Amen....

  • @ADAJ3 I accept that living a bad life is a bad thing, but I think that as soon as you start trying to attach religion onto everything good, its not a selfless thing anymore. People are only gonna do good deeds to get into heaven.

    I am not a religious person. I don't say belief is bad, and anyone who believes in something strongly should be commended for their beliefs. But if I said I'm atheist but live by the rules, will I go to hell (or not to Heaven) if I don't believe?

  • @bagheaddenham I also think you have to consider what is good. Whose standard of good are you following, because we all have a different standard.

  • @bagheaddenham it's not God's game of duck duck Goose its deaths... The price has already been payed for our souls...our acknowledgement of that is what is sought from us... Its all good leading a good life but believe it or not., we wouldn't have life if it wasn't 4 God,its like U had a child and your child grew up became independent and said,i don't have to have a relationship with my mum...but im still a good person... it would hurt you right? Could you imagine how God feels. & still he waits

  • WOW, THIS IS A REAL AS IT GETS. KEEP BLESSING PPL WITH YOUR WORDS SISTER

  • death is playing duck, duck goose, with us ... dang!! astonishing!!

  • thass deep! makes you think about things.........

  • That was amazing!

    [[&allthatjazz]]

  • WOW!!!! this was sooo powerful....life is short

  • Outstanding. Powerful. Did you write this? If so, keep writing! A lot!

  • Wowww! That was powerful!

    We must be ready at all times..

    Glory to God <3

  • :o My mouth is wide open. :D AMEN.

  • Only the good die young is a LIE from hell to make people think that in order to live long they have to be bad. Many people die everyday however when a "good" person dies it stays in your mind longer because of the shock factor.

  • Awesome! The Tree behind her looks like a man with his head down!

  • got chills just watching this

  • O my I'm left speechless.... This is so tru it's crazy I couldn't blink til she was finished, death really doesn't care everyone has a time

  • amazing...

  • Wow this really speaks to me, I didn't think I was going to be this affected by it

  • This is so ironic that I came across this...I've been thinking bout my funeral for the past month now...

  • Yoo thats.... WOW!!! soo true.!

  • That's some good stuff there... *two snaps in the air* to JESUS CHRIST!

  • so tru.. "DEATH IS A JEALOUS FELLOW" wow so tru....

  • wow, that left me speechless

  • I feel what your saying in this poem i loved it

  • love this do true..

  • love this

  • W O W !!!!

  • One of the Realest poets...you tell them girl!

  • This is amazing! Glory to GOD!

  • this is the most powerful thing i've heard in a while.. mostlikely one of the most important things i've ever heard. i'm gonna share this with a lot of people. thank you.

  • wow...

  • she a bad girl, she need to be on tv somewhere! she make u really go deep into yaself for real and think about how u living ya life and what u should change.

  • "death is a jealous fellow. when you fail to think about him the more he remembers who you are..." BOOM!

  • wwwoooooooooooooooow!!

  • I love it keep it up i love her she made me so happy(: <3 :D

  • She is so blessed !! :D

  • boom!

  • BEST POEM I HAVE HEARD IN MY LIFE!

    LOVE IT!

  • jackieeee this is sooo wow!!! i had my friend who was struggling with homosexulity watch your last poem she really was touched she even started tearing up just keep doing wat u r doing for God he truely speaks through you!!! oh and welcome to the natural hair community!!hehe

  • hhmm!!! omjjjjjjjj

  • Wow

  • Today's a good day to die! Galatians 2:20

  • This Scares The Shit Out Of Me But Its A Reality Check For Everyone !!

  • WOWWWW!

  • You don't miss death by a second! When God says it's time.. Poof!! -3

  • really good stuff...kinda sad tho, but i think that was the point...like a wake up call lol

  • whoa.

  • Deeeeeeep. & so very true. Get right now, or get left. Never know when it's too late.

  • WOW... that was VERY POWERFUL and such a sobering topic to think about. More people need to know this.

  • this gasssss... praise GOD.. im too on this 1.. gurl GOD just used u too wake people game up... im still stuck... may GOD continue to use you as an evangelist with poetry...love it...WAKE UP PEOPLE!!!!!!

  • Awesome job, Jackie! We should not boast in sin or about tomorrow as if we know for sure whether or not we will be here. We are not immortal, but instead are all subject to death. We have to repent & live life for Christ so we can be assured of having eternal life.

    James 4:14-15 Yet you do not know what your life will be like tomorrow. You are just a vapor that appears for a little while and then vanishes away. Instead you ought to say, “If the Lord wills, we will live and do this or that.”

  • this was really powerful and alot of people need to hear this

  • DOPE.

  • wow... words to consider. Christ is the choice.

  • Mind-Blowing!!! Repent and turn from your sins and ask Jesus into your heart while you still can breathe!!! All sin in this world is not worth burning in Hell for eternity!~

    to God be the glory...Loved it Jackie!!

  • Yessssss!

  • Woooooww!!

  • 1 of the Best Poem Ive Eva heard...eva

  • wow and wow again

  • Amen. 10 out of 10 die, get right with your Maker today - repent and trust in Jesus Christ the risen Savior and Lord. Jesus, who is fully God and fully sinless man, died in your place on the cross, He took the punishment you deserve for your sin against God, and rose on the third day so you be forgiven and have eternal life. Repent (turn from sin) and trust in Jesus alone while you still have life.

  • WHAT!!!!!! WOWWWWWW.....a def wake up call! whew! Praise God for this!

  • MAGNIFICENT

  • *snap* *snap* *snap* *snap* your fingers

  • speechlees...#thatisall

  • WOW THAT WAS HOT

  • wow

  • wow amazing video

  • Awesome!!! Keep speaking the truth. The world needs to hear it!!

  • Preach!

  • Snaps...

  • yo, if people can't SEE after watching this...

  • Powerful and deep poem sista!

  • wow i'm speachless...

  • Wow

  • AMAZING!

  • the "good" usually dont go to heaven..get right now with god..before its too late..shes powerful..i love it!

  • WOWZERS!!!!!!!!!!

  • yikes!!! that was ova deep!!

  • Luv it!!

  • wow,  very convicting and thought provoking!